This is some great work as far as a story goes, however, technically there were a few problems. If you have an editing program that supports color correction/grading, be sure to utilise that. Also, In the shots with the ink blot try using some more light. I know the message that you were trying to portray was dark, but you still need some light to work with. Other than that I loved this piece! Great concept!
@Neilyo54321 Thanks for the advice. Yeah I used a lot of color correction in the counseling scenes. Originally, the lighting for that scene was a light light yellow kind of color and it didn't really match the mood at all so I really wanted to darken it down and increase the contrast. As far as the outside scenes go, I did use some color correction but I only used it to increase the contrast and put a little more color into the scene. Thanks for the comment! Glad ya liked it!
@petmycatwiththose Thanks! I read that comment you left earlier before I deleted the video, thanks for that feedback too. I realized I had to make a couple of changes after I uploaded it.
very impressive
ajisabeasttoday 2 months ago
Well done!
Packsuperbowl 2 months ago
This is some great work as far as a story goes, however, technically there were a few problems. If you have an editing program that supports color correction/grading, be sure to utilise that. Also, In the shots with the ink blot try using some more light. I know the message that you were trying to portray was dark, but you still need some light to work with. Other than that I loved this piece! Great concept!
Neilyo54321 3 months ago
@Neilyo54321 Thanks for the advice. Yeah I used a lot of color correction in the counseling scenes. Originally, the lighting for that scene was a light light yellow kind of color and it didn't really match the mood at all so I really wanted to darken it down and increase the contrast. As far as the outside scenes go, I did use some color correction but I only used it to increase the contrast and put a little more color into the scene. Thanks for the comment! Glad ya liked it!
SergeantJonny 3 months ago
This is better than anything Hollywood is putting out right now...
85GregJennings85 3 months ago
Excellent
MrNinetysixchamps 3 months ago
@MrNinetysixchamps Thank you!
SergeantJonny 3 months ago
Great Job Jonathan! You might have caught me tearing up there at the end..
ClutchIzSik 3 months ago 5
@ClutchIzSik Thank you Collin! I greatly appreciate that!
SergeantJonny 3 months ago
awesome job jon, very cool. keep it up bro your editing skils r insane
packersrevolution 3 months ago 2
@packersrevolution Thanks man I appreciate it!
SergeantJonny 3 months ago
nice man! ur in good shape to be a movie director or something to do with that
44thelegendary 3 months ago 2
@44thelegendary Thanks! Glad ya liked it!
SergeantJonny 3 months ago
Oustanding job once again jon. Keep it up!
reddfan022 3 months ago
Bruce Wayne + Christopher Nolan = Bruce Nolan.
Brodasaur 3 months ago 2
@Brodasaur You are right Brody!!!!! Congrats! When are you coming to Whitewater?
SergeantJonny 3 months ago 4
Nice camera angles...
petmycatwiththose 3 months ago 2
@petmycatwiththose Thanks! I read that comment you left earlier before I deleted the video, thanks for that feedback too. I realized I had to make a couple of changes after I uploaded it.
SergeantJonny 3 months ago
i thought i was watching a superhero short for a sec and at 2:34 he was ready to reveal himself lol.
raitaylor 3 months ago
nice acting and nice editing!
Rangeudown117 3 months ago 2
@Rangeudown117 Thanks Zane! Now you know why I asked you for a realistic looking pistol. Hahaha. The one we used worked just fine though.
SergeantJonny 3 months ago