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From: xUnderneathThisSmile
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  • omg, i get hooked to another one o fyour stories and i start crying. and this is why i continue coming back to your stories cuz they are too good, brotherly moments are my favorite <3

  • @crazygurl5455 Awh, thank you so much! Brotherly moments are my favorite too, so I make sure to add at least one in everything I write. :)

  • Awww, Nick is gonna be SO sadd!

    Aw, I hope he`ll be okay..

  • why did you take so much time to post this part?

    I've been waiting for it terribly

  • Omg Nick is going to be even more crushed now I hope he doesn't go all depressed and stuff! I feel so bad for him :/

  • Good Lord. :'( I seriously cannot imagine going through a situation like this. ._.

  • That, my friend, is beautiful. Simply brilliant. Wonderful writing.

  • AWE Poor nick!! No one deserves somthing like this!! It's amazing! I loved it! I can't wait for the next one! THX!!

  • oh no. o:

    poor nick, he's gonna be even more crushed then before.

  • Ahhhhhh u end it there I think I'm going o cry now even though I don't care for delta much this Is sooo sad I feel so bad for nick that he has to go through all of this at least he got to say I love u one last time before she died :,(

  • This was amazing!!!

    This part was so sad!!! :( Poor Nick :( I honestly can't imagine going through something like this

    It made me tear up and it didnt help the fact that I was listening to Show Me the Meaning of Being Lonely by the Backstreet Boys while watching this

    You're an amazing talented writer!!!

    Loved it :)

    Cant wait for more :)

  • i loved how nick pretty much went through all the stages of accepting a grieving in this..anger, depression/sadness, denial, blaming others, etc. it was very real. oh and nice quoting "One Day At A Time" with the "tried to smile, frowned instead" thing haha. but also so sad at the end omg:((( i had a feeling that would happen..and i recognized that whole thing at the end with the "can u tell me u love me?" thing lol :P but yeah, poor nickk</333 great job!

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