The Street Fighter Chronicles Episode 1: They Meet

[rajeshomg]

what is this mugen?

[KaoMinerva]

@rajeshomg Yea it's mugen dude

[ExeErdna]

not bad just work on having the music fitting the mood that also means volume level. for more calmer scenes have a bit more quiet and for action and battles have it louder so people can feel the tension. besides that its all trial and error. good luck dood

[KaoMinerva]

@ExeErdna I published the video then added the music in WMM. For some reason I can't do music right in camtasia for shit. Thanks for the advice. Oh and umma use the WOV also in this. I have big plans for Yamazaki. Geese ain't gone play a big role until my next series.

[nickthedick135]

BRO!!! That was Fucking Sick!!! Ohhh man it's looking soo good, So far! Keep em' coming!

[EXmugen]

First off, Nice work! Second, Where in hell did you get that stage they fought on? IT'S AWESOME!! Ok, I think you've done a pretty good job here, but just remember, starting a series is hard work and dedication. Keep it fresh, and add as many elements as you can to it, so that it remains interesting. I can't really give you any other advice, because I myself am only an intermediate fan fiction writer. lol But it's important to always keep the fighters IN CHARACTER. And always do your research.

[KaoMinerva]

@EXmugen Dude I have big plans for this. I forgot the name of that stage there I renamed it Adelheid's Castle Gates.

[EXmugen]

@KaoMinerva Damn! Well it's really an awesome stage. What's the name of the sff file? And yeah man, I'll be keeping up with your story homie...!

[KaoMinerva]

@EXmugen I also renamed the SFF file. Sorry EX!!!

[EXmugen]

@KaoMinerva Wow.... Well aight homie. Thanks anyway!

[DarkValentine1984]

Guess it's time for me to give my personal rating on this.

Your opening execution came out good, to say you've used Camtasia Studio. As a fellow CS user, that's not bad at all with the callout balloon text bubbles. So you got the proper execution and placement.

One thing I would suggest with the balloon callout text bubbles, is that instead of fade in an out for each time talking, make them chain together without the fade out part between characters talking.

[DarkValentine1984]

The only parts the callout balloon text bubbles should fade, is at the start & end of the conversations. I made the mistake of fade in and fade out on each balloon myself in the past. It ate up screen time, because at the time I didn't know you can stretch out the length of the callout with the mouse.

Stretching that out, will allow time for our viewers to read the text, while still having it the way you want. Overall, this is a good start. Aside from missing punctuations. but nobody is perfect

[DarkValentine1984]

So, my personal rating ends with a 4.5 out of 5. It's not perfect, because of all that I stated above, but you get good marks for at least getting the idea & setup correct.

[EXmugen]

@DarkValentine1984 Hey DV! Have you ever checked out my Tia Adventure series? It started out as just a fight, but people thought that I should continue with it, so I did! I stopped on episode 13, but now that I have some free time, I'm gonna go at it again really soon. Check it out if ya haven't seen all the way through, I'd love to know your opinion on it. Thanks!!

[DarkValentine1984]

@EXmugen Sure, I can give it a checkout. Once I get home from work. Just made it at work, so later on, I'll see it,

[KaoMinerva]

@DarkValentine1984 I think I know what you mean. I will have to watch your tutorials on GIMP and all that again. If you remember when I tried this a while ago I gave you a big shoutout because really you taught me everything I know about mugen. Everytime somebody comes to me and say "hey how do you do this in mugen?" I just say "go to youtube, find DarkValentine1984, don't be a noob and impatient, and enjoy the tutorials" LOL!!! You really helped me out alot DV, thenk you!

[Silentrzk]

Interesting Storyline.

[KaoMinerva]

@Silentrzk Woah Zeroz it's you! How you been man I been lookin' for ya. Ain't seen you on CSX or MI wasup. Thanks for feedback

[Silentrzk]

@KaoMinerva

Busy, Really Busy, I'm Usually On At This Time, But I'm Rarely On Xat Or M.I Anymore..I Admin Club Syn, So I Do Occasionally Log In Everyday.

[KaoMinerva]

@Silentrzk Some assholes at MI told me you were dead or some like dat. I knew dat wasn't true. Good to know you straight though dude. I bet you like the series even more once I get into it. Alot is going to happen. Gouki chases Ryu. Gouki has 3 transformations, Ryu has 4. Ken is attacked by Yamazaki at the club. M. Bison plans world domination. Sakura controls the Dark Hadou. It's great dude I bet it will be. In the end Ryu Masters the Dark Hadou and becomes the Ultimate Fighter.

[Silentrzk]

@KaoMinerva

With All The Great Music Your Using, This Series Caught My Attention,lol Btw, Do You Remember Who Told You That I Was Supposedly Dead? xD

[KaoMinerva]

@Silentrzk No I don't it was in the chat box thing on the front page. I was sayin' where is KaoZeroz hoping you probably changed your name. Then somebody said "dude, Zeroz was killed in a car accident"