TBONTB (a vampire) chapter 6, Spying, part 3

[EdwardCullenFreak613]

i love edward and bella and all of the cullens! i love how they always stick together! please don't let anything bad happen to any of them! this chapter was so good it made me cry! thank you all so much for writing these stories! i love them

[PageHarmony]

I liked it, but may i inquire a few tips?... * edward* wouldint be under the bed because he can move very quickly and can hear exactly when charlie would be coming in" kk: ) over all it was good

[JonasCullenAddicts]

true, we didn't really think about that 2 much...thnks for your tip!

[mdebona61]

you guys write so well ...please keep it up!!! :)

[pirategurl46]

love it!!

[angel43232]

love it please make the next soon

[yellowrays]

Edward is sweet!! and it was sooo not boring!!

[madison50364]

Edward is very sweet. I really hope nothing happens to her.

[Lovemusicordeath2u]

That was really good. It wasn't boring at all. Even the parts without alot of action ain't boring. Sometimes it's nice for things to be calm XD