Fan traditional animation - naruto vs sasuke

[316Gar]

This is great, looks like you put a lot of effort into it. Just some parts look really stiff or awkward and some of the proportions aren't very consistent. But it's still a great job, I like it!

[themrjosueful]

cara como vc editou no windows movie marker pq quando eu boto demora muito pra imagem passar entao nao da efeito de animaçao

[elfoice]

@themrjosueful Olá.

Vai a ferramentas que se encontra em cima e carrega em opções- dentro das opções escolhe - avançadas- e onde diz -duração da imagem- põe o valor que lá está para o menos possivél (que no meu caso é de 0,125). Faz o mesmo para onde diz - transição da imagem. As imagens só podes por depois de fazer isto. Caso já as tenhas lá, fecha e volta a abrir o movie maker. Espero ter ajudado :)

[wabi777]

this is great dont worry about what anyone says ! it looks great! good job

[themrjosueful]

e sim como vc disse a animaçao ficou cheia de erros mas so foi vc quem fez ne entao ta muito otimo

[themrjosueful]

sim ficou otimo mas a melhor parte da luta come çou no 2:14 mas ficou otimo parabens aonde fez seu ccurso

[elfoice]

@themrjosueful Obrigado, eu fiz o meu curso na Universidade da Beira Interior (covilhã- Portugal) em design multimédia. Mas o que fiz nesta animação foi a nível pessoal, não aprendi nada disto no meu curso, pois o curso que tirei é mais focado em design gráfico. A única coisa que aprendi de animação lá foi bases de flash e não animação frame por frame que foi o que fiz neste video.

[themrjosueful]

cra como e q vc fez essa animaçao na hora de animar me responde ai

[elfoice]

@themrjosueful

A animação foi feita toda com caneta azul e com papel tamanho A4. Cada folha tem um desenho "diferente" para dar a sensação de movimento. Depois peguei nas folhas e digitalizei-as com um scanner. E por fim editei a animação e o som no movie-maker (o unico pograma que tinha na altura)

[Perryshotter]

Looks like someone mixed the matrix with Naruto.

[XxLightNTheDarknessX]

ok that was just awesome

[hoboeden]

naruto looks like tetsuo at some points

[chillincello]

This woulda been better if it was like 5x faster, lol, but ferealz a faster frame rate woulda made it! keep it up!:D

[margaritamichelle]

THIS IS AMAZING

[playabledance]

thats arite you could see u improving towards the end

[hoangtram905]

not bad not bad ! but it not real ! and this is't Anime Manga style ! ! !

But dont give up :) you will better soon

P/s : sr for my English T_T

[o0LadyEvansAngel0o]

omg!!

eu k tou num curso de tecnico de animaçao 2D e 3D

digo k isto esta optimo!!!

:O

meu deus!!

desenhast 1000 e tal frames!!

tens muita coragem!

eu ainda sou nova nisto da animaçao mas isto ta excelente!! :D

tmb es de algum curso de 2D e 3D como eu?

[elfoice]

@o0LadyEvansAngel0o

Obrigado pelos elogios. Terminei á pouco tempo o curso de Design Multimédia, mas lá só dei algumas bases de animação 3d e 2d (em flash e não frame por frame). Esta animação comecei a faze-la antes de entrar para esse curso, por isso as bases de animação que tinha foram todas aprendidas por mim. Esta animação especialmente tem muitos erros pois eu fiz-la sem qualquer preocupação, eu recomendo-te a não a seguir como padrão pois foi algo experimental.

[akireeerika]

sasuke...can fly? this is new

[wolfbon]

this was sooooooooo cool and creative.

[1leerick]

this is good

[LiuMaoHsing]

sweet its unnatural at some parts but its still awesome n there definitely a lot of improvement since e start gd job xD

[maidwithluv]

wow that was so amazing and It was funny too; )

lol *added to favorites*

[magiciandude]

Some really cool effects animation is in this! Have you ever thought of animation as a career?

[Samiisey]

hey not bad! that's some crazy awesome work (& oh man, scanning 1600 pictures? i thought 100 was bad..)! you show real improvement near the end and that's really cool! very nice work :)

[jhoan199412]

que programa usas

[elfoice]

@jhoan199412 para desenhar nenhum foi tudo feito á mão em folhas de papel... para editar foi no movie maker do windows

[antonfilth]

very nice man!

[erincamilla]

The eye animation is actually excellent. Everything else ... not so much. Your anatomy is pretty bad.

Keep practicing, though! You can see the improvement throughout the piece and you'll keep improving the more you do.

[peanut67896789]

dude... watching this makes me laugh so hard XD

[IchiWaZen]

What I find really cool about this is probably the amount of improvement that shows throughout the whole thing.

The animation is amazing already, but the improvement that happened throughout the year that it took for you to make this really shows for me.

Amazing job!

[elfoice]

@IchiWaZen Thank you so much for the coment and the critic.

[intactGB]

jus for fr, the hands are around as big as the face

your movement animation was nice, but the illustrations, jus terrible

[longcatneedsmorelong]

moar fps! :3 but it's still nice though

[Cata995]

omg , u did 1617 drawings? :O

btw, awesome

[ageshero]

oh...fuhh...

[LordBalmung1]

That was amazing dude, great job! :)

[ff7redxiii]

nice drawings and such but missing a lot of principles of animation, good attempt I liked it still.

[rayyipei]

hey man its really really great efforts !

I was wondering what paper you draw on

just normal sketch book ??

and did you scan them all ??

keep this up man its grreattt

[elfoice]

Yes... i drew on a normal A4 paper and i scaned them all... not all in the same day but in a lot of separated days,,,,,

soory my english

[CodenameLegacy]

Wow that was amazing! I'm not going to lie, I loved the choreography (it seems just like the episode when they had that fight) of course it could use some polish. At first, I thought they just moved silly abit like beavis and butthead, but it got more lively, more "actioney",

I'm not a critic, but that was great work, keep it up :)!

[SnoBunny23]

awesome job

[KoolAnimations]

increase the fps and it would be much better

[MarRoyaltyKingston]

u accidently left on onion skin D:

[roxonogueira]

nota-se o esforço...mas epa...animação sem timing não nada! tenta arranjar o ANIMATOR'S SURVIVAL KIT que é a bíblia dos animadores.

E tenta fazer experiências com personagens tuas...

[ladylibra011]

soo cool

[mrsticky005]

The sharnigan is shown spinning sometimes

in the anime.

[vinnikins]

you definitely got heart : )

[rookie66]

i cant describe the sensation im feeling, this is very awkward but at the same time the animation itself is just amazing! im sitting at my screen amazed. its completely different to what im use to! VERY GOOD 5 stars

[themotrich]

The best thing for you to resolve the timing issue is to act. act out all your actions and have a friend with a stopwatch or camera. the camera would be best because then you'd get reference as well, which will help with the spacing. Correct me if I'm wrong, but it looks like you went straight-ahead. learn about pose to pose or "key to key" drawing. Besides that, just do a ROUGH pass before you put in the details (hair, cloth etc.) the results will thank you!

[elfoice]

yah you are right.. my all animations until now are experimental i havn.t followed any rules... and i havn.t worried with any logic thing... it was just to see the sensation of somethig created by me move.... the timing in this time i don.t know how to control it and it was done in movie maker so i think it is 7 frames per second.....

thanks a lot for the comment i will folow your advices... i hope that would help me... sorry the english

[mrsticky005]

awkward but very good.

[jamil1985]

alot of timing and spacing is required. However excellent, study timing and spacing and ur animation will look alot better.

[RandomWordsMedia]

well.....the spacing is done realistically so all he needs to do is speed it up and also.......there are about 7 frames per sec which is proven by the information given in the top right corner.THIS PROVES HE NEEDS TO SPEED IT UP!!! you know what im sayin?

[Skydust55]

Como assim editado no Windows Movie Maker? :D

Té q ta massa!

[elfoice]

editei no movie maker porque era o unico pograma de ediçao de video que tinha na altura.. é por isso k a cenas que os movimentos estão bastante lentos... e obrigadão pelo coment

[bakkahentai2600]

You should have doubled the speed of the animation.

[RandomWordsMedia]

i know right

[nekodark25]

WTF!!!!

[carzorthade]

Nice effort- work on dynamic posing so the characters aren't so stiff. Do you use guidelines?

[elfoice]

i only used some guides on the faces of the characteres to see their moviments... sorry the english and thanks for the comment.

[rednose91]

lol

YOU ARE AMAZING!!

excellent job

keep up the good work :-)

[Drainage64]

Whtat the crap is this?!?!AMAZING!!

[lrdalucard]

vejam um pequenissimo exemplo do poder duma Animação á Portuguesa!

[SKULLBUST3R]

AWESOME!!!!

[BumblebeeJ]

Cara... teve umas cenas q vc fez cada detalhe q meu sapato... Ficaram muito boas

A animação também ficou 10, e... quantos mil papéis vc utilizou?

[elfoice]

usei cerca de 1600 desenhos ja nao me lembro muito bem da quantidade certa mas axo k foram 1616 desenhos.

e obrigadao pelo comentário

[animelovererick]

That was awesmoe. great job. that is 1 of my fav episodes.

[sdh80]

wow...that was awesome, even if it didnt really look like them, you can still tell who they are. That was some awesome talent right there. ^_^

[AnnyaUsagi]

awesome :D

[annyester]

wow. you are SO hard-working! that's amazing!

[Jopetsux]

xD great vid! 5/5!

[mightuchaaaan]

omfg. I'd die. it's totally amazing.

great job at this o_o

[Buddyb309]

Jesus christ man. You spent a year on that? I would have least done something that isn't copyrighted.

[quinas87]

Nunca desapontas tu.

[fhorsaken]

fodass ta brutal puto! es marado em fazer essa merda a mao xD tens d comprar uma pen tablet masé. mt bom :)

[uchiahmiguel]

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[uchiahmiguel]

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