I love how there's always a couple douches around YouTube posting stuff like "this guys out of key" and "oh that verse should have had this" or "they could have done this, they could have done that." Pretentious much?
You should have sung "So you fold into yourself" twice after each verse. It would have flowed better, and the song would have been 2 minutes. Then again, I'm just really nitpicking here. Great song.
This is my favorite one so far. I have to comment on the "out of tune" remark - yeah, a couple of the singers are not in perfect pitch, but so what? It actually makes the song more charming. Singer #1 looks not unlike Richard Manuel. Singer #2 is absolutely gorgeous. Singer #3 is the best singer of the bunch and an interesting-looking fellow. I could go on but I won't. I like the song a lot.
First, I love ya Mann. This is all in good spirit. Three folks I really agree with on this: first, @whoamancool is right - I was surprised at how many of the singers were out of tune - no one else noticed? Second, in my other comment I agree with @modestrocker that this is the kernel of something that should be more developed. And finally @slut4berniesanders - yeah, who is this fellow in the red smoking jacket? He was such an interesting character - what's his name? what's his deal?
Well done! I think this song is quite amazing. And incredible to have watched the live stream while you were making it. A LOT of work for a 1:34 piece!
@slut4berniesanders That is Brian Langan. An amazing person and musician from Scranton, PA. Formerly of the Sw!ms (find them on youtube) . He's working on a new record coming out later this year.
I thought it was great, and didn't mind the shortness. The diversity of singers was my favorite part. Just play it over and over again if it seems to short.
the ending is not well thought out and the song repeats itself and goes nowhere.
i like the colab aspect but you really need to step up you song game. this is more like an idea i had for a song that i will write when i have the rest of it done a day. not trying to be a dick. just how this song come off. some of your songs are amazing and feel really thought out and planned. it would be nice if all were of the same quality. i would prefer every other day for really thought out songs.
It's ridiculous how catchy your songs are.
evanisgay11 2 months ago in playlist my best songs 2
@evanisgay11 I know, right?! Ha, thanks!
therockcookiebottom 2 months ago
just fantastic!
sovcalzombie 2 months ago in playlist my best songs
I helped produce this song it makes me so happy thank you guys for everything ^^
THEROCKETSUMMERL0VER 2 months ago
@THEROCKETSUMMERL0VER Thanks!! yay!!
therockcookiebottom 2 months ago
love the bass tone
sdsheep195 3 months ago
@sdsheep195 me tooooooooooooooooo
ObserverDriftMusic 2 months ago in playlist my best songs
One of my favs!!!
relaxescape 4 months ago
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MrHumbugz 7 months ago
I love this song
MyAction5000 7 months ago
Brian Langan is such a talent! Amazing that you managed to get him involved!!! Great song. Very album worthy, Jonathan. Nice work!!
Enbigenators 7 months ago 2
rock rock rock!
priceks 7 months ago
Awesome mix of voices - NEED LONGER VERSION!!!
toddtrann 8 months ago 2
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toddtrann 8 months ago
Magic indeed... who is the new guy? (Curly Red Hair)? You should involve him much more... his voice is smoooooooooth.
priceks 8 months ago 3
excellent and moving
earlmball 8 months ago
YES! RE-DO with a longer version - now! Go do it! It's awesome!
priceks 8 months ago 3
OH YEAH!
priceks 8 months ago
Excellent!Although would have liked it to be longer!!Much much longer!! |)
RoiBazar 8 months ago
I love how there's always a couple douches around YouTube posting stuff like "this guys out of key" and "oh that verse should have had this" or "they could have done this, they could have done that." Pretentious much?
FamilyAnimals 8 months ago
woah in my top ten for sure. though its hard to keep count! at 899:)
MrHumbugz 8 months ago
At first I was kind of "ehh" about this jam, but the more I listen to it, the more I LOVE it.
slut4berniesanders 8 months ago
oh i love this =)
hellwroughtangel 8 months ago
You should have sung "So you fold into yourself" twice after each verse. It would have flowed better, and the song would have been 2 minutes. Then again, I'm just really nitpicking here. Great song.
kevin4peace 8 months ago
Beautiful song!
luckyorangeumbrella 8 months ago
This is my favorite one so far. I have to comment on the "out of tune" remark - yeah, a couple of the singers are not in perfect pitch, but so what? It actually makes the song more charming. Singer #1 looks not unlike Richard Manuel. Singer #2 is absolutely gorgeous. Singer #3 is the best singer of the bunch and an interesting-looking fellow. I could go on but I won't. I like the song a lot.
alimonyslim 8 months ago
I really like this one. Good job!
Cavemon777 8 months ago
First, I love ya Mann. This is all in good spirit. Three folks I really agree with on this: first, @whoamancool is right - I was surprised at how many of the singers were out of tune - no one else noticed? Second, in my other comment I agree with @modestrocker that this is the kernel of something that should be more developed. And finally @slut4berniesanders - yeah, who is this fellow in the red smoking jacket? He was such an interesting character - what's his name? what's his deal?
deluded00 8 months ago
Well done! I think this song is quite amazing. And incredible to have watched the live stream while you were making it. A LOT of work for a 1:34 piece!
itsanae 8 months ago
Who is the dude at 0:30? Answer: my new husband.
slut4berniesanders 8 months ago
@slut4berniesanders That is Brian Langan. An amazing person and musician from Scranton, PA. Formerly of the Sw!ms (find them on youtube) . He's working on a new record coming out later this year.
nicegeoff 8 months ago 12
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are these people all singing terribly on purpose?
whoamancool 8 months ago
Definitely saw a Philadelphia brewery sticker in the background of the one girls video... Kinda made me me miss home.
ShtupDillhole 8 months ago
It could even be a nice interlude sort of thing on an album. One song leading to the next and all that.
umbroog 8 months ago
I thought it was great, and didn't mind the shortness. The diversity of singers was my favorite part. Just play it over and over again if it seems to short.
umbroog 8 months ago
@umbroog too*
umbroog 8 months ago
the ending is not well thought out and the song repeats itself and goes nowhere.
i like the colab aspect but you really need to step up you song game. this is more like an idea i had for a song that i will write when i have the rest of it done a day. not trying to be a dick. just how this song come off. some of your songs are amazing and feel really thought out and planned. it would be nice if all were of the same quality. i would prefer every other day for really thought out songs.
modestrocker1 8 months ago
Roar good cast
redice1024 8 months ago
Great! We need more on this one... sounds like the beginning of something
deluded00 8 months ago
Great song, they should play this on the radio.
MoldytoasterMedia 8 months ago
Shout out to @waltzforluma! Great video everybody!
youidiotkid 8 months ago 8
cool
barkiefilms 8 months ago