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melissais 2 years ago
excellent!!! well done! shame you had to censor it for the reading.
NickOLarse999 2 years ago
it's okay, I didn't mind too much.. the prize ($75 gift card to my favorite bookstore) was totally worth censoring myself for :)
kaile 2 years ago
More delicious than bacon? Hard to believe. But amazing arrangement of words!
UKISOCIETY 2 years ago
Fantastic. Absolutely bloody fantastic. "And when our mouths meet, I find myself spilling." GOD, Kate. BRILLIANT.
cassiekitsch 2 years ago
I actually felt super uncomfortable about reading that line because I thought it would be construed as "When we kiss, I get wet," which is not what I meant. haha.
kaile 2 years ago
heyy well thats what i thought? i just gotta get my mind outta the gutter
what did you mean tho?? :o
you sound so smart. i suck a poetry, but i love watching people read it :0
melissais 2 years ago
it's kind of like.. when you really really like someone & they make you melt. you just feel like your body & mind & everything have all turned to liquid & you can't keep yourself together. that's what I meant.
kaile 2 years ago
aww how cute! :')
i know exactly what you mean, now i think thats a really good way to put it :)
awesome 5 stars :)
melissais 2 years ago
Congratulations on winning
Trueskorn 2 years ago
Loved it
huntrjumpr 2 years ago