The position of the vowels are to far back in the throat. The breath is to light. The song is also to low. It needs to be higher. It is a very good effort. You need a lot of practice on bringing the pitch up and forward
You have a nice voice. ^_^ Past the technical things to say, I would suggest connecting the notes together to make a musical line. Also, backing off the sound of some of the notes sounds good in our head, but it actually isn't an effective technique. Sustain the sound and make dynamics very deliberate.
@wolfmusic92 I think he wants positive criticism - I'm sure by now he has worked on the bad things...I can hear a good voice here - i hope he is still singing.
@neelsdp1 when i watched this video, i was singing this song for a state solo competition... i looked up the song on youtube so i could hear other people's interpretations and make up my own... if i had went to state singing it anything like this i wouldn't have gotten a 1.
You have great vibrato! I enjoyed this c:
peanutbuttag3lliee 1 year ago
The position of the vowels are to far back in the throat. The breath is to light. The song is also to low. It needs to be higher. It is a very good effort. You need a lot of practice on bringing the pitch up and forward
dragon3356 1 year ago 2
You have a nice voice. ^_^ Past the technical things to say, I would suggest connecting the notes together to make a musical line. Also, backing off the sound of some of the notes sounds good in our head, but it actually isn't an effective technique. Sustain the sound and make dynamics very deliberate.
sing2god7089 1 year ago
bad vowels, bad consonants, bad breathing spots, bad dynamics, mispronounced words, wrong notes... why did you upload this?
wolfmusic92 1 year ago
@wolfmusic92 I think he wants positive criticism - I'm sure by now he has worked on the bad things...I can hear a good voice here - i hope he is still singing.
neelsdp1 1 year ago
@neelsdp1 when i watched this video, i was singing this song for a state solo competition... i looked up the song on youtube so i could hear other people's interpretations and make up my own... if i had went to state singing it anything like this i wouldn't have gotten a 1.
wolfmusic92 1 year ago
@wolfmusic92 agreed!
what I'm saying (assuming so anyway...) he wanted pointed critique (you came very close too it), I think he knows it is far from perfect.
I think people have at least one of two motives if they post their own songs/interpretations here: they need help or they want to share their success.
Ciao
neelsdp1 1 year ago
keep singing as long as you enjoy it!
superskyless 2 years ago
I'm so sorry for the bad videos quality. I'm using my webcam to record them.
gayandproud35114 3 years ago