You got off on a few parts by the tempo and such, but this song jumps around on the tempo a lot so it's understandable, and the last two notes sounded a bit flat, but I think that might be because of the way you sang it. You forced it too much, those last notes are powerful, but not meant to sound so powerful as you took them. They're still supposed to be somewhat 'floaty' I suppose is the best word I can think of. >//////////////<
@ArialKyoSohma VERY adorable voice though, and great job for your first fandub indeed. // BTW, I totally mean this only as constructive criticism because you DO have a wonderful voice, and I only want to help aid you in what little way I can. //is shot.
You got off on a few parts by the tempo and such, but this song jumps around on the tempo a lot so it's understandable, and the last two notes sounded a bit flat, but I think that might be because of the way you sang it. You forced it too much, those last notes are powerful, but not meant to sound so powerful as you took them. They're still supposed to be somewhat 'floaty' I suppose is the best word I can think of. >//////////////<
ArialKyoSohma 5 months ago
@ArialKyoSohma VERY adorable voice though, and great job for your first fandub indeed. // BTW, I totally mean this only as constructive criticism because you DO have a wonderful voice, and I only want to help aid you in what little way I can. //is shot.
ArialKyoSohma 5 months ago
Except for the GIANT wondershare icon in the corner, it's excellent!
wowcow123456789 1 year ago
@wowcow123456789 lol sorry i couldn't get rid of it :P but thank you darling
1MissKarlieStarr 1 year ago