don't knowhow anybody could not like this. you should try sending some of this music to a local radio station and see if they will play some on the air. great job! I will be downloading it as soon as it is available.
Nice track bro aint bad at all i enjoyed a lot, i produce beats so i understand how people on the internet can be childish and rude smh. but yeah the only thing i can say is work on mastering your vocals they could use a lil work. other then that youve grown alot, your verses are alot more sturdy then they were the last song i heard. keep it up bruh and to yun deez real talk tell haters to suck yo nuts do what you love bro they just rocket fuel simply inspiration at its best
@UltimateChance I'm assuming you mean cool edit pro right? i got a homeboy that used to use it, and hes pretty good at it. i'll see if i can get in touch wit him and get his facebook or something for you bruh.
hey guys this is yun deez and im srry if you dont like this cause of me dont hate whity just hate me, because i understand my rapping may a bit different thatn what you normally hear from him, but you can just skip my part if it makes you happy, cmon people/trollers he doesnt deserve these dislikes.~Yun Deez
@DjWizzMusic Don't listen to haters man, only listen to people who give real criticism. These guys are just dumb fucks on the internet that should be ignored.
Can I make a suggestion? try to refrain from being this... pretend gangsta stuff. I know you're prolly inspired by other rap and stuff, but it quite honestly sounds very fake in terms of lyrics, you're talking aboutcars, money and this crap, as if you were some idiotic club banger. You may be, what do I know, only seen your reviews and stuff, but it doesn't seem to fit your personallity very well.
err, yes yes I did. Besides the specifics are not important, it's the whole general attitude, it doesn't seem very collected nor very "real", it seems like something someone would put together to "sound cool" not something that really comes from your "heart" if you know wha I mean.
@MaMastoast My attitude? I'm rapping like I got energy and that I'm doing this rap thing. I don't mention killing, guns, cars, hoes, or anything. I'm the second and third verse. As for Yun Deez, he raps about stuff that's in his life. Can't judge that.
So I'm confused. What lyrics made you think I was trying to sound "Too Cool" ?
@Tyrox1992 Love youtube. The place where people don't know how to give out criticism but instead just put "Lolz" and "Lmao" off at a negative comment. Awesome.
@souksavanh5 thats your view against ours. Now if you would turn your attention to the top comments section and the uploders comments: find ONE negative comment your opinon won't be that of a hater who banged a troll and spat out you :)
Another good song man. Great chorus, nice feat. wit Yun Deez, and your lyrics are still really improving. And might I say, your second verse (the ending) was the best verse I've heard you spit. Loved it.
Nice job; do you use a certain rhyme scheme or do you just kind of go with it? If you want to try a rhyme scheme that's good for punchlines google "Limerick" it's a form of poetry but many rappers (more MC's use it though, but..) use that style....I use it sometimes as an up-and-coming MC. Good lookin out
dude, you should put it on ITUNES, cuz it ROCKS!! ;D
theisoganders 2 days ago
third verse was a true gamers verse ! :D great song.
Locc0Glocc 2 weeks ago
don't knowhow anybody could not like this. you should try sending some of this music to a local radio station and see if they will play some on the air. great job! I will be downloading it as soon as it is available.
Iamsopaid1 1 month ago 3
@Iamsopaid1 Thanks man. Only couple of more days =)
UltimateChance 1 month ago
Who are the 9 crazy people who dared to push the dislike button?
AFalconPunch 1 month ago
Nice track bro aint bad at all i enjoyed a lot, i produce beats so i understand how people on the internet can be childish and rude smh. but yeah the only thing i can say is work on mastering your vocals they could use a lil work. other then that youve grown alot, your verses are alot more sturdy then they were the last song i heard. keep it up bruh and to yun deez real talk tell haters to suck yo nuts do what you love bro they just rocket fuel simply inspiration at its best
xIiAmIH1N1Ix 1 month ago 2
@xIiAmIH1N1Ix Thanks man. I wanna get help with mastering so it sounds better. Sadly no clue how to do that =(
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance Maybe I Could Help What program you use to record your music?
xIiAmIH1N1Ix 1 month ago
@xIiAmIH1N1Ix Cool Pro
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance I'm assuming you mean cool edit pro right? i got a homeboy that used to use it, and hes pretty good at it. i'll see if i can get in touch wit him and get his facebook or something for you bruh.
xIiAmIH1N1Ix 1 month ago
@UltimateChance uhm, AUTOTUNE..!? just an suggestion...
theisoganders 3 days ago
Not bad at all nice job
Escov93 1 month ago
Good job bro stay strong.
SnlpErlsNaStY 1 month ago
@SnlpErlsNaStY Thanks man!
UltimateChance 1 month ago
gr8 SONG man...! =D uh, did you write the lyrics, or is this a copycat..:/?
theisoganders 1 month ago
@theisoganders Lol that's my lyrics yes.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
happy birthday whity , great song btw ;D
SuperComplainer 1 month ago in playlist My Music
keep doing what you love man. fuck the haters :)
SuperSurvivalHorror 1 month ago
hey guys this is yun deez and im srry if you dont like this cause of me dont hate whity just hate me, because i understand my rapping may a bit different thatn what you normally hear from him, but you can just skip my part if it makes you happy, cmon people/trollers he doesnt deserve these dislikes.~Yun Deez
DjWizzMusic 1 month ago
@DjWizzMusic Don't listen to haters man, only listen to people who give real criticism. These guys are just dumb fucks on the internet that should be ignored.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance yea man its kool lol imma still do projects with you whenever you need me bro
DjWizzMusic 1 month ago
Can I make a suggestion? try to refrain from being this... pretend gangsta stuff. I know you're prolly inspired by other rap and stuff, but it quite honestly sounds very fake in terms of lyrics, you're talking aboutcars, money and this crap, as if you were some idiotic club banger. You may be, what do I know, only seen your reviews and stuff, but it doesn't seem to fit your personallity very well.
MaMastoast 1 month ago
@MaMastoast Umm didn't mention cars or money or any of that....did you even listen 0_0
UltimateChance 1 month ago 4
@UltimateChance
err, yes yes I did. Besides the specifics are not important, it's the whole general attitude, it doesn't seem very collected nor very "real", it seems like something someone would put together to "sound cool" not something that really comes from your "heart" if you know wha I mean.
MaMastoast 1 month ago
@MaMastoast My attitude? I'm rapping like I got energy and that I'm doing this rap thing. I don't mention killing, guns, cars, hoes, or anything. I'm the second and third verse. As for Yun Deez, he raps about stuff that's in his life. Can't judge that.
So I'm confused. What lyrics made you think I was trying to sound "Too Cool" ?
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance
And you're right,t he car related linse were from your friend, but same point to him then
MaMastoast 1 month ago
so bad lmao
Tyrox1992 1 month ago
@Tyrox1992 Love youtube. The place where people don't know how to give out criticism but instead just put "Lolz" and "Lmao" off at a negative comment. Awesome.
UltimateChance 1 month ago 5
@UltimateChance Great job WHITEY! Wait is your birthday the day you released this song or the album? Anyways HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Scottsmaster1 1 month ago in playlist My Music
it was good until whity started singing....
souksavanh5 1 month ago 2
@souksavanh5 thats your view against ours. Now if you would turn your attention to the top comments section and the uploders comments: find ONE negative comment your opinon won't be that of a hater who banged a troll and spat out you :)
amyar123 1 month ago
@souksavanh5 Difference between singing and rapping =D But thanks for that insightful criticism. Always helps.
UltimateChance 1 month ago
Lame
xXmostwantedXx2010 1 month ago
Great Job Whity!
freedom9466 1 month ago
@freedom9466 Thanks =)
UltimateChance 1 month ago
Another good song man. Great chorus, nice feat. wit Yun Deez, and your lyrics are still really improving. And might I say, your second verse (the ending) was the best verse I've heard you spit. Loved it.
Keep it up, brohams!
Eman825 1 month ago
@Eman825 Thanks man! I also really enjoyed writing/Recording the second verse =)
UltimateChance 1 month ago
Nice job; do you use a certain rhyme scheme or do you just kind of go with it? If you want to try a rhyme scheme that's good for punchlines google "Limerick" it's a form of poetry but many rappers (more MC's use it though, but..) use that style....I use it sometimes as an up-and-coming MC. Good lookin out
XJbLIVEfilmsX 1 month ago
@XJbLIVEfilmsX I'll check it out, thanks man! I'll check out your work too =)
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@UltimateChance When I post some of my stuff that is, but I'll let you know, thanks! Be on the lookout out for Crass Fiends...my rap group aha =)
XJbLIVEfilmsX 1 month ago
Hoping you Mixtape is as good as everything you've released so far. Really good job Whity
AFalconPunch 1 month ago
@AFalconPunch I promise it is =)
UltimateChance 1 month ago
@ultimatechance Welcome bro you deserve it.
Fenonity 1 month ago
This is a Thank YOU for EVERYONE who has supported me up until now. It means SO much. Thank you!
UltimateChance 1 month ago 15
Both of you rap very good in this song. Don't give up Whity! (:
mtkenn97 1 month ago in playlist My Music 4
@mtkenn97 I won't, thank you =)
UltimateChance 1 month ago