The walk seems off, try stretching the stomach just a tiny bit . The shoulder seems sort of detached from the body,try to blend the elbow in a bit more to the horse.The shoulders and chest seem a bit narrow,too and the forelegs might be a little too outreaching.
The motion of the trot looks great.
On the gallop, raise the hindquarters up a bit more , they're just staying there
The stomach moves a bit much, try lifting the character up off ground a --
@spritrain180 Thanks, and much thanks for the critique. :-) See what you mean on all points. I am trying to push the rear end up more with the gallop compared to before; figuring out how much is too much.
This deserves more views.
79Louise 1 week ago
This is very good, my few comments on it are
The walk seems off, try stretching the stomach just a tiny bit . The shoulder seems sort of detached from the body,try to blend the elbow in a bit more to the horse.The shoulders and chest seem a bit narrow,too and the forelegs might be a little too outreaching.
The motion of the trot looks great.
On the gallop, raise the hindquarters up a bit more , they're just staying there
The stomach moves a bit much, try lifting the character up off ground a --
spritrain180 3 weeks ago
@spritrain180 a bit more . The rear was a bit fast, but it was very good
Your doing an awesome job!
Keep it up :)
spritrain180 3 weeks ago
@spritrain180 Thanks, and much thanks for the critique. :-) See what you mean on all points. I am trying to push the rear end up more with the gallop compared to before; figuring out how much is too much.
AlphaBee6 3 weeks ago
Lovely!
MissFlying1 1 month ago
Awesome! You should do one of him jumping things and bucking and stuff.
U r a very talented animator!
DragonHeart00926 1 month ago
Great horse animation!!! Great choice of music!!! When does he stand upright and start talking again?
WILDMUSTANGX 1 month ago in playlist Liked videos
@WILDMUSTANGX Thanks. There will be a couple more of those coming soon. :-)
AlphaBee6 1 month ago
@AlphaBee6 I know, how about a cute filly for this guy?
WILDMUSTANGX 4 weeks ago
Awesome
ShebaTheLoneWolf 1 month ago