SOROYA!!! I love it! It made me tear up because I miss hearing you play and sing. It's great, good job. I'm happy to see your still an amazing artist. Love you!
Really great, catchy chorus and I liked your vocal delivery. Has possible commercial possibilities. I could almost hear it on a Seals and Crofts or America record.
The "hello" thing in the first verse has really been overdone in pop by now and I would urge you to rewrite that verse.
Also, instead of "last night was so long," try "the night was so long." I think it would fit better rhythmically and add more atmospheric feel to the line.
Damn! You got some long forearms!
wildmanchris200 2 years ago
On a scale of one to awesome, this sweet jam is at the very least super hotness.
joshadescomedy 2 years ago
SOROYA!!! I love it! It made me tear up because I miss hearing you play and sing. It's great, good job. I'm happy to see your still an amazing artist. Love you!
YourHighness05 3 years ago
Really great, catchy chorus and I liked your vocal delivery. Has possible commercial possibilities. I could almost hear it on a Seals and Crofts or America record.
The "hello" thing in the first verse has really been overdone in pop by now and I would urge you to rewrite that verse.
Also, instead of "last night was so long," try "the night was so long." I think it would fit better rhythmically and add more atmospheric feel to the line.
robibm2003 3 years ago
What a beautiful girl with a beautiful voice.
MFAperformance 3 years ago