I like that you tried to make a trailer, but this one is terrible. The music is good, but you made the all too common mistake of totally muting the audio. This is compounded by scenes where characters are speaking, silently. The titles are possibly the worst I've ever seen. It's like what, size 36 Arial that's not centered? Lastly, the source material is 'dirty', showing logos and such. It was reasonably well sequenced, but poorly executed. Good try.
I have to tell you I really enjoyed your story. I have to read it again before I start on Part 2. I think you did a fantastic job keeping them in character. Love your SPARKY scenes.
Hi, I am reading your story and I have to say that this is a nice trailer. Especially the John/Elizabeth kiss,, I am looking forward to more chapters, as I've already told you on fanfiction!!
I like that you tried to make a trailer, but this one is terrible. The music is good, but you made the all too common mistake of totally muting the audio. This is compounded by scenes where characters are speaking, silently. The titles are possibly the worst I've ever seen. It's like what, size 36 Arial that's not centered? Lastly, the source material is 'dirty', showing logos and such. It was reasonably well sequenced, but poorly executed. Good try.
XCVGVCX 5 months ago
I have to tell you I really enjoyed your story. I have to read it again before I start on Part 2. I think you did a fantastic job keeping them in character. Love your SPARKY scenes.
gerrisexy1 1 year ago
@gerrisexy1 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
Hannahk554 1 year ago
That looks rly good! I'm going to go read it! XD
SuzakuHayasora 3 years ago
Hi, I am reading your story and I have to say that this is a nice trailer. Especially the John/Elizabeth kiss,, I am looking forward to more chapters, as I've already told you on fanfiction!!
imippie 4 years ago
I'm glad you like the trailer, the links are in the video info if you're interested. I get the music from a couple of places, mostly the internet.
Hannahk554 4 years ago
great video
LORDNIALL 4 years ago
A fantastic video to go with a brilliant story!
Steph7085 4 years ago