pronunciation was a bit too much for this song, i mean, its new york. but otherwise. i heard no mistakes in the pitches or stumbles in the words. it was great.
pretty good work on the pitch and youll be right there!!!! the first part was great though then toward the middle you started getting pitchy just keep working at it and it will be great
Pretty good, but I think it might help if you sing a song like this with less "perfect" pronunciation. For example, "Santa Fe" would cange to "San'a Fe".
I'm not sure what some of these people are hearing. I'm hearing pitches all over the place...on the notes that are held, the vibrato is weak/forced and the tone slips into the throat. You have the potential, but you have alot of work to do.
its ok its a little flat i sung this with a voice teacher of mine and she said it was awesome . i think if you did songs thats fit you better you could be good. Oh and your acent or dialect in this song is strange but i think its that way cause of how slow you made the song. but its ok
i absaluty love this song, but.... this song was ment to be sung with a new york accent, dont anounciate this song so much, it doesnt need it. and work on your vibrato, espesialy on the chracheno's(dont know how to spell that). but you are perty darn good!, keep up the good work
Nice job. Your voice is developing well. I'm a vocal performance major and Central Michigan University. I really liked the dynamic contrasts at the end of your phrases. It sounded to me that you were straining when you leapt up to the high notes. Make sure you have a great amount of space between your back molars. The more space you have in the back of your mouth, the easier it will be. Great job.
sounds good at times it sounds like the sound drops into your throat when you hold your notes your voice sound very pretty thought when you are singing lighter instead of tryin so hard other than that the vibratto is good!
I think you were great but because in this musical they all have a New York accent I think you shouldn't annuciate (or howver you spell that) your words so much. You're a great singer though.
no, i did this vith my voice teacher, she hired a guy to bring in his recording equitment. i'm gonna make it into an actual music video once i get the time.
just the vibrato and ur good :) great job
TheBakers99 1 year ago
we doing carring the banner king of new york and santa fe for chior we danceing to em too :]
kAyLa3722 2 years ago
you should work on your vibrato and not pushing too hard when you sing
ghettofabulous1216 3 years ago
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Lighthouse713 3 years ago
That was incerdibaly imprssive for a 14 year old. You've got a lot of talent.
LostgirlF815 3 years ago 3
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Snaps4thePowwow 3 years ago
For an eigth grader when you recorder this, I'm impressed. I'm in seventh grade and honestly, it's pretty good.
Just be careful of your pitch and be wary of over-annunciating. A nice light New York accent would help the feel of the song.
Don't stress your vocal cords either. You want to save that nice voice of yours. =]
actsingdancek 3 years ago 3
pronunciation was a bit too much for this song, i mean, its new york. but otherwise. i heard no mistakes in the pitches or stumbles in the words. it was great.
MJLONIR2 4 years ago 2
at some parts i couldn't really hear the new york accent.
but really good.
keep it up.
=]
fredlikeschesse103 4 years ago 2
good job, just a little less annunciation (sp?) on your concenents it takes away from the beauty of the song
smuggie1 4 years ago 4
Watch your pitch and rhythm, friend.
wariobidness 4 years ago 2
it's better live :)
gingerbreadpirate 4 years ago
u've heard me sing this live?
broadwayboy53 4 years ago
yes we talked about this.
gingerbreadpirate 4 years ago
you did awsome 100/5 man it takes couge to sing a song but it takes heart to do this good i think you have a excellenta voice you did great
kingoflionking 4 years ago
I think you are awesome! Keep it up.
ejane432 4 years ago 4
work on the new york accent..
Like most people, work on the pitch, be less nervous- extend your low range.
when u crescendo, once again, watch the pitch!!
dont force it either..
othrwise good job.
Thefrenchie 4 years ago
pretty good work on the pitch and youll be right there!!!! the first part was great though then toward the middle you started getting pitchy just keep working at it and it will be great
jesusfreak2154 4 years ago
its ok, not the worst ive ever heard
bleeblah234 4 years ago
well.... close enough!! keep workin at it!
mandyKgirl 4 years ago
your voice was pretty good
dramakween1990 4 years ago
pretty good
luvhearts56 4 years ago
you have a really good voice for the song, but parts of it are being sung to slow.
SummerH123 4 years ago
pretty good.! keep it up!
willsing4fun 4 years ago
k ur good but u need to work on you pitch and u need to work on projection like someone before me said u need to work on you tone
songdiva14 4 years ago
Pretty good, but I think it might help if you sing a song like this with less "perfect" pronunciation. For example, "Santa Fe" would cange to "San'a Fe".
lieaharting 4 years ago
I'm not sure what some of these people are hearing. I'm hearing pitches all over the place...on the notes that are held, the vibrato is weak/forced and the tone slips into the throat. You have the potential, but you have alot of work to do.
mydrumsarebetter 4 years ago
its ok its a little flat i sung this with a voice teacher of mine and she said it was awesome . i think if you did songs thats fit you better you could be good. Oh and your acent or dialect in this song is strange but i think its that way cause of how slow you made the song. but its ok
Bottom27 4 years ago
haha wat was that haha XD
AliciaNicole89 5 years ago
i absaluty love this song, but.... this song was ment to be sung with a new york accent, dont anounciate this song so much, it doesnt need it. and work on your vibrato, espesialy on the chracheno's(dont know how to spell that). but you are perty darn good!, keep up the good work
sing4ualways13 5 years ago
sorry, don't sing.. these people are just being nice.
abstrusemilieu9 5 years ago
Nice job. Your voice is developing well. I'm a vocal performance major and Central Michigan University. I really liked the dynamic contrasts at the end of your phrases. It sounded to me that you were straining when you leapt up to the high notes. Make sure you have a great amount of space between your back molars. The more space you have in the back of your mouth, the easier it will be. Great job.
EagleHail 5 years ago
sounds good at times it sounds like the sound drops into your throat when you hold your notes your voice sound very pretty thought when you are singing lighter instead of tryin so hard other than that the vibratto is good!
clvl2010 5 years ago
I think you were great but because in this musical they all have a New York accent I think you shouldn't annuciate (or howver you spell that) your words so much. You're a great singer though.
falloutgirl5011 5 years ago
It sounds great! Are you playing the piano?
I really liked it, it sounds almost like the film!!!!
Duchigaby 5 years ago
no, i did this vith my voice teacher, she hired a guy to bring in his recording equitment. i'm gonna make it into an actual music video once i get the time.
broadwayboy53 5 years ago