U sound too propper to be rappin' bruh. No Offense. But atleast u posted a video response instead of commentin it like them other female dudes did lol.
man not bad but you need to learn to wrap your words around the beat so it sounds more natural tweak your flow a bit to smash the beat and youll go far dude
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
You cannot learn from positive comments. That aside, you have strong lyrics but you dont spit fire, you have no emotion when you record, and in a way it feels like you are not attempting to do your best. Practice makes perfect, or so they say. In all, express greater emotion, point blank.
@Johnston9234 I was going to compose a creative, intelligent and intriguing response but instead I decided to compute the end result into its more simplistic form:
Not I wouldn't call smosy the best musician, but without a doubt he is good. Don't worry about the haters who give You (Somsy)low rating because you are an unknown artist. Your music is fine.
wow really good much better then what i ever will be able to do yeah dont listen to the haters they just say that because its better then what they can do
U sound too propper to be rappin' bruh. No Offense. But atleast u posted a video response instead of commentin it like them other female dudes did lol.
YungSavagex0 4 months ago
Just checked out this video because of the title =] Nice song
MrTennisMenace 11 months ago
u got some nice verse writting... but i think if u punch ur words youl sound strong instead of weak or soft....
elitexxstunna 1 year ago
OMG U SUCK
WatchOutForMe1000 1 year ago
man not bad but you need to learn to wrap your words around the beat so it sounds more natural tweak your flow a bit to smash the beat and youll go far dude
Jmoneypsc 1 year ago
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snipedroach 1 year ago
greattt jobbb u shld write more songs about the worlds issues this sounds professional excellent job
redhotchilipeppers96 1 year ago
Love the song, vocals, and flow in this one. But your breathe is audible in between the verses.
DeceptiveSTAR 1 year ago
done very well you killa i subbed to your channel and added you as a freind
noxx456 1 year ago
That was actuially very good well in my oppinion at least
whoaitswhoa66 1 year ago
nice video, i saw your post on "my chick bad" ... voice sound isnt the best, but that can easily improve... but great lyrics
TheAutocraze 1 year ago
Why the F do you use that white cartoon effect on every single of your movies?
HyperCamJonna 1 year ago
this isnt uhh help with ur voice
but who belives this is ganna happen (2012)
jet2050 1 year ago
Pretty good but i think you need more flow.
RiseORFall3N 1 year ago
It's actually GREAT. I think you'll be signed.
bellboy1996 1 year ago
not bad man, keep it up.
DarkNSF 1 year ago
good shit boyo,need to work on flow its too etchy you know like monotone and jumpy,but great lyrics and great info on the whole maya predictions
toocool2401 1 year ago
keep a constant flow 3:23 u forced the word "progress", other than that it was dope
jluiscool 1 year ago
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
cuzzimkoollikethat 1 year ago
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
cuzzimkoollikethat 1 year ago
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
cuzzimkoollikethat 1 year ago
yall haters well shut up understand thes lryices they make sence retards it all happens this shit is real stop being so gay about it it all happens + hes a good singer k so stop talking shit about it
cuzzimkoollikethat 1 year ago
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SoggyFrenchToast 1 year ago
There's no grit behind this shit. You need to stop reading this shit like its basic poetry and spit it like you give a fuck. Just my opinion.
MunnyBag5 1 year ago
that was pretty good man like some1 else said u just gotta get more emotional
410MaXiMuS 1 year ago
sounds too robotic.. try to kinda move away from that straight forward rhythm with vocals. spice it up.
skaplis 1 year ago
@AstrosN08 Education.cure to the incapable.meh
Simply1Pro 1 year ago
You cannot learn from positive comments. That aside, you have strong lyrics but you dont spit fire, you have no emotion when you record, and in a way it feels like you are not attempting to do your best. Practice makes perfect, or so they say. In all, express greater emotion, point blank.
Simply1Pro 1 year ago
People i like him hes got a really big chance
and if you dont like him stop acting like a dick and don't comment
Great job!
jonmonroe3663 1 year ago
hmm, i was gonna write some long comment trying to give a little good and a little bit of bad comments but i decided to sum it up in this.
u suck....yea
Johnston9234 1 year ago
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Simply1Pro 1 year ago
@Johnston9234 I was going to compose a creative, intelligent and intriguing response but instead I decided to compute the end result into its more simplistic form:
You du*um*-A*S*S
Simply1Pro 1 year ago
@Johnston9234 I agree
QuickProfits 1 year ago
Not I wouldn't call smosy the best musician, but without a doubt he is good. Don't worry about the haters who give You (Somsy)low rating because you are an unknown artist. Your music is fine.
TrueBhishm 1 year ago 2
this was really cool, Smosy! 5 stars!
Ali:)
AllisonBrustofski 1 year ago 2
better then i thought
musicrox6809 1 year ago
nahhh i think its cool.
Jclemensuk 1 year ago
very cool man, nice job.
FLAMEOFSOMETHING 1 year ago 2
wow really good much better then what i ever will be able to do yeah dont listen to the haters they just say that because its better then what they can do
TheLily298 1 year ago 2
thats actually not bad. dont listen to the haters. keep goin! (: x
alicia246642 1 year ago
why does this have two stars? ignorance is bliss, don't try and take it away, people will cry lol.
HORNGEN4 1 year ago
this guy is is pretty good,
democat73 1 year ago 2
i like what you were trying to do, but u just plain suck at rapping. im better than this at least and i wudnt dare try to act all good.
blakesterzero 1 year ago
I like this, like it a lot
MegaMelinda123 1 year ago 2
listen u are fuckin terrible give up singing u are makin a fool out of urself
patchfuk 1 year ago
nice job (Y)
Pauolo101 1 year ago 2
this is gay hahah, give it upp !
TheLukiieBoii 2 years ago
meh. :\
nbsf888 2 years ago
:) i love it! soooo good!
alwaysjibbin23 2 years ago 2
LAME !
pwner48 2 years ago