Very nice, but you need much better sound quality to do justice to your playing. Lindos Electronics are trying to improve Youtube sound with the Minisonic mic kit (I work on the development). Take a look at demos on the Lindoselectronics youtube channel.
Hello fellow musicians and poets(: I'm applying to Berklee College of Music for the semester of Fall 2012 for songwriting & composition. I'd like to know some respective and honest feedback on two of my songs roughly recorded on my page! I will answer questions as well. Please give it a listen and give me some advice on the audition and tips if you have any. Thank you ! :)
Ehh... Not that great, sounds like a clichéd composition that someone who doesn't know much about music theory would write... Slightly reminiscent of iron maiden
@Deathization haha dude, wtf? I really don't think you have any right of speech. Especially when u start calling her ''Slightly reminiscent of iron maiden'' when I decided to check your account and still wasn't able to find ''your sound'' cause the only thing I heard were dual guitars, and standard minor scales going up and down on your guitars while one was an octave higher. So don't start bullshitting on her composition while your just making an fool of yourself. God I hate when people do that
@Frinkendel 1. i said the iron maiden thing because of her tendency to fall into the whole making a melody over the tonic minor chord and then making slight variations over the major 6th and 7th chords as iron maiden does (also, the clansman is a song in particular that this reminds me of but it might just be me)
@Frinkendel 2. there was actually at least 4 intricate-ish guitar parts in both of my videos (which i added a year ago and have grown by MUCH since) and i dont know of any instances where there were "standard minor scales going up and down on [my] guitars while one was an octave higher" in them so please comment on my video(s) to help me better understand your point :) (also the recording quality was preeeetty bad on my videos)
@Frinkendel 3. this piece has a simple melody in the right hand with the left hand playing broken chords under it - the bottom arpeggios are not as thought out as they could/should be, because most of them violate the parallel 5ths rule and she mimicked the left hand part from chopin's revolutionary etude a few times (not purposefully im sure). And the bulk of the piece is doing the iron maiden thing i said earlier
i hope this better illustrates and validates my point of view for you
@Deathization smh lol another hater on youtueb..thats why people go to berklee so they can become better musicians. if she was already knowledgable with her craft she wouldnt need to go there, huh?
Now imagine you are a professional pianist. What would you do different? To me, two of the most important things in good compositions (besides a catchy melody) are stretching out some of the voicings (chopin) and trying not to play too much in one spot. Even if the chords are changing, staying in one register too long can get boring.
By the way I liked it. Just giving some input for what I think would make it even better.
Hey, im gonna audition i was wondering if you could give me some advice, look at my video of my original composition, i posted it as a video response. Also i was wondering if they ask you for the papers of your compositions. Im also applying for film scoring, hope to see you there, greeting from mexico!! and thanks for any help
My big dream was to go to this college. At the time I graduated high school, Berklee just opened Film Score as a major.
But...
I didn't have the money, the "expertise," or... the money! lol! Anyways, I still have fun as an "amateur" composer. Feel free to check out my crappy music on my channel :)
@JamesCornelisonMusic I am just trying to get people to understand how unethical Berklee's business agenda is..look at what i sAy on the video called "berklee allstar quartet part 1"
berklee requires that you play an instrument no matter what, even if your only doin music bussiness. the firtst few semesters you take lessons on your main instrument. then you pick your major
I know this was four months ago. But what the hell.
You need to perform a composition of yours on your instrument of choice. I think the maximum duration is three minutes, but I'd check their website just in case.
For the interview that follows the audition, bring a fat portfolio and be prepared to answer some questions about musicianship and commitment! Wow them! :)
To the person who composed this lovely piece, it's exquisite; your playing is also very lyrical, if you don't mind me saying!
It sounds Morricone-esque to me. I obviously don't mean his sweeping western scores but quieter moments in his soundtracks. Kind of like Morricone filtered through modern Japanese classical composition.
GPA- Grade Point Average from your highschool. Most colleges look at that, but not this one. No I don't think they require you to play anything in particular
They require like a 2.0 or something lol... ummm they might require a blues... and improv over something. It depends what genre ur going into (jazz, pop). That's my very limited knowledge of Berklee lol
if they didnt take u after playing sumthing like that they gotta be nuts i felt like i was in a scene from a final fantasy game lol good job n u sexy too damn
The audition is about showing your skill not about show off with a beautiful simple piece. She probably did amazing on the ear tests and sight reading to get in.
doenen... she got in. and i am glad she did. mind you that she COMPOSED this piece. to be able to compose such a piece with so much emotions and character, it sure isn't easy. its sure talent :)
i kinda agree with both doenen AND you, because it's true that music is not just about technique, but i guess when you think about how this was for a college audition... some people might expect a bit more.
it's kind of like listening to yiruma and saying yeah, his pieces are nice but sometimes you wish they could be a bit more complicated technically?
i played a much harder piece for my audition. but that could have just been me being stupid and paranoid..
I think this would be more than enough to get in. A beautiful composition and she played it beautifully. You could play something more technical, but at the end of the day isn't music's purpose to be pleasant to the ear?
A beautiful piece of music i have no criticism. Don't ever stop playing, those who can connect with music have a gift and a blessing unlike any other, one of the greatest things in this world and you have it and no-one no matter how talented can make your talent and accomplishment any less great, you have a true ability and i would love to hear more of your music.
very expressive, nice job, I can tell that you are classically trained, my style is somewhat similar to yours, if you get a chance, check it out at soundclick(dot)com /PianoSoulos, I am on the front page of the Classical Charts, good luck to you!
Hi Dione! This is Catherine (MTS) from Amex.... Congrats on getting into Berklee! Must be your dream and one step closer to achieving your dream! ALL THE BEST!!!
You write beautiful music. Someday, I hope to write something as wonderful as the pieces you have created. And congragulations on getting into Berklee.
thanks for your comments. am waiting for results still... Improv was quite tough during the auditions so am hoping for the best. and yes i'm fr singapore :)
nice.. you played it very well..
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Very nice, but you need much better sound quality to do justice to your playing. Lindos Electronics are trying to improve Youtube sound with the Minisonic mic kit (I work on the development). Take a look at demos on the Lindoselectronics youtube channel.
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DID YOU GET IN?
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This is really good. You should post it on the Musical Overture site so more conductors and recruiters see it.
tblowry 6 months ago in playlist Inspiring
why does it remind me of avatar?
chungmanchang 8 months ago
@chungmanchang i hear it! lol
MarqLouieIVI 5 months ago
No chance.
Vesivian 10 months ago
Wow. Really great ideas here. You've got a great left hand, and great timing. Good stuff!
Nateisbored 1 year ago
Think this is rather beautiful and you have a great talent. :)
Neasha177 1 year ago
You must be a Ludovico Einaudi fan! If not, listen to his music. It would really inspire you! :)
loveistheessence 1 year ago
great stuff.
jaimepaullamb 1 year ago
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Did you pass?
Vesivian 1 year ago
did you pass the audition?
natacrow 1 year ago
did you pass to berklee?
natacrow 1 year ago
Your tones are very whole, thats important to writing good music.
TheSingingCello 1 year ago
ITunes? Please put out an album and win a Grammy or something this is fantastic.
caidenjohnsonpoetry 1 year ago
so did you get in?
amazingvideoman2 1 year ago 7
the audio quality is terrible, in terms of recording...
therefrainfringe 1 year ago
this is VERY goood i hope you made it in to berklee :)
jessiemusicfreak 1 year ago
this is very beautiful
igordz 1 year ago
midi piano ??
segitary 1 year ago
gave me chills!
GarethDrummerboy 1 year ago
Very clever! And I enjoyed listening to it which is the most Important part.
claytonccollins 1 year ago
Ehh... Not that great, sounds like a clichéd composition that someone who doesn't know much about music theory would write... Slightly reminiscent of iron maiden
Deathization 1 year ago
@Deathization haha dude, wtf? I really don't think you have any right of speech. Especially when u start calling her ''Slightly reminiscent of iron maiden'' when I decided to check your account and still wasn't able to find ''your sound'' cause the only thing I heard were dual guitars, and standard minor scales going up and down on your guitars while one was an octave higher. So don't start bullshitting on her composition while your just making an fool of yourself. God I hate when people do that
Frinkendel 1 year ago
@Frinkendel 1. i said the iron maiden thing because of her tendency to fall into the whole making a melody over the tonic minor chord and then making slight variations over the major 6th and 7th chords as iron maiden does (also, the clansman is a song in particular that this reminds me of but it might just be me)
Deathization 1 year ago
@Frinkendel 2. there was actually at least 4 intricate-ish guitar parts in both of my videos (which i added a year ago and have grown by MUCH since) and i dont know of any instances where there were "standard minor scales going up and down on [my] guitars while one was an octave higher" in them so please comment on my video(s) to help me better understand your point :) (also the recording quality was preeeetty bad on my videos)
Deathization 1 year ago
@Frinkendel 3. this piece has a simple melody in the right hand with the left hand playing broken chords under it - the bottom arpeggios are not as thought out as they could/should be, because most of them violate the parallel 5ths rule and she mimicked the left hand part from chopin's revolutionary etude a few times (not purposefully im sure). And the bulk of the piece is doing the iron maiden thing i said earlier
i hope this better illustrates and validates my point of view for you
Deathization 1 year ago
@Deathization smh lol another hater on youtueb..thats why people go to berklee so they can become better musicians. if she was already knowledgable with her craft she wouldnt need to go there, huh?
MCalixte89 1 year ago 3
just great
TommyDai1 1 year ago
Berklee is a scam.
Whatisthescore 1 year ago
@Whatisthescore how is berklee a scam?
ex6arch6angel6 1 year ago
Congratulations on 36,544 views! You have more views than several eminent living composers. Good luck in your career.
Composerland 1 year ago
I'd love to hear a more polished and pro recording of this. Very lovely composition.
funkster007 1 year ago
ooooooo nice chords in the beginging. They add a lot of interest the melody
Sk1nnyV1nny22 1 year ago
But, he's just a little kid!
And it just doesn't matter...does it?
Beautiful.
forrykid 1 year ago
did you get i??
ricardoestrella11 1 year ago
beautiful....watch mine? :)
amazingvideoman2 1 year ago
siiick. now lets add some bass and drums and turn up the energy. i could hear this picking up and turning into a hiromi-esk fusion ballad
kmurphy1527 1 year ago
Now imagine you are a professional pianist. What would you do different? To me, two of the most important things in good compositions (besides a catchy melody) are stretching out some of the voicings (chopin) and trying not to play too much in one spot. Even if the chords are changing, staying in one register too long can get boring.
By the way I liked it. Just giving some input for what I think would make it even better.
robertslistening 1 year ago 2
good job how is the school?
Cryosithify 1 year ago
The chord progressions and the very serene melodyline remind me of some of Rachel Portman's work
Jordheden 1 year ago
i love your aong! it's awesome!
MissMocha87 1 year ago
Wow this is amazing!!!
Alliciatwilight 1 year ago
i fell asleep
ryancoleman3 1 year ago
Its very good would be better with an orchestra put to a film. Well done.!
rjberman25 1 year ago
is this for scholorship?
bcmrcool 1 year ago
Awesome. Did you receive any scholarship? What are the job prospects like after graduating from Berklee?
jazzmatik 1 year ago
nuthn bad im just askn. u did a great job!!!!!!
FuturisticBeatMaker 1 year ago
does it call foe all the head movement
FuturisticBeatMaker 1 year ago
I have songs in my head but I cant get them out.
Zerofire18 1 year ago
very good i can hear a lot of japanese influence :)
kcmasta911 2 years ago 14
beautiful
WelcomeToTheBeat 2 years ago
Hey, im gonna audition i was wondering if you could give me some advice, look at my video of my original composition, i posted it as a video response. Also i was wondering if they ask you for the papers of your compositions. Im also applying for film scoring, hope to see you there, greeting from mexico!! and thanks for any help
alecemusic 2 years ago
My big dream was to go to this college. At the time I graduated high school, Berklee just opened Film Score as a major.
But...
I didn't have the money, the "expertise," or... the money! lol! Anyways, I still have fun as an "amateur" composer. Feel free to check out my crappy music on my channel :)
jeremyfrancis 2 years ago
im 13 and i want to go to berklee so bad right now lol
CCChhRRRiiZZZ 2 years ago
@CCChhRRRiiZZZ don't go there. It is a scam and will not give you what you are looking for. They only want your money.
Whatisthescore 2 years ago
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Anolra 2 years ago
Where on earth did you find that information?
Anolra 2 years ago
@Whatisthescore ive definitly heard this a few times before and i really wana go ther so like are u just pullin that outa your ass or ...?
JamesCornelisonMusic 2 years ago
@JamesCornelisonMusic I am just trying to get people to understand how unethical Berklee's business agenda is..look at what i sAy on the video called "berklee allstar quartet part 1"
Whatisthescore 2 years ago
how long have you been playing?
Guampanda6 2 years ago 3
mindblowing
TommyDai1 2 years ago
No joke this is in my top 5 of favorite piano compositions.
Rejekt313 2 years ago
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this is so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nabilahamirruddin 2 years ago
Very pretty composition.
morechronicthansonic 2 years ago
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asdfasdfasdf444 2 years ago
wow,you are very talented
luigiperso 2 years ago
you have to have an instrument no matter what
SNAZiiGiiRLS 2 years ago 2
what about for a songwriter? what audition is that lol? a portfolio maybe but thats it?
KARINinLaLaLand 2 years ago
berklee requires that you play an instrument no matter what, even if your only doin music bussiness. the firtst few semesters you take lessons on your main instrument. then you pick your major
mariahcareybigfan1 2 years ago
I know this was four months ago. But what the hell.
You need to perform a composition of yours on your instrument of choice. I think the maximum duration is three minutes, but I'd check their website just in case.
For the interview that follows the audition, bring a fat portfolio and be prepared to answer some questions about musicianship and commitment! Wow them! :)
To the person who composed this lovely piece, it's exquisite; your playing is also very lyrical, if you don't mind me saying!
TheChipster91 2 years ago
soo they dont look for songwriters huh? just composition of instruments not words
KARINinLaLaLand 2 years ago
You can audition for voice. The voice is an instrument, believe it or not. They do want songwriters. Composers and songwriters are the same thing.
TheChipster91 2 years ago
It sounds Morricone-esque to me. I obviously don't mean his sweeping western scores but quieter moments in his soundtracks. Kind of like Morricone filtered through modern Japanese classical composition.
HalSamuel 2 years ago
I hope to see your composition in a film, some years later ...
Your composition make me dream.
the1winter1man1 2 years ago
Berklee is the best place for pop and rock musicians PERIOD.
Gongchime 2 years ago
and Jazz
parejopinto 2 years ago
Dude.. this is righteous.. you are beyond awesome
McKintionary 2 years ago
what piece is this?
Babyshaybird 2 years ago
Read the title - Original Compostition.
ibanezbassgrl 2 years ago
so did she get in?
jeremyfrancis 2 years ago 2
u make me want to hug u
capturedevice62 2 years ago
LOSER
Belovedo3 2 years ago
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i would have sex with you
ryanbstory 2 years ago
Well i know that but there has to be a certain grade! Usually its between 6 & 8
Edlf92 2 years ago
did you get an scholarship for composition
chevito7 2 years ago
wow this is beautiful Im a singer but I want to learn how to play piano it sounds gorgeous.
lurk11593 2 years ago
what grade is required for this college?
Edlf92 2 years ago
the grade of creativity
unibomber111 2 years ago 13
HA! Nice answer. And it's totally true. Berklee doesn't pay too much attention to your GPA.
Suzanne513 2 years ago
whats a GPA? do they have any requirements like for example: bach invention numer 13. ?
Matelad 2 years ago
GPA- Grade Point Average from your highschool. Most colleges look at that, but not this one. No I don't think they require you to play anything in particular
Suzanne513 2 years ago
it depends upon what instrument you plan on playing there. For instance, I am applying for guitar, so they require you to play
1) a blues progression
2) solo over a blues progresssion
3) a song of your choice 3-5 mins long
4) sight-read a piece (15 mins of preparation)
5) pitch, ear test (you play back something they play you)
I think there's one other part but I can't remember
08MXZX 2 years ago
They require like a 2.0 or something lol... ummm they might require a blues... and improv over something. It depends what genre ur going into (jazz, pop). That's my very limited knowledge of Berklee lol
baiken22 2 years ago
@Suzanne513 I got in to Berklee with a 2.1 GPA :)
deutschbabii86 1 year ago
reminds me of Ecstasy of Gold
excellent
ISCHNIK 3 years ago
you have a beautiful talent girl
darkizzia1990 3 years ago
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u're really good (:!
Yeladito 3 years ago 2
reminds me of Joe Hisashi work
beautiful piano melody
salin08 3 years ago
That was amazing, I really loved it. You are a true musician.
iDoRkedUpDorky 3 years ago
if they didnt take u after playing sumthing like that they gotta be nuts i felt like i was in a scene from a final fantasy game lol good job n u sexy too damn
JaFFyBaBY718 3 years ago
Yeah, I'm not sure, but there seems to be some Nobuo Uematsu influence :)
Wesenlund1991 2 years ago
I totally see that dude thats exactly what i was thinking but maybe not. still this reminds me COMPLETELY of all of his music. good call.
asdfasdfasdf444 2 years ago
Nice composition.
dneuens 3 years ago
I enjoyed it.
SonGotenEX 3 years ago
Im gonna audition for berklee...
Has anybody gotten in? what is the standard like?
++ can you play more than one song? because i would like to show them me playing guitar + piano..
thanks
20TonyMontana08 3 years ago
You have to play one. unless you like sing while you play guitar or piano.
AJest3r 3 years ago
dude.. beautiful music, and smokin hott!! nice!!
not2getto 3 years ago
she wrote it herself? shes got a commercial ear, and a brilliant music career ahead of her
to u complainers..sounds lovely to me and well paced..what you want ,the warsaw concerto ?
eclecticfire73 3 years ago 3
The audition is about showing your skill not about show off with a beautiful simple piece. She probably did amazing on the ear tests and sight reading to get in.
Deathyman 3 years ago
doenen... she got in. and i am glad she did. mind you that she COMPOSED this piece. to be able to compose such a piece with so much emotions and character, it sure isn't easy. its sure talent :)
great piece!
-LeB-
lebby02 3 years ago
Pretty piece :)
Did it get you in?
doenen 3 years ago
they are fucking idiots if they didn't grab her let alone give her a scholarship
Swamy456 3 years ago
I don't mean to come across as offensive but I expected Berklee's standards to be way higher. Maybe I've been watching too many Hiromi vids.
I like the composition, I really do, I was just expecting a higher technical difficulty level.
doenen 3 years ago
doenen ! music is not just about techniques!
simple songs with great emotions can be great too
MacauJacko 3 years ago 3
i kinda agree with both doenen AND you, because it's true that music is not just about technique, but i guess when you think about how this was for a college audition... some people might expect a bit more.
it's kind of like listening to yiruma and saying yeah, his pieces are nice but sometimes you wish they could be a bit more complicated technically?
i played a much harder piece for my audition. but that could have just been me being stupid and paranoid..
techn0fr3ak 3 years ago
I think this would be more than enough to get in. A beautiful composition and she played it beautifully. You could play something more technical, but at the end of the day isn't music's purpose to be pleasant to the ear?
MesaBoogieLonestar 3 years ago
mee too,
i was in for a little more dynamic, technical difficulty, and well, just "smack in the face" finger skill.
glasspig 3 years ago
That almost made me cry, good job. Wow 5/5
LocktLonehart 3 years ago
this is an inspiring piece!! It reminds me of the beatiful paintings in the background..
drizzthj 3 years ago
ahh you berklee students making us feel bad about ourselves again.....
Swamy456 3 years ago
lol, what do you mean by that swamy?
James0945 3 years ago
Thanks for the goosebumbs...I too wish to attend Berklee one day.
cantinman23 3 years ago
sounds like video game music.
kangor44 3 years ago
Outstanding. Great variations on the opening theme, yet maintaining a cohesiveness throughout the whole composition.
XposedNerve 3 years ago
Amazing! You inspire me!
VictorianArts 3 years ago
A beautiful piece of music i have no criticism. Don't ever stop playing, those who can connect with music have a gift and a blessing unlike any other, one of the greatest things in this world and you have it and no-one no matter how talented can make your talent and accomplishment any less great, you have a true ability and i would love to hear more of your music.
Dave41264 3 years ago
Generic, but well composed. Congratulations on getting into Berklee.
ChathamShakespeare 3 years ago
great
MusicianWil 3 years ago
great .. iam playing piano and composing too .. and i totally like your style.
dessinger 3 years ago
you are amazing.
shernga 3 years ago
Oh my God... Dione.... its me! Ed!
I saw these videos of you AGES ago... I had no idea it was you until I just watched them again.
pacificguitarist 3 years ago
Sounds like music from Final Fantasy... but I do like it alot...
pirat024 3 years ago 2
Nice piece adn well played. I think maybe you laboured the main theme a bit much though.
simnos1 3 years ago
Excellent!
earthrockery 3 years ago
absolutely beautiful, I can imagine this in a movie.
SarahLeeAnn 3 years ago
I liked it. I'm also a composer
guzmanvoip 3 years ago
You are absolutely brilliant
JPaulDiLucci 3 years ago
I;ve listened to your stuff and I am very impressed you would make a very good film composer
Sorashikari 3 years ago
Film scoring? Thats what I want to do. Im sure your reach your goal. Execellent.
Kalen1457 3 years ago
how hard is it to get accepted to berklee?
i'm thinking about applying there and doing something with guitar or bass
days4phoenix 3 years ago
i love it ... welldone
zee0707 3 years ago
gotta love dorian.
powerchord89 3 years ago
very expressive, nice job, I can tell that you are classically trained, my style is somewhat similar to yours, if you get a chance, check it out at soundclick(dot)com /PianoSoulos, I am on the front page of the Classical Charts, good luck to you!
BRDavis2007 4 years ago
absolutely beautiful!!
LykeOMGitsJess 4 years ago
woah nice.
did anyone said sg has got no talent.
ziyinggg 4 years ago
so beautiful music!!
did u make sheets of this music? coz i'd like to play it ^^
LameForGosuAcc 4 years ago
not bad but i hope u will be more creative . .
p4q4nn 4 years ago
very well done, sounds great. Berklee is my first college choice (I play bass) and I hope I get accepted too.
hobofriend70 4 years ago
Hi Dione! This is Catherine (MTS) from Amex.... Congrats on getting into Berklee! Must be your dream and one step closer to achieving your dream! ALL THE BEST!!!
thanantosis 4 years ago
Berklee looks forward to having you.
My name is Word. I'm not too hard to find at the school. I'll be around.
Peace.
wordicus 4 years ago
You write beautiful music. Someday, I hope to write something as wonderful as the pieces you have created. And congragulations on getting into Berklee.
ItzaKookie 4 years ago
congrats!
xCrestfallen 4 years ago
Hi, just to share some great news. I've been accepted into Berklee for May 2008. Hurray! Thanks for all the kind encouragements and well-wishes. :)
dionetan 4 years ago
That was aswsome like your other peices. You had better get in! :)
DyeHard93 4 years ago
great job! did you get in??
remaerd89 4 years ago
thanks for your comments. am waiting for results still... Improv was quite tough during the auditions so am hoping for the best. and yes i'm fr singapore :)
dionetan 4 years ago
Nicely done. Very well recorded. Sounds really good online. Can't wait to hear your other pieces.
powurr 4 years ago