Excellent enunciation, and the switch to a conversational tone for the latter half of the poem was a clever touch. I like the consonant play, but I like the vowel play even more. It's always more subtle and too often overlooked.
I think humans tend to flock for better or for worse. I think if we are exposed to enough viewpoints it helps give people a real context to judge society. The potential for communication nowadays is really exciting, but often it seems mass culture enforces uniformity as much as anything.
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Lockey2ska 2 years ago
Hypocricy is annoying, isn't it? So hard to escape, too.
ybtpr 2 years ago
Infinity is...
jantheempress 3 years ago
Pointless.Lies
mickoooo123 4 years ago
I write the greatest prose in the world.
Clause02 4 years ago
you do know what it does to me when a perfectly normal sounding voice suddenly turns twangy, dontchyanow?
LOVED IT!
hunniebee173 4 years ago
"It just make me sad to see people who are obssessed with material things"........
No it doesnt.
mickoooo123 4 years ago
are you saying that it doesn't make YOU sad, 'cause it makes me sad
iamjackscolin 4 years ago
It doesnt make me sad as it happens.
But I was saying it doesnt make you sad.
mickoooo123 4 years ago
fair enough, I won't judge you if it doesn't make you sad, but I assure you, it makes me sad.
sad, sad, sad
iamjackscolin 4 years ago
I am sure that it doesn't.Your assurances are not to be believed.
mickoooo123 4 years ago
This is really cool. I especially like how you emphasized "exactly five minutes". Good stuff!
hatethestate 4 years ago
Dude! This must have been before my time, because I missed it the first time. That was amazing!!
Luke12000 4 years ago
oh man, its hard for me to get into poetry thats on my second language.
besides that - nice man, nice. very nice. especially the ending.
BellaTheHappyLoser 4 years ago
Excellent enunciation, and the switch to a conversational tone for the latter half of the poem was a clever touch. I like the consonant play, but I like the vowel play even more. It's always more subtle and too often overlooked.
azrienoch 4 years ago
Very well put.
Was the title a Shakespeare reference?
"Life's but a walking shadow ... it is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing."
I think humans tend to flock for better or for worse. I think if we are exposed to enough viewpoints it helps give people a real context to judge society. The potential for communication nowadays is really exciting, but often it seems mass culture enforces uniformity as much as anything.
Anyway peace
MackzeKnife 4 years ago