It has good qualities but you're delivery could use some inflection. The lyrics are alright but you have to serve them. It takes time. I have respect for anyone trying to do it. Ok that isn't true, but you do have some talent. Work, work, work!
@b0nGMuZiK4 You can rap, no doubt, but i seem to be the only one who isn't fully satisfied, but since your Youtube account says experimental, so experiment with more clever lyrics, and ill subscribe and hope to see more.
people hate wayne entirely too much like wayne can't spit a SINGLE coherent verse...then you attempt your botchy emotionless pattern rap that could possibly have some merit but is drowned out by how bored you sound and how much you dilluted the fucking flow. It felt like hearing ludacris do the pause stop shit on that crap with nicki for 5 minutes straight. That was the negative, the positive is that you have done much better than maybe 90% of the other contestants. good job all in all. liked!
Your lyrics are to repetitive.. you don't need to mention the same word 2 or 3 times in a sentence, which is what you were doing for most of it. But i did like it, liked the pace.
Comment removed
krome409 1 month ago
RHYMES ARE ILLLL
pctech7827 1 month ago
good shit bro
SourThaD 1 month ago
Wow! very very good! thats talent man!
babygyal412 1 month ago
This Is Smokin Music!!! damn... now i need to go get my bong. lol. good job bruh
JstaxxTV 1 month ago
DIRTY~ SPITTIN HARD! BONG!
CraigyGCool 1 month ago
Dope flow :)
TheBoyslikebritain 1 month ago
keep doin ya thing - sandman
TOStheARTIST 1 month ago
FRESH OUT THE BONG !!!!
MIDATLANTICMAFIA 1 month ago
yea fam you got a crazy flow keep it up respect !!!!
Blizzkid21 1 month ago
bong muzik ?u stoner
fuckengipsy 1 month ago
@fuckengipsy LOL b0nGMuZiK for two reason look at the video it explains it the mic is in a bong and blaze up bong before goin in aka b0nGMuZiK
b0nGMuZiK4 1 month ago
Your flow goes hard as fuck, that's god damn impressive you could do that over one take
bananaswag45 1 month ago
thiiiis guys straight fresh off the bong!! hahaha
Dope verse bro keep it up.
You got my vote!
ARESSMUSIK 1 month ago
motherfucker that was tight,
switch up your flow a bit bro and that will go off
xSkiitlezz 1 month ago
tight shit bro i hope u smokin good like me strictly medicated haha lol midwest connect
SuperDvv 1 month ago
that a-z went hard.
Bdice3 1 month ago
@Bdice3 appreciate that fam your entry is too nice though
b0nGMuZiK4 1 month ago
shit goes hard bro nice
StitchfaceKilla859 1 month ago
Goodshit mah dude, sickk flow, your gettin a vote from me
CassHadleyMusik 1 month ago
Shit is sick son, definantly got some competition.
Kawola2010 1 month ago
Good shit man, you def put a lot of work into this spittin over the whole beat and doin it in a single consecutive take
diabolic42090 1 month ago
this is good yo, i like how u show what you say
RickAlmeidaNemesis 1 month ago
niiice entry :)
KronikalOfficial 1 month ago
good shit..... i still gotta props merkmikzgogetit..... he goes bacon :D...
GBRLLINK8892 1 month ago
oh schnap! slight lil wayne, Rick Ross,and Wacka Flocka diss in this video haha
RyMicTheKing 1 month ago
SICK!!!
Deeda1nonly 1 month ago
bong man killin the flow! respect
skofficialtraxx 1 month ago
Feelin' that flow. Good shit
afronuke 1 month ago
fukin nasty ! good shit bro keep doin ur thing lookin foward 2 hearin mor
Konscious973 1 month ago
HA! "get paid like treason" Loved it
SecularCondition 1 month ago
Pretty Dope! Kepp making music!
D2unezandLKZ 1 month ago
this is dope man, keep showin love and makin music , it goes a long way, much respect , peace man!
cooper2322 1 month ago
yea it was tight a lil too fast to really feel the flow but sick none the less
nyck623 1 month ago
HOLY SHIT WHAT DID I JUST WATCH? SWAG. THTS WHT I WATCHED. KEEP ON.
SkidittlesMusic 1 month ago
dope as hell!
maxitoh23 1 month ago
nice spitting man! like it yo!
SamYoOfficialYTC 1 month ago
went hard and kept it fresh
teflon5don5ick 1 month ago
not bad.. your cadence was on point :)
wordplayforyourears 1 month ago
Yo KJ .. wait I gotta take a drink of my juice box where was I ? .. I dig you, you're my fav. yeeahh what. <33
caaaaarlito 1 month ago
Hell yeah, pretty dope son!
davidmilane 1 month ago
FUCKING BONG MAN BLOWING UP
ovoxox 1 month ago
nice man, legit lyrics! but agreed add a lil more flo but still dope!
TheInfiniteProd 1 month ago
You killed it, great lyrics but try to add some more flow, just some constructive criticism. Hope you get some recognition for the contest
TheRelapse8 1 month ago
no offense but idk why this has so many views
TheConroflow 1 month ago
@TheConroflow
Cuz it's a sick flow
PhatFarmNBabyPhat 1 month ago
yooo that bong making u write some dope ass lyrics
BURNA2015 1 month ago
good shit bro, check mine!
CFMusic123 1 month ago
sick and creativee!
POSER5150 1 month ago
pretty good lyrics. but your voice and lyrics are terrible. slow it down, and have some character behind the voice sounds like your talking.
Missssta 1 month ago
I like it, the voice needs work though, and at the begining it seems like you just saying shit for the sake of rhyming not for rapping
MarshallMathersSongs 1 month ago
damn
datlibra17 1 month ago
dopew son its projecttt
projectncobx 1 month ago
DOPE DOP DOPE
RoyalMusicChannel 1 month ago
shits so dope man. i hope me n u are in the top.. good luck
hafwaybrown 1 month ago
thats fuckin dope man!
chrisogmartine 1 month ago
B-MAN!!! everyday <3
TheBritSkeet 1 month ago
This is ill man. Super clever with it. That weed goin to work haha
MrMusicMakinMonkey 1 month ago
dope
adsgfuc 1 month ago
canada swag for sure !!
SopoProductions 1 month ago
Sick shit man!!
dextorr23 1 month ago
Canada swagg!!!
D3stroyer0fStup1dity 1 month ago
I feel it man
torreonebitelott 1 month ago
Ill Man.!
BARandSalex 1 month ago
The flow was on point homie, looks like I got competititon lol
ShyMnh 1 month ago
I Liked This, Good Job !
YahYaLyric 1 month ago
haha shit was pretty dope bro
iLLDefect 1 month ago
swag
merkmikzgogetit 1 month ago
Thumbs up, skills and always a + that you ACTUALLY rap live opposite all of these playback fkers
InkFreestyles 1 month ago
My man! as always u deliver and spit flames. bless
Mstar
TheRealMainstar 1 month ago
Get em Bong Man!
DefXMusic 1 month ago
sick shit man..
RatchMusic 1 month ago
It has good qualities but you're delivery could use some inflection. The lyrics are alright but you have to serve them. It takes time. I have respect for anyone trying to do it. Ok that isn't true, but you do have some talent. Work, work, work!
nina98498 1 month ago
Tight!
GabyThinkPositive 1 month ago
good shit bro, check out my entry you killed it
ephstigers4 1 month ago
glad i came across this u have my sub lol keep rising
ToneyDaRapper1995 1 month ago
bong man killing it
S0ftMuffin 1 month ago
PRetty fresh homey! Long as track but fresh ass bars man! Keep it up! DMV stand up!
JoeyDeJesusMusic 1 month ago
Bong Man rips it! literally!
MrTEdwards14 1 month ago
you killed it man
gloc709 1 month ago
Firreee!! Bong Man!
scorpzi122 1 month ago
actual talent in this contest hahah good shit man
Noon10 1 month ago
are you white?
NorwayRapDamn 1 month ago
GET EM BONG MAN
BoomBadaTv 1 month ago
your flow is awful, and your lyrics are decent. no hate just truth
styllspittin 1 month ago
YO THAT SHIT WAS SO FUCKING AMAZING
NoEmotion954 1 month ago
@NoEmotion954 THANK YOU...I HONESTLY LOVED YOURS MAN THATS MEANS A LOT GOOD LUCK.
b0nGMuZiK4 1 month ago
Cunt's that be hating suck a Dick
skipstallion619 1 month ago
You're voice was sick, but 90% of it was typical rap... sex, money, and drugs... still sick bro.
ThatAfricaGuy23 1 month ago
@b0nGMuZiK4 You can rap, no doubt, but i seem to be the only one who isn't fully satisfied, but since your Youtube account says experimental, so experiment with more clever lyrics, and ill subscribe and hope to see more.
maxjones14 1 month ago
THERE U GO BRO - DOIN THA DAMN THING HOMIE!
FelonyRecordsCE 1 month ago
This Creative
TheTruthHurtsMost1 1 month ago
dope shit bro.
IAmOneTake 1 month ago
Really Dope Dawg Fast Flow Crazy.
phxsn 1 month ago
people hate wayne entirely too much like wayne can't spit a SINGLE coherent verse...then you attempt your botchy emotionless pattern rap that could possibly have some merit but is drowned out by how bored you sound and how much you dilluted the fucking flow. It felt like hearing ludacris do the pause stop shit on that crap with nicki for 5 minutes straight. That was the negative, the positive is that you have done much better than maybe 90% of the other contestants. good job all in all. liked!
rashad1595 1 month ago
niceeee mann!
1mikeymoran 1 month ago
good shit bod mon!!!!!
SeraphimMetalBand 1 month ago
thats wassup man
waydesaffield 1 month ago
Decent
CurrencyENT 1 month ago
Dude got balls sayin ni**a haha give the dude credit! good song
MidwestMovement001 1 month ago
oh shiiiiiit dude subbed as soon as i heard the first words, stayed subbed cuz the rest was fucking awesome!
blacknight560 1 month ago
your best song yet
S0ftMuffin 1 month ago
<333333
caaaaarlito 1 month ago
holy fuck..
dang
benthefreshfruitguy 1 month ago
flow is dope g needs a little more emotion though
mboatner 1 month ago
this shit goes hard homie good luck
RobbyRob215 1 month ago
good shit man
deandrelovestosk8 1 month ago
Your lyrics are to repetitive.. you don't need to mention the same word 2 or 3 times in a sentence, which is what you were doing for most of it. But i did like it, liked the pace.
maxjones14 1 month ago
Dope
Keep It Up
Turn In Up
lagit313 1 month ago
Dope lyrics man but your voice is a little monotonous
PAULAKAAJ 1 month ago
Goodshit Tdot represent.
JlavsTV 1 month ago
This Is Dope but you kept a monotone Lol
PAULAKAAJ 1 month ago
Check out my entry Mez.
vanshires 1 month ago
Comment removed
vanshires 1 month ago
you got flow, you write tight, but its like you're rapping "out of character"
mightymadkap 1 month ago
dope entry bro !
NeightDK 1 month ago
Good lyrics, nice way to start it and it came out cleaner than a lot of entries. Good stuff.
TheKiDDHeartbreak 1 month ago
I thought he was whack before but its just that he needs to work on his voice production and clarity with the words.
Hes really not bad he has potential but clarity is REALLY important.
ICExRED 1 month ago
Must admit bro...this was sorta like a mindfuck lol, nice work on this...The vid idea was cool and it helped with picturing wat u were saying
RockLSpiveyPX 1 month ago
sickness
SoldierSlette94 1 month ago
this is nice but your voice man ehhh
OBEYB0SS 1 month ago 11
Dope shit haha
shoanmachamire 1 month ago
gettem bman
GreenEyeShadow 1 month ago
B-Man! Look like you my only comp!
dirtysmurf88 1 month ago
Good shit bro
SlyNye 1 month ago
good shit man your flow is improving keep it up see u in the top 25 lol
EnfinalOnMars 1 month ago
pretty dope b man
420bigmook 1 month ago
i had those nike sb's that was in the pic lol
iWarpz 1 month ago
Hot like the fire
godgryphon 1 month ago
whhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttt i saw your comment and thought you would've sucked, but this shit was straight sick
nameis12396 1 month ago
nicce
joecash5bucks 1 month ago
We have a winner.
Like Fab there aint no competition.
smokewoodz 1 month ago
yeaaa thats that shit
Xoa13 1 month ago
TightWork! Came Thru & "LIKED" for not taking a breath and killing it!!!
Check My Entry Out!!!
HurtEmGangTV 1 month ago
@HurtEmGangTV i got you ima check that out in a minute!!! i show love to all
b0nGMuZiK4 1 month ago 5
THIS SHIT IS CRAAZY,,,,,, MAN GOES OFF ON THE FLOW.... ONLY BEEN IN THE GAME LIKE 5MNTHS NOW..... KILLA!!!! #RDE
JDon683 1 month ago
Comment removed
DrizzyJamesOfficial 1 month ago
B MAN THE ILLEST, LOVE DIRTY BALLS
kiLLuminati28 1 month ago
lol shit did u breathe? haha
ovoxox 1 month ago
that was fucking sick
ovoxox 1 month ago
fucking bong man
ovoxox 1 month ago
good shit bro.
dizisill 1 month ago
Keep Grinding fam~!!!!! i see you putting in craazzzy work fam,,,,this track is FIYA!!!
RawDogExposed 1 month ago
dope shit man. haha. flow - Vissionz
ADivyneMind 1 month ago
Bong with another banger!
SLlilpro 1 month ago