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From: SmosySmosalot
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  • U sound too propper to be rappin' bruh. No Offense. But atleast u posted a video response instead of commentin it like them other female dudes did lol.

  • Just checked out this video because of the title =] Nice song

  • u got some nice verse writting... but i think if u punch ur words youl sound strong instead of weak or soft....

  • OMG U SUCK

  • man not bad but you need to learn to wrap your words around the beat so it sounds more natural tweak your flow a bit to smash the beat and youll go far dude

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  • greattt jobbb u shld write more songs about the worlds issues this sounds professional excellent job

  • Love the song, vocals, and flow in this one. But your breathe is audible in between the verses.

  • done very well you killa i subbed to your channel and added you as a freind

  • That was actuially very good well in my oppinion at least

  • nice video, i saw your post on "my chick bad" ... voice sound isnt the best, but that can easily improve... but great lyrics

  • Why the F do you use that white cartoon effect on every single of your movies?

  • this isnt uhh help with ur voice

    but who belives this is ganna happen (2012)

  • Pretty good but i think you need more flow.

  • It's actually GREAT. I think you'll be signed.

  • not bad man, keep it up.

  • good shit boyo,need to work on flow its too etchy you know like monotone and jumpy,but great lyrics and great info on the whole maya predictions

  • keep a constant flow 3:23 u forced the word "progress", other than that it was dope

  • yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it

  • yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it

  • yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it

  • yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it

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  • There's no grit behind this shit. You need to stop reading this shit like its basic poetry and spit it like you give a fuck. Just my opinion.

  • that was pretty good man like some1 else said u just gotta get more emotional

  • sounds too robotic.. try to kinda move away from that straight forward rhythm with vocals. spice it up.

  • @AstrosN08 Education.cure to the incapable.meh

  • You cannot learn from positive comments. That aside, you have strong lyrics but you dont spit fire, you have no emotion when you record, and in a way it feels like you are not attempting to do your best. Practice makes perfect, or so they say. In all, express greater emotion, point blank.

  • People i like him hes got a really big chance

    and if you dont like him stop acting like a dick and don't comment

    Great job!

  • hmm, i was gonna write some long comment trying to give a little good and a little bit of bad comments but i decided to sum it up in this.

    u suck....yea

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  • @Johnston9234 I was going to compose a creative, intelligent and intriguing response but instead I decided to compute the end result into its more simplistic form:

    You du*um*-A*S*S

  • @Johnston9234 I agree

  • Not I wouldn't call smosy the best musician, but without a doubt he is good. Don't worry about the haters who give You (Somsy)low rating because you are an unknown artist. Your music is fine.

  • this was really cool, Smosy! 5 stars!

    Ali:)

  • better then i thought

  • nahhh i think its cool.

  • very cool man, nice job.

  • wow really good much better then what i ever will be able to do yeah dont listen to the haters they just say that because its better then what they can do

  • thats actually not bad. dont listen to the haters. keep goin! (: x

  • why does this have two stars? ignorance is bliss, don't try and take it away, people will cry lol.

  • this guy is is pretty good,

  • i like what you were trying to do, but u just plain suck at rapping. im better than this at least and i wudnt dare try to act all good.

  • I like this, like it a lot

  • listen u are fuckin terrible give up singing u are makin a fool out of urself

  • nice job (Y)

  • this is gay hahah, give it upp !

  • meh. :\

  • :) i love it! soooo good!

  • LAME !

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