I think Will's advice is good to an extent. The repetition would be a great addition but the poetry should stay. Of course he doesn't say those things to his girlfriend - that's why it's a song! You generally say things in music that you can't say to the person in real life.
Music is about expressing your true self and emotion, not having a typical conversation.
hi landon id be honored if u can check out some of my original songs! -"youre real- danielle k"..or "today is the day-danielle k"..i would love to collaborate with u! :) please get back to me
some of us actually like landon and how his music is a form of art. he makes beautiful poetry and if you fill a song with repetitiveness it ruins it. it completely cuts out the chunks that someone might love so much. the reason i like landons music is because hes different. so please dont try and turn him into some pop-industry-force-fed-cookie-cutter-crap. hes original nd thats why he so good.
can u listen to my original song and tell me wat u think!?- it called "youre real -danielle k"..i love ur music , ur so unique, refreshing and talented
It's cool that we did this, but he gives absolutely awful advice. I mean I for one would like your song to have lyrics that are poetic and deep, I want much more than "I'm waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting for you" , I really don't know how he is a successful musician if that is all he can come up with.
Will.i.am is great, but I would definitely rather have more lyrics than, "be waitin' be waitin' be waitin' be waitin' be waitin'." Landon, your songs are awesome the way they are!
*Cough cough*...that made no sense o_O I would rather hear landons original than "I'll be waitin ill be waitin ill be waitin ill be waitin ill be waitin ..." for three minutes.
Will.I.Am isn't the right genre. His suggestions are good, but it would make the song more into his style. Landon's style is to mesmerize you with words and lyrics. Will's style is to hit you with the beat. They are both good in their own nature, but Will.I.Am is not the right person to be critiquing one of Landon Austin's songs.
I agree with Ntin63.... The way the song was written is amazing the way it is. Personally, I probably wouldn't listen to will.I.am's version because it would bore me with so much repetition. And he shouldn't criticize the poetic words and say that the lyrics should be more strait foreword. To me, a song is meant to say something in a beautiful, majestic way. If there was something so deep and emotional that it can't be said in plain words, then why use those plain words in a song. The song is s
I think the song is really gentle and subtly brilliant right now, and it doesn't need a Will.I.Am style hook to be good. I think he's looking for a different style of music. The song is poetic, and it's pretty damn amazing without repetitive hooks. It's perfectly simple and doesn't need anything else. Landon, you're doing an awesome job, keep going!
OMG OMG OMG OMG! So cool. You should show Will.I.Am that song with Luke Conard: Skyscraper! That song is amazing! Show him that song if you can! AMAZING!!!!
I disagree with what he says about "pounding" the audience in the head with one line...that's not a good musician. a good musician (and poet) comes up with several good lines instead of having one good line repeated until it becomes so overused that it becomes a bad line. From the music of yours that I've listened to, you're a good musician (and poet :P). keep it up!
I don't think he was right about the chorus part until he actually showed us what he mean anyways, is this how you that competition that you were talking about?
I think Will's advice is good to an extent. The repetition would be a great addition but the poetry should stay. Of course he doesn't say those things to his girlfriend - that's why it's a song! You generally say things in music that you can't say to the person in real life.
Music is about expressing your true self and emotion, not having a typical conversation.
blackroses1321 1 week ago in playlist Top Videos
hi landon id be honored if u can check out some of my original songs! -"youre real- danielle k"..or "today is the day-danielle k"..i would love to collaborate with u! :) please get back to me
Kezkook11 2 weeks ago in playlist Top Videos
some of us actually like landon and how his music is a form of art. he makes beautiful poetry and if you fill a song with repetitiveness it ruins it. it completely cuts out the chunks that someone might love so much. the reason i like landons music is because hes different. so please dont try and turn him into some pop-industry-force-fed-cookie-cutter-crap. hes original nd thats why he so good.
kingsdaughter82 2 weeks ago in playlist Top Videos
can u listen to my original song and tell me wat u think!?- it called "youre real -danielle k"..i love ur music , ur so unique, refreshing and talented
Kezkook11 3 weeks ago in playlist Top Videos
ohmygoodness. whatever. this song is amazing how it is. it doesnt need to be changed.
purpledinosification 1 month ago
It's cool that we did this, but he gives absolutely awful advice. I mean I for one would like your song to have lyrics that are poetic and deep, I want much more than "I'm waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting and waiting for you" , I really don't know how he is a successful musician if that is all he can come up with.
TheFuckingJungleBaby 1 month ago
@TheFuckingJungleBaby You don't know how to make music dumbass so you wouldn't understand
xxcupxx1 1 month ago in playlist Top Videos
Tell him that if he wants to change it, he has to guest on it.
BRProvince 2 months ago 2
I like the way you have it., but it would be really awesome to hear it the way he says.,(:
missprettyrock 2 months ago in playlist More videos from LandonAustin
Will.i.am is great, but I would definitely rather have more lyrics than, "be waitin' be waitin' be waitin' be waitin' be waitin'." Landon, your songs are awesome the way they are!
ItsCarriekay 2 months ago in playlist Top Videos
christmas tree in the back? uploaded in august...
ep1321 2 months ago
i liked will.i.am's way.. Great Job Landon !!! nice voice
iamalyssaa 3 months ago
Congratulation! :D
TheLilydm 3 months ago in playlist Autres vidéos de LandonAustin
We love Landon the way he is :D
pandeeb24 3 months ago in playlist More videos from LandonAustin 3
Landon's not part of the black eyed peas Will where you guys repeat every word twenty times! But some of his critique was good, just sayin ;)
pandeeb24 3 months ago in playlist More videos from LandonAustin 3
@caileycmusic me too. Will I ams version sounds annoying
Averymeg10 3 months ago
Wow. How the heck....That's the legit Will I Am. how..? I just...Wow omg
My fave artist talkin about my fave youtuber...That's just...lol
TheWeloveADUB 3 months ago in playlist More videos from LandonAustin
he needs to shutthefrontdoor. Asshole.
heykarez 3 months ago
*Cough cough*...that made no sense o_O I would rather hear landons original than "I'll be waitin ill be waitin ill be waitin ill be waitin ill be waitin ..." for three minutes.
caileycmusic 4 months ago 4
That works for Will i Am's style of music, stupid R&B shit...but for your style, the song was perfect to me!
starlight1228 4 months ago
will-.-lGave@Lesson
crimsoncoin 4 months ago in playlist More videos from LandonAustin
Will.I.Am Haha did ya get onto that, wicked little sound and great voice Haha
crimsoncoin 4 months ago in playlist More videos from LandonAustin
I kinda agree with him. I love the song but it does seem to be missing something.
lexiegirl2012 5 months ago in playlist More videos from LandonAustin 2
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fritzo62 5 months ago
Will.I.Am isn't the right genre. His suggestions are good, but it would make the song more into his style. Landon's style is to mesmerize you with words and lyrics. Will's style is to hit you with the beat. They are both good in their own nature, but Will.I.Am is not the right person to be critiquing one of Landon Austin's songs.
kingofpopmichaeljman 6 months ago 22
i dont like what he is saying about it i think that would reck it! ilove it the way it is:)
jordanloftusmusic 6 months ago
I agree with Ntin63.... The way the song was written is amazing the way it is. Personally, I probably wouldn't listen to will.I.am's version because it would bore me with so much repetition. And he shouldn't criticize the poetic words and say that the lyrics should be more strait foreword. To me, a song is meant to say something in a beautiful, majestic way. If there was something so deep and emotional that it can't be said in plain words, then why use those plain words in a song. The song is s
751153359957751 6 months ago 2
I think the song is really gentle and subtly brilliant right now, and it doesn't need a Will.I.Am style hook to be good. I think he's looking for a different style of music. The song is poetic, and it's pretty damn amazing without repetitive hooks. It's perfectly simple and doesn't need anything else. Landon, you're doing an awesome job, keep going!
Ntin63 6 months ago
thats awesome!!
beautyxxdana 6 months ago
That is awesome!! Landon.. take his advice and I would love to hear it and buy it haha! You have a great voice!
britter7819 6 months ago
how do you feel about critique Landon? I'm curious
Angelrosegirl1 6 months ago
landon you should you should try his advice just for fun to see what it sounds like. make a video of it!
SasquatchGroove 6 months ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG! So cool. You should show Will.I.Am that song with Luke Conard: Skyscraper! That song is amazing! Show him that song if you can! AMAZING!!!!
meeswetttcandy 6 months ago 2
I understand what he was saying. And I'm so impressed that you have a critique for Wil.I.Am! Good job!
gogoboots26 6 months ago
it seems to me like he wants him to take the essence of the song out away and replace it with repitition?.. I cant say I agree with that.
coolkidzzzzzz123 6 months ago 13
WILL I AM from black eyed peas! FTW :D
holasierra95 6 months ago
That is awesome! Well done for getting a critique from him! =) And yay for Will.I.Am giving you such good advice =)
JTBJAB 6 months ago
I disagree with what he says about "pounding" the audience in the head with one line...that's not a good musician. a good musician (and poet) comes up with several good lines instead of having one good line repeated until it becomes so overused that it becomes a bad line. From the music of yours that I've listened to, you're a good musician (and poet :P). keep it up!
MetalheadVic12 6 months ago 19
i felt nervous watching this! i can't imagine what you were feeling... haha :)
californiagirl011 6 months ago 6
So glad I watched Luke's vlog today, becuase now I have another favorite musician ♥
MissOrcaLover 6 months ago 11
I don't think he was right about the chorus part until he actually showed us what he mean anyways, is this how you that competition that you were talking about?
WendyOMGWar 6 months ago 7
Wow, that's so Cool that will.I.am critiqued your video! How id you get video of this, if you dont mind my asking
BabyJessicaNicole 6 months ago
will i am s critique was so spot on(in a good way) like if you added that to this song it would be more amazing!
kathyvcelestial123 6 months ago 56
How did you get him to do that? Wait, is that actually him. 'Cause that'd be awesome.
RebeccaTaylorish 6 months ago 42
@RebeccaTaylorish its him! i promise! :)
LandonAustin 6 months ago 51
@LandonAustin Landon can u please sing the version will suggested! PRETTY PLEASE! we would love to hear you sing it!!!
ArtsyPetals 3 months ago
first!
plhgtts 6 months ago