this story is great and all but (this is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism because this story is amazing and i want it at its full potential) keep the sentences consistent, otherwise some readers will get lost. Also be more descriptive about the surroundings!!! with this i'm positive that this story will become a top fan-fiction!!! ^_^
this story is great and all but (this is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism because this story is amazing and i want it at its full potential) keep the sentences consistent, otherwise some readers will get lost. Also be more descriptive about the surroundings!!! with this i'm positive that this story will become a top fan-fiction!!! ^_^
KaitouSaintTailMeimi 9 months ago
question what is this project for ela in school also is get annoying with the grammer mistakes here and there nt critisizing just saying
Sion428 1 year ago
Thank you!
BlazeandGrave 2 years ago
Great Story I Love it
FebruarFlower1991 2 years ago
part 9 is out!
BlazeandGrave 2 years ago