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  • check out my channel, just so you know songs arent mastered because my recording shit isnt in yet. subscribe!!

  • Check me out I rap!

  • @CrazyFrazy01 how many muthafuckin times are you goin to post tha same shit......

  • ar-dizzle fa shizzle my nizzel off the hizzle drizzle. XD

  • Can i use this for a video ill gve u and interscope the credit

  • can i use this in a rap ill give u all the credit

  • Can i use this in a video ill give u all the credit

  • may i use this in a rap on my page ill give u al the credit

  • My cool down music for today- beautiful.

  • Stop posting text Raps or lil waynes going to remix this song with them!

  • Official instrumental on my page... check it out guys

    /watch?v=55C4DxRAaug

  • Better forget your past, better get out fast, letters in my trash,

    If your car has no brakes then of course your gonna crash

    The face that you have in this place is gonna be like an ace at the top of a race

    Better have a little wit about your bit or your gonna have an epileptic fit in this s**t

    Time to roll up, sorry for the wait, but this city is closed up, because of racist hate

    discrimination of a nation time to back down on this patient, If i die young make my song sung

  • ii stoped tryin i continued on 2 keep my momma from dien sheyll b okay god will let her another day its not time for her to go any way she needs us we need her weyl b a family forever even if were not tegether are life carys on light like a feather were a family of peace but sometimes we dont always get a full nite of sleep once we get down its all bad nobody really gets mad its all sad but hey i feel god callin 2 me i gotta leave my sister gonna lose her mind iof she lives with out me..........

  • by the time you hear this i wouldve already dissapeared my actions and felonies already ended my career my family and empotions already got me down to here i wish i wouldve waited but since i didnt im kinda hated no protection im lucky i didnt get any infections god believes in me and will accept on a few acceptions but sine i fell god doesnt forgive us he sends us 2 hell were burnin now weyll be crust then our skinned our burnt im surprised we havent turned into dust yet

  • slower, softer the darkness overcomes showing the patterns of somber and loneliness to break out of this bottomless, cold hole as I make it my achievement to break out of this abyss make it the anniversary of reaching the summit telling all the haters to shove it but all the people who followed me, depended on me, prepared to take a bullet for me take my hand as I make it my obligation to fulfill the promise I made of taking the fires of your passions and manipulate, circulate it around this mic

  • wtf... why are there dislikes

  • FUCK! Stop posting shitty text raps! Go learn to rap and record them dammit.

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  • By the time you here this i will have already ended my career. The only reason i came far is because i didn’t live off of fear. I never cried but hey its okay to shed a tear. But have you ever dream to see a million lighters in the air. Too hyper you can call me lil crazy. Put them lighters up getting too dark, its getting kind of hazy. Rapping for my city and by a great song from a rapper:slim shady. Rocking it for my baby. So i wont get lazy.
  • what dress for the winter means

    

  • all i wanna see / is a sea / of bics flickering / so sick that it lit / the wick / of a candlestick / thats wets flickering / tired of all the fighting / igniting the flame / bickering / ready to make my move / but what box / will i stick her in / roses i bought / dying / tried reviving but their withering / to the point the slightest pop / goes non stop / to blown smither reens / but i put my heart into it / show support to building / center beam / when i saw / the bad times entering / knowing

  • why is everybody writing lyrics... if we wanted to know we have google.

  • The skies shine bright with dreams to accomplish,like being a model,actor or music artist.I live my life to serve a purpose,to achieve the impossible,help those who feel worthless,if I break my back in the process I know itll be worth it.Haters gonna hate but their why I'm motivated to keep moving on until my life has faded to achieve what Im meant to,to achieve this greatness,if its not given to you then you have to take it.

  • wake up still feeling my tears all over bed, still thinking of everything you told me before i came to that girl dont temp me dont look right away back at you just ask me what u want I'll give it back at you glad at you ask your mother ask your sister tell them how i treat u like ur father tell me how ur friends came back abanded you i satyed with you hugging u kissing u telling u im missing u nights droping by the minite by the hour im still sitting in the spot full of love looking at ur eyes

  • @crisxjay that shit didnt rhyme at all.. sorry

  • I wrote a first verse finally!!! ^^ Please, if you're willing to help me out. Can you please give me some feedback on my verse? I'm not trying to get money or get famous. I just would appreciate some commentary on how I did! :D

  • i have a blob

    named bob

    hes a snob

    with a prob

  • bruno mars is the new michael jackson

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  • You know I'm amazing my fucking shit is hell raising how much is your life worth? One minute I'm appraising your live isn't worth a damn dime I'll shove fucking pills down your throat until you overdose and flatline when I close my eyes all I see is dollar signs I'm almost at the top and your lifes in a decline wait a minute and let me intertwine. You're doing this, this and this wrong in this fucking rap game you don't belong I'll squash you you're the bitch and I'm King Kong

  • @sTRAydOg808

    i have a hat,

    his names pat,

    now try to beat that:)

  • DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR DAHLERR

  • whats up with the long comments?

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  • Had a dream, i was king, i woke up, ah... damn it

  • You can call me crazy but i had a dream that God came down and touched me on my shoulder, i bowed on my knees, I said please it can't be over, Can you wait until I'm older, till i escape from the horrors of my past, till I'm old enough to fly to a place i wanna be, fall asleep on a cloud of memories where i didn't have to scream, fall asleep on success that i didn't have to steal or cheat, most definitely live my the way it should be on throne surrounded bu haters that wanna be me.

  • Pt 2- Naw im emotional so i let a tear, fall and get mad instead of saying cheers, Im fucking fourteen filled with fear, But i aint backing away i hit this bitch like a truck and a deer, Making my way up tired of being the rear, I own your ass get lost like falling off a pier,haha here i go You think im done? My reign has just begun, as you fag's read my lyrics get mad and start to run, all i say is Im your father and your my sons, Disagree as i crush your bitch ass mothafucking lungs. Killed.

  • By the time you hear this i miht of already stepped out, Idont know how the rap game is but i know this is not what its about, Ill keep making rap with fans or without, Bitch my lyrics kill are you sick catch the goutDont tell me to stop or else it will urge me to shout, To many haters to make me have anymore doubt, If one way fails i always have a backup route, you say im faded but i know im just about to sprout, whats it take, to get my message clear, want to hear lies or get drunk with a beer

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  • 0:34 now you can actually write your verses!

  • if you diss me, i'll think you just wanna kiss me, cause you dont know me, i don't know me,nobody will ever ever see, that i dont wanna be a g, i just wanna grow up and rap, not sit at home playing on all this call of duty crap, its hard to be an mc, cause the flow with the melody dont get with me, and then theres all the haters who grow up to be 90 year old virgin masterbaters, check the fact im twelve years young, and its truth thats coming outta my lung, i never sung always rapped,daily crapd

  • My dad saw a cat

    I fed it a rat

    now it's fat.

    I GO HARD.

  • @sTRAydOg808 My dad saw a cat, So I ran to the back, yard and grabbed a bat, ran up and smashed, its dome till its skull cracked, gave it one last smack, and watched its brains splat, as my dad watched the act, he freaked out dashed, I thought he would laugh,
  • @sTRAydOg808 You're a beast. Damn..

  • i'd write my lyrics too but these motherfuckers would steal them..

  • @youngace4lyfe1 Free ghostwriting ;) Nah jokes, if people are pathetic enough to steal lyrics, they can't call themselves an MC. Fuck that shit.

  • Fuck great job on the instrumental just what i been searching for bro ! thanks i wanna make a remix to this song cause my other remix sucked and yeah ill give props to you and cheers ! :) :) Hit me back

  • if i die, will i fly, i don't care i will try, please don't cry, watch me dry, sometimes i can't reply, i aint trying to set a bad example, but i gotta manhandle all the pain in one angle, i aint tryna get this twisted and then tangled, im saying that a situation should be un tangled and man handled by the pain triangle, and then bangled, so this Shh is ended, but the starts been bended, gotta go through some loops, maybe through pipes and tubes, and small spaces too...

    Much love Gmerkz

  • @GmerkzArtist Come on bro you can do better try not to make RYHME after RYHME put a little story to it and give it something that the people that read it will think about twice

  • @Trueth16 Alright fair enuff thanks for the comment bro

  • @GmerkzArtist By the time you hear this i already walked out im nto gona stress over your anymore i shouldnt have to raise my voice and shout for you to hear me out cause you always seem to ignore why cant you just open your ears and listen i tried for so long to get an outlet of bullshit shit sounds like it aint even worth it we shouldnt couldnt wouldnt have been perfect sometimes i just need a road to follow to get outa deppresion and sorrow Theres some of mine bro COMMENT
  • @Trueth16 siik man, on mine i was kinda doing it randomly what ever came in my head

  • finally thank u

  • Kurty boy the lyrical menic murkin that mic from here to venice one of the first in this like genosys dont get in a twist, coming up quick thats why your pissed see my name on the top ten list dont take it to heart dont slit your wrists.

  • Luis Resto is the men ! great beat. He and Em makes beautiful songs

  • Recording A Track To This Tomoz !!!!!!!!!!! Promo Only

  • This one.. is to the people.. of the world..

    Africa and genocide, tryin to live but theres no where to hide, and Haiti caught a changin tide, and no one was there with arms wide, and it was only some people who had the decency and cried, and china had an earthquake applied, and mean while america spent 900 billion on a war, and what for, so we could settle the score? Our morals poor, im here not against nor for, but rap it back, if you have anything more in store

  • My Name Is Memphis Taylor & i would love it if you checked out my page & if you think its good enough do send the original track to sdjetsfan21@yahoo.com

    PRESS PLAY MIXTAPE COMING SOON ( BUT DUE TO THE ECONOMY I DON'T KNOW WHEN SOON IS GONNA GET HERE ) SO ILL I HAVE ON MY WATCH IS TIME & THOUGHTS AND REAL INSTRUMENTAL WITH MY INSANE THOUGHTS , SOME THINK IM A WEIRDO BUT TRUTH IS I JUST WANT A LIGHTER TO GET HIGH AND ESCAPE THE DRAMA , BUT WHO AM I TO JUDGE WHEN I KNOW IM GUILTY OF THE PAST :)

  • i hate reading these raps becuase there so good i want to steal them for myself!!!!....lol

  • my name is david, yes this is a rap. I am an artist, but the qualitys crap. I like cinnamen so im not gunna rambbbl. i would be so gracious if youd check out my channel

  • Thanxxxxxxx!!!!!!!!!!

  • there are skulls in the top left corner of the video

  • one person couldnt afford a lighter!!!!!

  • Get up on stage and feel so enraged with so many caged faces trying to make it enslaved by dreams its a nightmare but im brave its a party rave where everyone is crazed by the drugs of hope and cant help but cope with what they got and for me its show up or throw up my lighter and let it glow up fuck it get some dynamite and let my fuckin dreams blow up never time to slow up dont give up grow up shit my flows corrupt erupted im done shit

  • A dream? It seems, speaking so obscene just to make a scene and get somewhere with the green to provide the life for my family that i've always wanted and how it's haunted my nights and taunted, these lights are to bright for me to see whats in sight so pray about it tonight and fight for whats right or whats left god gave me this music gift but i everytime i spit a verse i feel like the mood just shifts needs to thrift i need to lift up my lighter and shine my hopes get out my way bitch

  • this is the way final song should have came out

  • youre super cool, thanks for the down load! i'll subscribe and hopefully you'll have more i can use.

  • I'm gonna cut right to the words:

    What the hell is this life about with all these unreliable leaders? Aside from J. Bieber,

    our government is messed up, but that doesn't worry me as the fact that we could be on the edge of a fatality!

    I can tell that people blaring music don't give a damn about their hearing,

    or a man who steps inside a clinic cause he killed a family while drinking.

    I'm fed up with this world! and all of it's stupidity; Thumbs up if you even "somewhat" agree with me.

  • @LudicrousJim27 Wow. So positive. So much faith in your fellow humans. I'd hate to be you.

  • @Keopro The difference between us, I suppose

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  • thank you this thurs. i will come out with a song ppl check me out why not right

  • do do da do do dodo da do do de do da \(-_-)/

  • I'm going to have a sweet remix to this up very soon! hope ya'll check it out

  • Straight outta hell with a story to tell.. Cuttin powdered treasures, weigh my problems on the scale.. Lift my hands to the sky tryna make things right.. Momma on her knees tryna hopin i'd make it through the night.. Prayin to the lord that he'd save my life.. Thought i'd do a couple lines and i'd be just fine.. Money grand, in the back of the stash.. Watch your homie slip up and get tossed to the trash..

  • @dsv513 STOP WRITING YOUR LYRICS IN THE COMMEnt

  • nimAA

  • wow

    

  • Thanks!

  • this is the cleanest - thank you!

  • hey bro can i use this on my mix tape credit will be given this shit tight thanx.......

  • you made this? good job!

  • 2ndPART:grandma i know we didnt visit much.im sorry.theres no ifs ands or buts.i ignored the fact that you were sick.i didnt bother calling and i barely ever thought of you.now i feel like a major dick and i wish we never lost you.the only time we saw you smile was when you stayed here for a month.you were up in the morning drinking coffee then making lunch.i wish you coulda stayed mom and pops are proud of me for sticking to this music thing.i know im not the best.but hopefully that can change

  • 1st PART:: i know im just 15.and a rap career is only a distant wish within a vivid dream.or more like a nightmare because every step i take forward.i always get pushed right back here.to this place i dont want to be.depression.recession.a broken mic and a hand grenade.to end it all.to free my pain..or is it a sign that someone is sending me.telling me that i have to dedicate myself to oneday become king...

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