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  • HQ my ass

  • @perkstem lol..

  • 240 isnt HQ you dumb piece of shitttttttttt

  • All the weights on my shoulder I can feel my legs shakin. Shakin like the goddamn earth is quakin.. Would you like to step in my shoes? ill do anything that you want me to do. ill do all your homework you'll move on to tenth grade. I promise you, ill clean your room everyday. See I just need some relief, I just need some alone time. To think about me, think about myself and think about I. I could just sit forever and let myself heal, but I'd rather heal others, that's why im here

  • everyday i wish to say to the press, get some rest. people wanna release some of their stress. give me a mic i'll spit and fight for i have right. lets get to point i want a joint, but i cant cos po po 5 0 is on the lock wtf they carryin a glock so president wit al lt´due respect we not ur pet give us the shit legalize it bitch, its time for world to develop n weed is the solution for it, u wanna get high?so do i so les thumbs up for thoses guys,to smoke wit pride i wanna get high on double time

  • thumbs up if you can rap it

  • tis a goof. chorus made this whole song

  • @icecold99 man you dont know what its like to be depressed and have the world on your back do you dawg?

  • I think timbo made this :P it's sick!

  • Think you got it all? Now what about respect?

    lost too many kids due to suicide from neglect, and bullies now whats next? another song about spinning rims? I dont like what it brings or what these other bad rappers stand for, they talk about mistreating women but we lost too many to breast cancer, but life is just that way, thats gay and you retard all stops today cuse the old world is dead and gone away.

  • jus a tip of advice try to turn down the instrumental on the hook its hard to hear j.t sing

  • if you use beats you can still here voice

  • Incredible

    

  • First off Salute to the king of the south for his inspirations, said be king in your own situations, this is a story of making your own manifistations, and make it in to reality, with clarity, hold your head never let it drop, climb to the top, get you shit on lock, then you can see the karma comin in 10 fold, get you shine on like 24krt gold, Live your life, no regrets, take those chances, place your bets, walk with a stride, no limp stand up guy pimp, My verse is now Fin. Remember till the end

  • Thank you 

  • i might get this in one my song

  • @lil502balla ya I agree

  • @IWBTBSjb6

    only cuz hes white stfu

  • i wish eminem would of got this instrumental first, it woulda been fuckin amazing, but props to T.I.

  • My god you guys are shit... No wonder you write on here and don't make tunes...

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  • @MrJeni what's that supposed to be? is that the lyrics or something?

  • wheres the fuckn link

  • I see superman flying in this pop off millennium subliminally, I spread my wings like a peanut butter filling the base of my headquarters up, although this is irrelevant due to the consequences dug up had in the contaminated ocean water, imma blow this factory up until I spot the golden horizon like peanut butter jelly time faggots

  • yeah thats HQ fa' real

  • to long a go so many tears wonderin wen imma see my dear so much pain in this game mine as well blow my brains pops done left have a baby god damn this world so crazy theis whyte boy hear wont shed a tear imma stand up to all me piors in the rain through the fire this is my my desire this your death you dead an gone im be across the state after the song

  • before it was so easy yea did w.e and yea it did please me the devil sure did tease me told the demons to feed me gangs violence thats how i started to loose my balance, it was real i try to forget but the devil want me dead, so many thing going through my head maybe cus the devil put a price on it, i dont gotta lie about it thats how it started, a friend told them told me Trinis brotherhood but where are they now?? no where to be seen grew up togetha since we was kids! how could y think i left

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  • i had people crush me everywhere i went

    treate like shit they thought it was bent

    just cause i wanna make it as a rapper

    they thought i was a muthafucking crapper

    so they gave me shit thought i talked it

    cuz i had a dream that i might fulfill

  • i really wish your parents took the pill

    now i shall go toe to toe with those who dare

    even if you beat me i wont care

    i stood up for my self thats what matters

    my biggest enemy are those who shatter

    dreams, dreams are like houses dont mean they green

    dont mean you can easily crush them for your sake

    millions tried stopping me dreaming now i will take

    whats rightfully mine, my self respect i will have that please

    when i release my first album you fuckers will be on your knees

  • i've been ressurected heres the new me a man who wont take shit the c-o-e proud of who i've become and wat i've achieved you haters lost dont you think you should leave im happy to be where im at and who i've become the old me is gone and dead and done get used to me now i have one say goodbye to the old me son tired of having to care what you think if you were the titanic i would of gladly watched you sink, bitch tell me what you think would be better if i did it need a decent mike
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  • fuck this planet if you see im standin tall yellin fuck the law they dont wanna help my homie at all now he is dead and gone so i speak for the small standin niggas that got friends and fam they dead in a box got no real help cuz pigs wanna ignore the ones in the struggle so tak that pill get so chill think of the real and get some guns and kill so ingorance will fall to the earth and feel ill im so trill im so real holdin the nine point it to your eye so i can tell you good night now you know y

  • Man can i use this for a video ? I am from Germany.

  • spent some time wth my demons, they stay hauntin me.  tried to talk about it, but they aint hearin me. try to be truthful with myself harder than it sounds. inserting my own mental daggers, the self inflicted crown

  • Fuck the Illuminati for ruining our songs Better believe why Pac and Mike dead and gone Always enjoyed when I could sing along Media trick us to believe they wrong Is it me or this society The devil they praise The Lord I seek Help us remove this atrocity Maybe in the end you'll see In God we trust stay strong you must They never really gave a fuck about us So Killuminati til I'm dead and gone Cause I know my soul will live on
  • can i get a download link to this?

  • yeah look

    I been grindin tryin to find the old me, but it seems I expired treads fade away like im rollin on tires. Steady big-boy whippin. Oh, drivin to long. tryin to get home cuz this rap game is killin e like a bullet hit my dome. Heard the book say that Imma press for my goal but I know I need the LORD to guide me home. so Imma stand here with my hands lifted.

  • paino sound so sad

  • ever felt down had no place to sleep ? /

    better stay down cuz up high the demons creep /

    in the gouvernment where u wouldn't excpect /

    this dudes make plans and poison rap /

    toxic images that dirt ur mind, its no lie /

    and wishes of fame turn to the most unmoral crime /

    sell ur soul he asked u to do it, and he screams lets do it /

  • Rap is beautiful when it is inspired by deep emotions.

  • FUCKING NIGGER SLUT!

  • @hfj222fdf funny not

  • Ay i gotta say something IVe been here to long hop like we get blown lets hop out of here cuz we dead and gone cant tell my family but i decided to telly kelly We been here so long i cant remember whats real and whats not we just got sao wrapped up we got cuaght these n-ggas arent as hot they needa b taguht Alone left here to die with no n-ggas behind me or bside me only he can save me
  • All my life I've contemplated, Is this pain all that I've created? My whole existence I've debated, Has my life helped, or exacerbated The lives of others, the life that's mine? Has all this just been wasted time? No part of my life sought to shine, You moved forward, I stayed behind. Your happy life, it makes me ill, My empty life I try to fill, I lack the resources, losing the will, Fuck it, I'll just take another pill.
  • @MrJeni Nice

  • just thought of it str8 up

  • @MrJeni You're good.

  • @KoreaRwkz thanxz

  • @HahaIosers

    Damn... That's some depressing shit bro

  • @HahaIosers Yo, you like to steal things from, the internet, you fake, like prosthetic, you cant ruun no where, you slow, no, you fast, at lyin, you want the proof people? That hes fake? Just go to tha FML poem, google it, then youll see he aint no gee, hes fake, for gods sake, jus look at his channel! He cant rap, he put up a front, but now you can see, hes jus a cunt, and a lier. i gave ya the proof, check it out, hes just a prick, and he makes me sick!!

  • @HahaIosers u stole that shit FAG!

  • @dadrummer12345 its an instrumental retard

  • @saleb13 he she STOLE of the INTERNET. get yo facts straight and stay out of a convo ur not apart of (fuckin peanut gallery)

  • @dadrummer12345 fuckin peanut gallery hahahahah well said bro

  • @dadrummer12345 shut up

  • @HahaIosers Awww im sorry,i know how you must feel,but remember that God loves you and you might not understand why your life is like this but please dont try anything crazy just keep the faith.

  • HEY MAN I AM HERE IF YOU NEED SOMEONE TO TALK TO HENCE THE FACT THAT I WRITE MUSIC MY NAME IS KRIS LET ME BE YOUR FRIEND

  • I miss you --------thats quite simple and plain -------I still feel your spirit ------while I'm veiwing your remains ----- so what remains is pain ------a million thoughts in my brain ------walking in sunshine ----- while praying for some rain ------somebody git they ass kick ----- if they close ya casket -------can't stand the sight of the last time seeing you ----- wishing in another life I could spend it being you

  • (cough) He told me, "my father WAS but not a father"/ as I listened to man on the other line who WAS but not a father, I HAVE a daughter now........I'm thinking why bother!

    Lord tell me right now, am I here to break the trend or follow through with the curse I've been given/ "My son in due time you'll shine, all you have to do is believe....show no fear & listen"

  • im here now/ why fear clowns.

    put it down until im climbin clouds. flawless flo n diamond sound. time n time agin im vybin out n no ill never shut my rhymin mouth until my time is out.

    1 day i hope i make dope boy cake/ rap game overtake/ gettin big like the ozone gape/ let the lames joke n hate / they broke n fake / i dont give a procreate. Ha.

    translation: fuck u..

    i don see u hatin im 2 high above u..

    i could spray da K/ let da H slug u.. so much Hate.. i guess momma neva loved u..

  • @TheAlexanderGrey because clowns are gay

  • Perfect instrumental..especially with only the singing part and no rap.

  • this is not an instumental if it was it would hav no ppl singin

  • @xxSILENTTAKEDOWNx1 You're an idiot, it is an instrument WITH hook. Anyone who can read knows he left the chorus in on purpose. Next times, stop and read before you comment

  • @xxSILENTTAKEDOWNx1 Lol true!

  • when i tried to find my way again another fight for days to end i love my life but i pray for them when im dead and gone i say to them freinds are paper thin no patience for the haters all my family cant stay hating them they debtating them erasing me i stood my ground and kept hands free i used to bring the flame life like candle, wax cant handle me thinking i could just stop burninbut thats haters fantasy caskets look catastrophy never thought my dead and gone wouldtake a turn for tradgedy

  • omg mrdredrizzo you have bad grammer how the fuck did you get 6 thumbs up? that can reduced the pain <<< its that can reduce the pain mongo bollocks ... like i what i been through is the same<< its ... like what i been through god if you put lyrics on youtube correct the mistakes you make man christ, its not fucking rocket science!!!!

  • brush brush, brush gargle gargle spit.

  • Ima totally learn this on piano. REMMIIXXX

  • haha everybody comment on this video but none of my late works :P i rap now

  • @mesay123 RAPPER, me to me to. you gotta check out my soundcloud

    soundcloud(dot)com(slash)ayron

  • you treated me like a beast, that's why i'm pushing you to the side

    you made me feel like the best, but everything you said you lied

    so please get out of my life, there are tons of other girls worldwide

    even though i'm standing strong, it feels like you just died [x2]

  • -A-w-e-s-o-m-e-!!!!! Love the instrumental arrangement...

  • -A-w-e-s-o-m-e-!!!!!

  • i wanna write a song with this..

  • Let em all talk shit, show em what chu bout, be the bigger man command the respect and the rest of success will follow a nigga next, dont act upon what you got in ya head, it just aint worth the pain, no parent wants 2 see their kin pass away first, whats worse, walking away to live another day or ending up merked in a hearse ?

  • I'm doin some lyrics for this, but im white so it probably not sound quiet so good. let me know if you wanna hear some of it mesay.

  • @WillFerrelisGator Look bro, Rap comes from the heart not the skin.

    What you got must be good if you ain't afraid to show it. haterz will alway criticize you so you" just stand up and scream fuck em' all."

    I would be honored to read them.

    Once I find my big book of lyrics I'll let you read them.

    Hit me back, kid

  • @Kenosuke101 alright man will do.

  • what kinda instrumental is this

  • Download link?

  • @LilOblivi go to zamzar.com type in the url in the download video file and enter your email and you can download it, i do this with all the youtube videos i need.

  • i love this song lol

  • where could i download this song?

  • @TheJameslopes bzzzzzzzz.....

  • lol when i hear the instrumentals its like someones brushing their teeth lol

  • colors of my flag is red white&blue a life led by feds fights&booze my lil homie be blazin on da cue lets go drunk, srry im like yo bmw , all brand new illumnatis kkk new world order research no need for new homies im braver and stronger than a birch who da fuck can we trust with all this things turned worst educate evaluate insinuate shit we have to open up our doors before its 2 late random bitch on streets sayin u gay wat ever happened to oh hey as we diverse mo everyday i sit &just pray
  • I've got the OFFICIAL INSTRUMENTAL OF THIS ON MY PAGE!!! NO **** THE TRUTH!!! ON MY INSTRUMENTAL PLAYLIST SECTION!

  • My brother went tha same way I did and now he dead and gone

    So I don't c n e right n da world I only c wrong

    But I still won't give up I'm still standin strong

    And trying 2 find out where da hell I belong

  • Every day I try 2 teach deeze lil niggaz about life

    And how evrything aint gone b alright

    Cuz every night sum 1 get hit

    Just cuz they dumb azz decided 2 snitch

    Da saying iz tru yea lifes a bitch

    It don't matta if u pore or rich

    And it don't matta if u good or bad

    I've seen good kidz get shot and rich ones get stabbed

    So if u good and rich dont try 2 b hood jus be happy wit what u have

    I grew up bad and poor so dat iz y I trap

  • not bad, just that its sorta annoying the music becomes louder and then quieter and louder again, but good job!

  • DEAD && GONE TOOK DA WURDS FRM MA MOUTH NiGGAS GET KiLLED ON DA WEST && DA SOUTH MY BiG BRUH DEAD MAN DATS FOUL ONE 2 DA HEAD CLiCK CLACK BOW NOW WHO GONE RUN OFF BOYS 4 ME NOW NOW iM ALONE iS THiS CRAZy TOWN && yUH NOW iM WEST RCCK TOWN AiNT NO SHAME iN MA GAME NOW GET iN DA VAN && DNT MAKE A SOUND AFTA DAT NiTE HE WASNT FOUND SEE MA FRiNDS && DEy BRUDAS NOW JUST WiSHiNG DAT MiNES WAS AROUND i WAS JUSS 2 WAT i LOOK NOW i NEVER WANNA HEAR DA SOUNDS CLiCK CLACK BOW
  • @RIPSPYDER thats lies nigga

  • @piratelord99 WAT!! && i AiNT yA NiGGA OR ANy BODy ELSES yA DiGG

  • @RIPSPYDER learn some english and type normally fool

  • @piratelord99 NiGGAS i DU WAT DA F.CK i WANNA DO F.CK yU MEAN NiGGA yU AiNT RUNNiN SHiD OVA HERE!!

  • @RIPSPYDER i just enjoy talking to a person who takes so much effort into typing messed up like u do...what is this shit "F.CK yU" ?? and its spelt shit not SHiD

  • @piratelord99 WELL NIGGA i DOES WAT THE F.CK i WANT 2 NiGGA yO ASZ COMMENTED ON My SHiD NiGGA OBViOUSLy DiS iS HOW GiRLS TyPE yU BiTCH ASZ NiGGA FLEXXiN 4 DA TUBE!!!!! && LEAVE ME DA HELL HELL ALONE B4 yUH FiND A BULLET iN yA FACE!!! SHORTy

  • @piratelord99 lol hahahahahahahahaaa

  • now its official

    hes dead and gone

    da dude is a criminal

    nobody won

    how could you do this

    starpped up with your 45

    ready to shoot it

    and watch somebody die

  • gotta look bakk at the things that ive seen

    but i kan barely member nething like it all was a dream

    i did so much trife shit to put a knot in my jeans

    always thinkin so sinister plottin a scheme

    question who i was was it really worth

    brain trapped in haze there was days that i was searchin

    lookin for my role of life but i found no purpose

    bottled up my sorrows my feelins neva surfaced

    is it my name my connection to the game or the mothafuckin stress over whelmin my brain

  • gotta look bakk at the things that ive seen

    but i kan barely member nething like it all was a i dream

    i did so much trife shit to put a knot in my jeans

    always thinkin so sinister plottin a scheme

    question who i was was it really worth

    brain trapped in haze there was days that i was searchin

    lookin for my role of life but i found no purpose

    bottled up my sorrows my feelins neva surfaced

    is it my name my connection to the game or the mothafuckin stress over whelmin my brain

  • @mesay123 yea its funny

  • This is tha' best instrumental ever, Good Work bro !

  • You ain't gonna stop me, so don't even try,

    I'm sick of your words, sick of your lies,

    Haters can say what they want, fuckin' wannabes,

    They want to be me, so I'll let them see,

    What it's like in my life, stuck with insanity,

    Or just let them sit there, keep being mad at me,

    'Cause I ain't gonna change, not for them, not for you,

    I am who I want to be, so it's time to choose.

  • ever ben in the hood wea dem niggas act rong/popin shots at the cops just 2 mak dem move along/get mad quik cuz dey hate real strong/den start a fight just 2 prove dey real/pull out the strap jus 2 mak a nigga peel/tryna earn sum respect/but wen the nigga placed a bet/dey call out dey team den a nigga jus 4get/tryna stay cool but the tears start falin/try 2 mak a move but a nigga keep stalin/and now it too late/gotta face your fate/shuda stayed out the trap house dat day/nw u dad & gon away

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  • Dead and gone, blown to pieces

    Shit will never be the same

    And I can safely say you the only one to blame

    Take a wack cocksucker like you and put him to shame

    Rest in piece forever and always, brother you will always be missed

    this shit i can highly persist

  • it's not caused by him it's caused by what you do believing lies not sure what's true to think we let the devil decieve us and handling it all on our own when we know we can't do anything without Jesus

  • Ever had one of them days when nothin goes right feel surrounded by darkness struggling to find the light it gets darker life gets harder you try to break free but it's tough you got strength but it's not enough figure all hope is lost but you forget about the one who paid the ultimate cost now you're prayin but ya wonder if he hears what you're sayin plus ya faith feels weak almost nonexistent sin tempts you and it's tough to resist it and it just pulls him further from you

  • sometimes, things just need to change, i know we hope it could be the same, or go back to the past and remove some stains, hoping that, that can reduced the pain, but its u the blame,dont show regret thats another way for life to go stress but im over that, it aint over yet its just somethings man that i wont forget like i what i been through, and they hurt i cause i neva look back and take no pause the old me man dead and gone finally a chance for me to move on
  • @MrDredrizzo good shit bro

  • @MrDredrizzo lol so cant make a freestyle now

  • hahaa it do sound like somebody grushin dey teeth.lmao

  • dis da shit. makin lyricss

  • a ghost of my past stay hauntin me, some things I've seen I wish i hadnt need a safe haven directions to heaven started doin drugs when I was merely eleven sold moms meds for some spendin money at this point in time I now realize there was a dark curse infront of my eyes to my surprise, i can really change yeah it takes time, I'll never be the same take this as my revelation, fed up with all this violence fuck this hatred
  • Do you still have this instrumental? if so do you think I can cop it?

  • see me hit the ground runnin/ a hundred miles and still gunnin/ i might be the coldest nigga that ever done it/ i hit em with a flow thatll get me paid money/ at the same time u know you cant trust it/ smooth with the roughness/ thuggish ruggish/ put a little bit of singin' with it and they love it/ bust it/ pull up on em in a bucket/ bust it/ lyrical killah to get dusted...

  • To me this song his a sort of eery, sad, lost and nightmarish feel to it, that's why I wrote that verse.

  • With out stretched arms and he's hopen for help, should've thought about it all befor he sold his self, now he's in a dark realm with the spirits of old, standin at the crossroads where he sold his soul, seein famous dead spirits who made the choice, as they pass I can hear the warnings in their voice, (chorus)

  • I dont wanna deal now I just wanna chill now Make a heart feel now Used to hold steel now I dont wanna kill now Still wanna hold a bill tho Used to run wanna be still tho Played the game too long got nil tho Life gotta lil too low bro Used to be a fool bro everything is cool yo no longer cruel yo dont need two hoes still MOB gotta have mo doe fresh out witta po
  • Hahaha Some One Is Brushing Their Teeth, Lmao

  • Some of these lyrics people are writing are really bad. Please dont share it wif everybody. Period ;)

  • i love the world i mean im not perfect i still need work/

    but it pains me when i see more death than i see birth/

    i see more than the street on i see earth/

    it really hurts to know that people been to jail more than they've been to church/

    while u sitting there wasting ur time right now just think of the kids who are out there who are totally misguided and helpless right now

  • only 14 already seen to many struggles in life seein people get shot when things dont go right lil kids smokin pipe people decide they gonna beat they wife wats up wit that lost 2 many people in this life i gotta stay strong dont do wrong make sure no fights ever come on people talkin were they from how they never do stuff wrong people i use 2 follow probably gonenow im done writin this song

  • FREESTYLE: between my life i gotta lot of regrets/ but after i grabbed a mic and a pair of headsets/ i changed my life around to its best/ i made music better than the rest/ and began to change more with respect/ my momma always told me imma be on ma own/ i wasnt ready til i was fully grown/ now that i am i betta leave home/ to live my life alone in da cold/ im a girll but tell me what you think :P
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  • this sounds better than listening to the full song

    it'll go with some of my magic vids and any new ones

  • sounds like someone brushing their teeth

  • @piratelord99 so true

  • @piratelord99 lol omg it does sound like it hahahahaha

  • @piratelord99 haha for reals

  • @piratelord99 lol thats what i wrote 2

  • @piratelord99 this is the colgate remix. The cavity creeps diss track! lol

  • @piratelord99 HAHAHAHAHA awesome comment.

  • @piratelord99 lmfao!

  • @piratelord99 looooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­ooooooooooool

  • @piratelord99 hell yea lol it does sound like someone brushin their teeth on beat then spitting out da paste and doin it over again

  • @piratelord99 lmao so agree

  • yo, yo, yo, everyday be chilling when u out there struggling trying to look back and think "what a life I had?" Everybody be dieing but I choose to stay strong because u can't stop what u created unless u get shot and die everyday is a stuggle sometimes everybody just wish they could disappear and just fade but i choose to stay strong and think what a life i had because i am doin it for my familys sake

  • lol the sort of emo songs always bring the youtube controversy

  • Look there now you got a life neglect, sittin at your wit your life as a wreck,walking around wit a knife in your hand,you will give it all back just to be the man,turfin around wit your one man band,dont mess wit me cuz here i stand,there you go heres your chance dont look back just take a glance,now i see what i had too see,now i kno what i got to be,now i saw what he had seen,how did i kno you would go missing,were close together its like a life long bond,but everything is just dead and gone.

  • I Like T.I Hes the BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 8)

  • @CalvinDaG bahaha nice try buddy

  • yo my dude; im feelin this i can make this into a ill track whus down? i jus needa instrumental with a hook; and i can mixmaster the rest.

  • the hook is low quality :(

  • where u cant dis beat with hook man holla yo

  • lo-quality

  • The old me is dead+gone. Hey guys go to my page I'll be having a "Dead + Gone (Remix) up soon. I'll let y'all know when it's done!

  • what acapella goes good with dis?? som1 help me plz =)

  • busta rymes

    we made it ft linkin park

    works nicely

    if you mix it right

  • can you send me the instrumental? or post up link

  • now i wulda shot a nigga but i aint playin dhat/ next day my nigga locked up n lames sprayin havin a dude needin aflac/ perfect pictcha ruint in a minute/ families roken up gang violence nigga wit dha glock i hit it/ ya head busted up bro i split it real talk all day now im spittin/ real talk real rap ima quick verse jus killed it

  • ey what up man i keep getting calls bout my niggaz getting shot yeah (chorus) i put everything to risk my life all my thugs die each day im gone/ every day i save myself but i dont save nobody else i know y they looking at me they all trying get this shit free now they won now they cry save urselves be4 u die coz anything happen (ey) now they want the realist shade now they dead gone away (hey) i aint the realist but i kno they saved me now the part of me just left today and nextday u kno me ey

  • if u write lame ass nursery rhymes, keep it to urself no one wants to read that shit.

  • i dont though cuz you bitches suck

  • @ChiTown98756 Yeah people actually do wanna read them

  • @ChiTown98756

    how about you go play with ur moms dildo?

  • so lets take this in / wondering where the peace has been / cus overall no one is listenin to me / i just wanna make this all free / so no one is left behind / so lets change this so everyones alright / cus i hate the homocides / cus one is taking a side / dont want another homie to die/ so make a choice and DECIDE .

    this is whaack . but this is as good as a girl lyric writer can goo .

    aha .

    at least .

  • you dont have to be a guy to write good lyrics.

  • no u ent, Look at Beyonce an that u kan b any one to rite but it takes ages to develop on your ryms neva let no one say u ent good, coz muzik is muzik x

  • im workin on my own lyrics for this song, makin like a tribute for Michael Jackson. It's like still in progress lol still thinkin my 2nd verse ;) Im close 2 finishing it though

  • send me the video when your done

  • @mesay123 k np ;)

  • (lets switch it up a lil bit)WEN YOU HEAR THEY ABOUT ME THEY TALKING BOUT THE BEST/ IM ALL PRIDE RIDA MOTHA FUCKA WHOS NEXT /818 BABY STRAIT TATED ON MY CHEST /TEAR FILL MY EYES FOR MY FALLEN MOM /IN HER EYES HER SON COULD NEVER DO WRONG /I WHIPE THE TEARS OF A MOTHAFUCKEN CLOWN /WIT A CRAZY AS NUMBER I PROSIDE 2 PUT IT DOWN / ILL BE THE FIRST VATO TO THROW THE STONE/AIM IT TO YOUR HEAD MAKE SURE I BRAKES SOME BONES /SEE THE WORLDS THREW MY EYES / (I RAN OUT OF SPACE HAHA FUCK IT) CHICANO 818