MAGIC THE GATHERING SONG -Raveyard- Its a aggrotech song about magic the gathering. With real nerdy lyrics-. Go to my profile to listen to it. Its the top video. CHECK IT OUT ;)
lyrics is great, ( on some point) and agree about video itself- get something much much stronger for video- this is about fearless or whatever - soldiers, not a paintball :D
look for some more violent pictures (not too violent tho`- ).
Maybe at the beginning texts with "the marine corps wants..." etc, use a little bit of a zoom in. I was expecting the text to zoop in just a little bit.
Also, I would remove the exclamation point from "in a world of shit!" And don't keep the "my corps! your corps!" in throughout the entire song. It gets to be a bit of a bother. Other than that, it's great.
I think it should be a fast paced battle between to army's if you can find the footage if not two people will do but It dissevers more that an just plan old army feel show the real pain and violence of war
Id have to agree with Joevirus. EXACTLY what I was thinking, with the text being too cheesy and the clips should be from FMJ. What's with the text anyway? Its not fucking karaoke
The text is too cheesy. Plus the footage should be from Full Metal Jacket. Nothing moves to the music except the text. Remove the text...just start over with the right movie. I'll post my video I made for this last year later today. I play it every week at The ChURcH in Dallas.
perhapst you should use like a drill sgt. and some footage from training sessions (e.g. running) for your vid. think scenes from full metal jacket, jarhead etc. would fit in.
Great idea. Suggestions: Drop ALL the wording. Get more military ACTION footage like gunfire, muzzleflashes, military people screaming, people crying, bleeding.. whatever. Just find something really intense.. like a solider/marine getting shot in a firefight for example.
born july 4th / save private ryan (especially the very beginning (arrival @ oclahoma beach), full metal jacket (altough i already got rid of all those samples used in songs), apocalypse now
well, i agree with the other comments but the in my opinion the whole video footage doesnt fit with the beats from teh song. take something more exiting, somthing with more action and events in it. This is a fast song and make use of some fast pictures. And btw, posting the lyrics is rediculous IMO. Showing it once okay, but repeating it to the song, uuuh.. no.
The text in the begining is good syncronized and looks good but thereafter its a little boring... the whole idea was very good and congrtz to you... but yes i agree use marines and not soldiers... it is a n insult indeed... grz agaainhope to see the new version soon!
ya... and something from Private J.R. Especially the arrving @ the beach at the very beginning from the movie... explodings, deaths... awesoem for a song like this.
Live footage of Grendel would be awesome, and instead of the stuff you have now, why not use clps from full metal jacket? it makes sense cause everytime i watch that movie, i hear this song in my head. Imagine wathing soldiers marching and training to this song, gold!
You've got a pretty damn cool idea. But honestly, take out the text and have more action during the aggressive leads. Throw in a few live clips of Grendel while you're at it. Remember there's a difference between just taking a scene and swapping the soundtrack, and making an honest-to-god music video. You've got some good potential though.
What I'd suggest is using short, repeating clips from the movie the words are from, "Full Metal Jacket".
The "My Corp Your Corp Our Corp Marine Corp" thing was taken while they were doing pt (thats exercise for you civilians) which would be good. Then there is also the murder suicide that you could use repeated, half second clips of that'd work.
yes exactly what i thought! i just need to watch it, i've never seen FMJ but badly want, cause i know it's more action in there, but what font u think i should use?
well, in the end of the movie, there's more action
and how bad is the font readability from 1 to 10?
i wanted to pick a distorted font, should i make font size larger? would Arial be better u think? any specific military movie you'd like me to import scenes from? thanx //silk
I love how the subtitles just stop once the actuall band member starts singing. You cant understand him, either?
angolodiamore 1 year ago
techno with soldiers in it doesnt fit together lmao my opinion im not saying its bad !
209skateboards 1 year ago
Isn't this supposed to be about United States Marine Corps? Not the German Nazis?
Stupid video, what a waste of time.
Abduhi 1 year ago
lol then youll be in a world of shit!
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MAGIC THE GATHERING SONG -Raveyard- Its a aggrotech song about magic the gathering. With real nerdy lyrics-. Go to my profile to listen to it. Its the top video. CHECK IT OUT ;)
synth000 1 year ago
You know what movie clips would be cool included in this... Dog Soldiers.
OrochimaruQueen6 2 years ago
or hellraiser =)
DarkSkies132 2 years ago
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LACK OF BALLS
gbboi 2 years ago
dude the sample is from full metal jacket
KingOfDarkBunnies 2 years ago
it's been almost 3 years, when are you going to finish this??? never?
krankePrinzessin 2 years ago
I have finished it! It's called (Demo), check in my other videos.
silkfire 2 years ago
im sorry...
krankePrinzessin 2 years ago 2
eep cant wait to dance to this at the soda next week <3
every month, there is a party called Chimera, its purely industrial night <3
just gotta remember not to stand anywhere near my friend ryland for my own safety the guys flails like no tomorrow
absinthelover420 2 years ago
Sucks that grendel is moving away from the distorted vocals =/ hopefully the new album is good without distortion
LaRapturaX 2 years ago
j/w would you know where i can find this song online?
like the torrent, i have some horrible luck trying to find it
absinthelover420 2 years ago
I often masturbate over naomi and this song
Hackedlolz 2 years ago
i often masturbate listening to this ^__^
playerlazar73 2 years ago 2
You don't even have to the sound is enough to get you to jizz.
igotmylunchbox 2 years ago
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GAY...
gbboi 2 years ago
I seen that movie xD! Grendel is GREAT!
54spiritedwill54 2 years ago
I like this movie, and I like music. But I don't think that this fits together :)
Sylphoe 3 years ago
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Video would go better if they weren't Germans, brah.
ninj4m4n 3 years ago
Nice video! It goes quite well with the song. :D
I know this is a bit random, but what're the fonts you used in this vid? They're hella cool. :D
hazgirl22 3 years ago
sorry forgot what the fonts were =(
silkfire 3 years ago
Great video! Well done!
Elotastic 3 years ago
those guys who is in that band studied in my school. was there :) last tuesday.
dermis89 3 years ago
This song :) i love it
7625299 3 years ago
muy bueno!!!! 5*
anarkipunkal 3 years ago
full metal jacket <3 awsome song!
xyam84x 3 years ago 2
lyrics is great, ( on some point) and agree about video itself- get something much much stronger for video- this is about fearless or whatever - soldiers, not a paintball :D
look for some more violent pictures (not too violent tho`- ).
and yeah keep goin- finish it!!!!!
we`re waiting the final release :D
nywx 3 years ago
what? you couldnt keep up with his lyrics? lol. yeah, i agree... more powerful images would be an improvement, but it isnt bad. finish it damn it
nearheilig 3 years ago
u really need more powerful pictures but i think the rest is good
Katzgetier 3 years ago 2
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wtf?
bigboys1199 3 years ago
temon
pero repitidisimo abusado diria yo xd
tristaniacoil 3 years ago
well ... its ok but maybe choose something more um ... powerfull and animating for the video ...
and well the soldiers were wearing kraut uniforms ... doesnt fit that good. ..
Bizarrnonsense 3 years ago
Um, it's a great start, but the lyrics are a little distracting. Either take them away or only put them the first time the line is said.
but you don't have to listen to me at all :3 do whatever you would like, I was onl suggesting something you might want to try
sardonicXseraph 3 years ago
The Bunker Film:)
rammsteinfire9 3 years ago
great song and not a bad video ! keep up with good job!
IngratoDespina 3 years ago
esta cancion es re wena la amo xD
ladycoil 3 years ago
me encanta este tema
waaaaaaaaa!
metale bailoteo picao a nazi
xD!
p3rsefone 3 years ago
la mejor cancion para mi gusto de grendel
Fieldy665 4 years ago 3
Good film and a good song. I'm interested as to what parts of the film including the plague pit you are going to use if any at all?
Legofuehrer 4 years ago
super!!!!!
msm1791 4 years ago
muy genial el tema
creo q uno de los mejores de la banda
ladysadik 4 years ago
Maybe at the beginning texts with "the marine corps wants..." etc, use a little bit of a zoom in. I was expecting the text to zoop in just a little bit.
Also, I would remove the exclamation point from "in a world of shit!" And don't keep the "my corps! your corps!" in throughout the entire song. It gets to be a bit of a bother. Other than that, it's great.
I would also like to know which movie this is.
mcorneah 4 years ago
heyy I seen that movie xD!
Grendel is GREAT!
lillkill 4 years ago 2
I like it! What movie is it?
GottfriedKilianus 4 years ago
GRENDEL LA RAJA!
;p
mimapunkers 4 years ago
exellent j'adore
Chromdioxyde 4 years ago
not bad
monox1d3child 4 years ago
buen tema
deberian sakar el video pronto
khaoz!
dosemblemas 4 years ago
^^ awesome!
dargela 4 years ago
Oh um i thought this was the beowulf grendel! OOPSIES!
peachyarmadillobabe 4 years ago
I think it should be a fast paced battle between to army's if you can find the footage if not two people will do but It dissevers more that an just plan old army feel show the real pain and violence of war
elijahkun 4 years ago
funny how when the guy actually starts to sing, the subtitles go away lol
cuntalumpacus 4 years ago
no no fuck that full metal jacket and industrial together=used to much
EvilStompyNoize 4 years ago
Id have to agree with Joevirus. EXACTLY what I was thinking, with the text being too cheesy and the clips should be from FMJ. What's with the text anyway? Its not fucking karaoke
Sw1tchback 4 years ago
i love this song!
Ghoulina22 4 years ago
niccce..
Enterthedeath 4 years ago
hey, can someone tell me the name of this movie?
SicROHR666 4 years ago
"The Bunker", that's the name
silkfire 4 years ago
i love this band they're amazing
jadejohnson1 4 years ago
The redone movie with FMJ is here!!
Click on my account to watch it!!! Comment please!
silkfire 4 years ago
The text is too cheesy. Plus the footage should be from Full Metal Jacket. Nothing moves to the music except the text. Remove the text...just start over with the right movie. I'll post my video I made for this last year later today. I play it every week at The ChURcH in Dallas.
Joevirus 4 years ago
this is awesome FINISH IT
coffeebeansandco 4 years ago
perhapst you should use like a drill sgt. and some footage from training sessions (e.g. running) for your vid. think scenes from full metal jacket, jarhead etc. would fit in.
xapha 4 years ago
mad damoooooooooooon xD
Mondblut 4 years ago
Great idea. Suggestions: Drop ALL the wording. Get more military ACTION footage like gunfire, muzzleflashes, military people screaming, people crying, bleeding.. whatever. Just find something really intense.. like a solider/marine getting shot in a firefight for example.
Galakse 4 years ago
yup, same idea i had.... some suggestions:
born july 4th / save private ryan (especially the very beginning (arrival @ oclahoma beach), full metal jacket (altough i already got rid of all those samples used in songs), apocalypse now
Mondblut 4 years ago
i think this good :)
blodyninjaghost 4 years ago
well, i agree with the other comments but the in my opinion the whole video footage doesnt fit with the beats from teh song. take something more exiting, somthing with more action and events in it. This is a fast song and make use of some fast pictures. And btw, posting the lyrics is rediculous IMO. Showing it once okay, but repeating it to the song, uuuh.. no.
Looking forward to the whole video... greex
Mondblut 4 years ago
The text in the begining is good syncronized and looks good but thereafter its a little boring... the whole idea was very good and congrtz to you... but yes i agree use marines and not soldiers... it is a n insult indeed... grz agaainhope to see the new version soon!
ProjectMaelstrom 4 years ago
use marines, and drop the wording everywhere, it gets lame. and mixing in a little live footage wont hurt.
hellgirl44 4 years ago
my mustard
Take footage from Full Metal Jacket
maybe some footeage of grendel too.
and use american soldiers instead germans
besides the movie material is real boring and to slow the agresion is missing
btw: GI is a salop for american soldier
Mafio1337 4 years ago
I agree, however don't use soldiers, use marines. There is a HUGE difference. there is no bigger insult to a marine than calling him a "soldier"
morbidscorpio665 4 years ago
ya... and something from Private J.R. Especially the arrving @ the beach at the very beginning from the movie... explodings, deaths... awesoem for a song like this.
Mondblut 4 years ago
Nice idea indeed, but you might want some GI's instead of Nazi soldiers lol
shutokoupro 4 years ago
What's GI?
silkfire 4 years ago
GI = standart soldier... where r u from? germany? *g*
Mondblut 4 years ago
I resent that.
nightlark4 4 years ago
Live footage of Grendel would be awesome, and instead of the stuff you have now, why not use clps from full metal jacket? it makes sense cause everytime i watch that movie, i hear this song in my head. Imagine wathing soldiers marching and training to this song, gold!
razieltalos 5 years ago
excuse me??
silkfire 5 years ago
Only problem is the footage is Nazis, not Marines
xagcx 5 years ago
we might cooperate if you want.
silkfire 5 years ago
You've got a pretty damn cool idea. But honestly, take out the text and have more action during the aggressive leads. Throw in a few live clips of Grendel while you're at it. Remember there's a difference between just taking a scene and swapping the soundtrack, and making an honest-to-god music video. You've got some good potential though.
Or maybe I'll end up doing this myself.
TheZebu 5 years ago
can u be more specific? what word "KILL"? and where in the film do you want it?
yes it's The Bunker, how'd u know?
silkfire 5 years ago
The subtitles for every word is very amaturish. What I'd suggest is a *VERY* short center screen, stretched to the edges display of the word "KILL"
It's gonna take time. Just throw a lot of ideas together, and then revision revision revision until ONLY what is necessary is left.
It's like taking a tree and widdling it down into a desk.
brittisnow 5 years ago
Is the movie clip from "The Bunker"?
What I'd suggest is using short, repeating clips from the movie the words are from, "Full Metal Jacket".
The "My Corp Your Corp Our Corp Marine Corp" thing was taken while they were doing pt (thats exercise for you civilians) which would be good. Then there is also the murder suicide that you could use repeated, half second clips of that'd work.
brittisnow 5 years ago
Nice piece of work. You should probably try work some Full Metal Jacket in there too just because ^_^
SinBreed 5 years ago
yes exactly what i thought! i just need to watch it, i've never seen FMJ but badly want, cause i know it's more action in there, but what font u think i should use?
silkfire 5 years ago
i'm a huge grendel fan, have u listened to all of their songs?
silkfire 5 years ago
well, in the end of the movie, there's more action
and how bad is the font readability from 1 to 10?
i wanted to pick a distorted font, should i make font size larger? would Arial be better u think? any specific military movie you'd like me to import scenes from? thanx //silk
silkfire 5 years ago
ok, nice, but what do you think about my demo of this video? good/bad?
silkfire 5 years ago
Funny thing, I was making what I'd guess you'd call a music video for this as well..
Its more like a silent film, with Soilbleed V3 setting the theme/mood/atmosphere to make sense of the film
The song/vid play off of each other, without the song the video wouldnt make any sense and soilbleed in any other video would seem kinda out of place
Ill upload when its done
Technophilia 5 years ago
Looks good so far.
MJDHX 5 years ago
nice can't wait to se fihished product
Erastaroth 5 years ago