Brothers in Arms - (Halo Reach Machinima) Episode 6 - Nespaw

[Fruitpumper2000]

I hate to say this but, I am starting to think that even aces acting is better the nespaws.

[TransformersMan423]

@Fruitpumper2000 seriously, Matt?

[Thedeoradude]

But all that said, on a lighter note, i like the music from the battle, where's that from?

[TransformersMan423]

@Thedeoradude Halo Reach Soundtrack, Oni Sword Base, i think its the second or third track in the score.

[Thedeoradude]

Are your mics made of potatoes?

Writing needs work, it needs a lot of work, try to throw yourself into your charicters more too, it just all comes off as horribly flat otherwise

[TransformersMan423]

@Thedeoradude This is not a professional machinima. Its a project that me and my friends worked on. There is no way i can afford professional equipment. Not every machinima is gonna be the next red vs blue. So do mind showing a little respect for people's projects and don't be so narcissist.

[Thedeoradude]

@TransformersMan423 i'm offering help, i mean you're charicters aren't reflecting what they're seeing.

For example, when the pink guy rolls out in front of the others, he just says hello like he's bored, when he should be gloating or something of the like, mabye a bit stretched out and smarmy, not just short and meek.

and all i'm saying is, throw yourself into the charicters more, try to trigger what the charicter is thinking instead of just reading the script like a book offhandedly

[TransformersMan423]

@Thedeoradude He actually says more but he said it really quiet, and I dont think he was in the mood to redo it.

[Thedeoradude]

@TransformersMan423 also, this is bugging me more then it should, but narcissist is when someone thinks so much of themselves they're convinced that they're amazing and insist on things like putting their face on things or something of the like

Look mate, i just want to help, nothing against you, but i'm OCD and it's my mentality that, no matter what you're doing, and why you're doing it if you're not out doing your best and open to suggestion for improvement, you're just not doing it right

[TransformersMan423]

@Thedeoradude I understand, and i'm open to constructive critisism, but i just dont have those resources and the time to make it professional. What you see and hear is what you get.

[Thedeoradude]

@TransformersMan423 Well that's fine, i suppose i am a little overzealous, and i'm sorry if i came off the wrong way.

Still, if ever you want writing advice or some neat tools, just PM me, i'd be happy to help

cheers mate

[TransformersMan423]

@Thedeoradude Absolutly.