Hi, need a lil' bit of helping hand here. I'd like to subtitle Alan Ball's short The M Word into my language but there're a few pieces I cannot make out.
I've posted the transcript at my LiveJournal page (see the URL in my profile), could anyone please proofread and fill a couple gaps?
Of course not: In England we have to wait decades before films and TV shows come out. So when you're 30 I'll let you know if I liked Alan Ball's latest work. ;)
Yeah I know but usually I get rentals first rather than imports or buying it straight out.
I thought American Beauty was excellent.* You?
It's a shame that Thora Birch doesn't get more work. She was in AB and Ghost World and was great in both.
* I usually don't describe why I like films in detail b/c I think film analysis is sort of useless for screenwriting. Screenwriting. more instinct based imo.
I feel what it meant to me, I don't know what it meant to me, not really.
E.g. the first scence with the VO: was amusing, unnerving and a little depressing. Not sure why though, it just makes me feel all those emotions. I could try to describe why but I don't think it will help my screenwriting in anyway or improve my enjoyment of the film.
I'm incapable of thinking of film in that way I believe.
I think like: "How film analysis help my screenwriting" From research I conclude that it can't imo.
When you say "what did you think" of American Beauty could you be more specific please? Do you want me to comment on a certain line of dialogue or story aspect? I'd be happy to try.
I guess you're thinking from the perspective of an actor, I'm thinking from the perspective of a screenwriter (assuming you don't screenwrite.)
You did not write American Beauty, so if you talk about the film and what you thought it meant will not hurt your screenwriting. Unless you are writing AB2.
I have read Screenwriting books before and I would like to write one.
I have no thoughts on the film, just emotions and images roaming around in my mind. It's difficult to describe. If you tell me e.g. "what did I think about scene x" and then tell me what you thought about it, that might help me.
btw I hate screenwriting books and think they're useless. E.g. in that they can't tell you how to write amazingly good films. If they can't tell me how to improve my screenwriting I don't care for them. See Kaufman's Adaptation as an e.g.
There is a general format to writing a screenplay and I found that a teaching book helped me. I am not talking about story or ideas just format. If you dont have the right format people wont even look at it!
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Hi, need a lil' bit of helping hand here. I'd like to subtitle Alan Ball's short The M Word into my language but there're a few pieces I cannot make out.
I've posted the transcript at my LiveJournal page (see the URL in my profile), could anyone please proofread and fill a couple gaps?
ElPerroBrian 2 years ago
Best screenwriter ever ladies and gentlemen (Six Feet Under season 1 Pilot episode.)
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
That Pilot is probably my favorite episode of the series!
BentHenny 2 years ago
If I had to chose I would say the Pilot is the best episode, so I agree.
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
But really they were all great! What did you think of Towelhead and have you seen any episodes of True Blood?
BentHenny 2 years ago
lol at Towelhead and True Blood!
Of course not: In England we have to wait decades before films and TV shows come out. So when you're 30 I'll let you know if I liked Alan Ball's latest work. ;)
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
You can watch or order the DVD online of Towelhead and True Blood!
What did you think of American Beauty?
BentHenny 2 years ago
Yeah I know but usually I get rentals first rather than imports or buying it straight out.
I thought American Beauty was excellent.* You?
It's a shame that Thora Birch doesn't get more work. She was in AB and Ghost World and was great in both.
* I usually don't describe why I like films in detail b/c I think film analysis is sort of useless for screenwriting. Screenwriting. more instinct based imo.
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
OK well you can rent Towelhead and True Blood online!
I was just wondering what you thought about American Beauty and what it meant to you. Its not like you wrote it.
BentHenny 2 years ago
I feel what it meant to me, I don't know what it meant to me, not really.
E.g. the first scence with the VO: was amusing, unnerving and a little depressing. Not sure why though, it just makes me feel all those emotions. I could try to describe why but I don't think it will help my screenwriting in anyway or improve my enjoyment of the film.
What did you think of it?
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
Once again the question about American Beauty was not to help your screenwriting because that script is already written.
BentHenny 2 years ago
I'm incapable of thinking of film in that way I believe.
I think like: "How film analysis help my screenwriting" From research I conclude that it can't imo.
When you say "what did you think" of American Beauty could you be more specific please? Do you want me to comment on a certain line of dialogue or story aspect? I'd be happy to try.
I guess you're thinking from the perspective of an actor, I'm thinking from the perspective of a screenwriter (assuming you don't screenwrite.)
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
* how can
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
You did not write American Beauty, so if you talk about the film and what you thought it meant will not hurt your screenwriting. Unless you are writing AB2.
I have read Screenwriting books before and I would like to write one.
BentHenny 2 years ago
I have no thoughts on the film, just emotions and images roaming around in my mind. It's difficult to describe. If you tell me e.g. "what did I think about scene x" and then tell me what you thought about it, that might help me.
btw I hate screenwriting books and think they're useless. E.g. in that they can't tell you how to write amazingly good films. If they can't tell me how to improve my screenwriting I don't care for them. See Kaufman's Adaptation as an e.g.
Feel free to correct me.
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
There is a general format to writing a screenplay and I found that a teaching book helped me. I am not talking about story or ideas just format. If you dont have the right format people wont even look at it!
BentHenny 2 years ago
I just use Final Draft, does it all for you all the formatting. I have a demo version, didn't need to buy it.
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
Where did you get it?
BentHenny 2 years ago
I'll send u the link if I can find it.
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
What about Peter Krause he is great as well.
BentHenny 2 years ago 3
Krause is awesome, but Lauren Ambrose is even better imo.
TheRealBladeRunner 2 years ago
American Beauty is Alan Ball's David. Six Feet Under is his Sistine Chapel.
jstephenj 2 years ago 3
Very aptly put!
abgrunder 2 years ago
i wish he'd come to my uni
smithhedgehog 3 years ago
Awesome, thanks for posting this.
seventyeight 3 years ago