Thanks :) I wouldnt go that far though lol, an invasion is always a great concept but an invasion with no destruction/fighting/conflict doesnt sound as fun :P
@TheMissle21 Cheers for the backup, I did try lol, and its not my job, nor is it something I do in my spare time, it was created after afew classes! Could of been a lot worse lol...
heya 3 almost 4 years now, hope you have improve skills and maych real vid with 3D keep on getting better you can earn good money with it, and with good histories
LOL, sounds so rubbish put into a sentence doesnt it? It was at the time of the initial bird flu scare, and I wanted to make it a short piece with a twist, and cut out the complicated bits (ie. a war, demolition) - that was my easiest way out!
the models were a bit low poly but i loved your booster effect you had very good and i like the mech model good project overall just more detail and it can even better
For one of your first projects, that's pretty good. I think it would have been significantly better if you'd incorporated moving shots, and had done just a bit higher pold models. But overall quite a good job for a first project. God knows my first project with Maya and After effects was nowere near that good.
Hey man. Don't listen to other people tell you you're an amateur. You did good and the more you keep doing your stuff the better you become. I do some modelling and i am still learning about Materials and character rigging. Its a good video and the planes are good.
Thanks bud, unfortunately I am an amateur! This was pretty much the last 3D piece I did, its not really my focus :) Subscribing to your profile though, keep us up to date on how you get on
great job on the compositing, the models weren't really that great, idk how you did the transparent ships flying around, im guessing a displacement map, but that was really cool.
if you gonna start doing stylish videos your very amatur at the moment. imange a good music video with 3d effects all in rhythem and in time with the best animation and unrealstic which is releastic possable mostly without immganation. (you know when you listen to a good tune and you vizailure a cool music video with you friends dancing and all that style and 3d that comes with it. ) well erh come on pick up the pace !!!!
the invasion scene is too long with nothing interesting happening in it. shorten it or add something more interesting than camera pans.
finally the biggest killer is the fake look of the models against the photographs. you need to add some serious film grain and desaturate the colors of the models to make them fit in better with the photographs (or in your future videos, video film). this is what makes pro cg stand out from amateur cg. sorry to sound harsh, just hope these criticisms help out.
sorry but didn't think it was very good and the music was annoying and reeked of amateur video. please take this as constructive criticism and not bashing of your video:
the models walked poorly. for example the feet seem to be slipping as the machine walks, is he walking on ice or something?
the models move too slowly. it makes the movie boring. the model turns its head too slowly, again, boring. nobody wants to wait for a mech to turn its head observing a neighborhood with nothing else in it.
Thanks for the feedback, your comments aren't harsh, their very true. I know what you mean about each point made, I was aware of them in the process of making it but as it was my first short piece I wasn't too fussed about getting it even near to a pro cg level.
Thanks though, and will try and cover each point maybe when I do a project in the future
the only part that bugged me was the aerial scene, with the clouds. it didnt look 3d at all. but other than that, the effects and models were all exceptional.
In my opinion, no, very easy to use for this and was actually the more relaxing part of this project compared to the complexity of 3D in Cinema4D, which in comparison requires alot more thinking!
Basically, Windows Movie Maker is easy to use, does the job! Then Sony Vegas is pretty good, but can be alittle more complex but is more flexible too
I used After Effects to edit as my scenes were composites/transparency layers from Cinema 4D - I wouldnt advise it for basic editing, its abit of a pain for that
brilliant! only issue I see, is as awesome as they are. The alien ships have turbines...in space :'(. Maybe you intended to use those in a different project though and wanted to save time, so it's no big deal. Otherwise it was a freaking awesome concept! I'm a 3DMAX guy myself, but C4D definitely seems to have better fire effects and minor things like that :P
The fire effect was cheated on here, simply visible different coloured strong lights with animated to flicker. It was a rushed project, the 'turbines' were just to look cool ;-)
Well the turbines do a good job of looking cool, for sure :P. That's interesting, I don't know if MAX can make flickering lights like that. For a rushed project this is really nice. Especially the composite scenes! I like that robot's walk too, how the parts come together. One note for next time is the paper-thin wings on the ships. :P Keep it up, very promising!
No I have quite limited knowledge on Cinema4D, I just did it manually which was tedious and hasn't created a great movement but worked for the time scale I had
I really think i should use it to help make some videos. Ok the robots look fine but the top of it doesn't seem to figit, not even in movies like Star Wars or Final Fantasy or even real life are like that. Other than that, compliments man.
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impressive, can u plz tell me a bit about cinema 4d, with a bit of skill cud u create better stuff graphicly(no offence)and have a bit more detail, like can u make ur own backgrounds. I'm anxious uve inspired me.
Hi..:D your work is pretty amazing, by the way what video editing software did you used to make this video? is it Pinaccle studio? Sony vegas? Please :)
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cool..i think it could be edited down further. some parts I felt as if I was waiting. ex..when the mech was reading the paper. areas in the editing could be more dynamic...cut more into the action so we dont wait for the action. Let the audience figure it out.. its good to let them catch up...keep them wondering. the shots of invading planes could be edited down.. Change up the sound, to neighborhood ambience ..once they land...overall...nice collection of shots and action.
Great advice indeed, most constructive and educating comment so far! Thanks alot, will try out your pointers next time I try something similar to this :)
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That was very nicely done, especially with the shadow effects, o man that was amazing. But this is just a personal thing, u could have spent a little more time on it and made the robots and engine flames a bit more realistic, but hey, thats just me.
no your right, they were rushed and them project and process in a short time scale were more my focus and not the models - something to look at in future :)
Happyafro is correct. As a 3D artist I can tell you that everything you did here sucks balls. Sorry but your Compositing, animation, texturing, modeling, lighting, and after effects all suck. For the people here giving you props and good feedback, they're the retards who sit inside all day and watch a crap load of gay ass Anime, you have no sense of artistic abilities...sorry to bust chops but you need to hear that.
Thanks, your spot on coming from a 3D artists perspective - but Im not a 3D artist! Pointers how I can improve each of your points would be helpfull rather than just slating them ;)
Apart form the bad animation on ED108 and a half, A nice little film. The space ships were a bit cut and paste and boring looking but maybe their a race of Aliens from Orpington.
this is what happens when lego collides with the real world
PrimevalHunter300 10 months ago
aaffffffffffffff
loudness96 1 year ago
How much time does the render takes?
PoliomanGamer 1 year ago
@PoliomanGamer days hahaha
BlitZzDesigns 1 year ago
this was awsome, you should make a whole movie based on this video
muntu1221 1 year ago
Thanks :) I wouldnt go that far though lol, an invasion is always a great concept but an invasion with no destruction/fighting/conflict doesnt sound as fun :P
SeeDoubleYouUK 1 year ago
ha this is terrible
FloppyDickNation 1 year ago
Thanks er... floppydick
SeeDoubleYouUK 1 year ago
@SeeDoubleYouUK Sorry mate. That was Harvey, we own this account together. He is a noob lol, he couldn't do any better. I like it anyway... :) Thanks
-Nick
FloppyDickNation 1 year ago
@FloppyDickNation Calm down atleast he tried
TheMissle21 1 year ago
@TheMissle21 Cheers for the backup, I did try lol, and its not my job, nor is it something I do in my spare time, it was created after afew classes! Could of been a lot worse lol...
SeeDoubleYouUK 1 year ago
spaceships don't need to b aerodynamic
banebreaker3 1 year ago
@banebreaker3 Until they enter the earths atmosphere, like these did
SeeDoubleYouUK 1 year ago 2
wow greta man im unsure on the process of key frames in c4d everytime i try it fails :C
SpectrumVortex 1 year ago
cool. what's the title of the music you use?
Daxlight 1 year ago
hey, what's the name of the music you use? thanks.
Daxlight 1 year ago
@Daxlight the music is Leftfield - Dub Gussett, a link is under the video to buy it from iTunes
SeeDoubleYouUK 1 year ago
@SeeDoubleYouUK thanks dude!
Daxlight 1 year ago
@SeeDoubleYouUK thanks dude!
Daxlight 1 year ago
people dont get 3d doesnt mean thigns are gonna jump out at u it means it has dimensions fuck me
bugsbunny159 1 year ago
hahahah really nice man ! :))
GLAXxan 1 year ago
yea sick for that long ago
THEfriskyxcowboy 2 years ago
great for 4 years ago.
TheFXGuy 2 years ago
heya 3 almost 4 years now, hope you have improve skills and maych real vid with 3D keep on getting better you can earn good money with it, and with good histories
youutubestinks 2 years ago
wow awesome....
davilleV 2 years ago
ta de perro
DGTPROD 2 years ago
how to change material to other material with cinema4d, example plane? Thank
wamagas 2 years ago
You took a pic of the Earth from your steet?
Tommybob3000 2 years ago
1:26
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ClericLordLeo 2 years ago
My Reavers fuck ur Goliaths with scarabs .. in the anus
Nice twist in the video :D Not bad a movie for second attempt in modelling!
satanspilz 2 years ago
Thats Awesome!
Has inspired me to get into 3D animation!
kingsofcarnage 2 years ago
You should make a tutorial. if you haven't already especially on how you used both after effects and cinema 4d
FallingOctoberProd 2 years ago
Great...congrats..!!!!
KhpapaLogic 2 years ago
ha we beat the alines to it mwahahahahahaha
killthenerd5 3 years ago
ya, cinema 4d really has the best integration with after effects I think
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Hhahhaa, they were too late, everyone was already dead from bird flu.
Lol, nice.
metabog 3 years ago
LOL, sounds so rubbish put into a sentence doesnt it? It was at the time of the initial bird flu scare, and I wanted to make it a short piece with a twist, and cut out the complicated bits (ie. a war, demolition) - that was my easiest way out!
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spickspackmackattack 3 years ago
nice
stickgore 3 years ago
the models were a bit low poly but i loved your booster effect you had very good and i like the mech model good project overall just more detail and it can even better
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sleptnightaway2033 3 years ago
For one of your first projects, that's pretty good. I think it would have been significantly better if you'd incorporated moving shots, and had done just a bit higher pold models. But overall quite a good job for a first project. God knows my first project with Maya and After effects was nowere near that good.
TheMiniFigMaster 3 years ago
Nice creation Good.
xxxjovit 3 years ago
did u make the models with aftereffects cause if u did HELP ME
moviemaker933 3 years ago
Sorry the models were made in Cinema4D, only editing and some of the simpler tricks were in After Effects
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
WELL DONE..GOOD
elitevids2 3 years ago
metal gear..
xXR0883Xx 3 years ago
that was amazing!
DarkDayFilmsco 3 years ago
keep it up and you can actually have a future using this skill!!!
destroy1ner 3 years ago
i have cinema 4d but i am really lost on it, can you help me out?>?????????????
larbo4200 3 years ago
good animated, but you need a designer. the starships look bad.
leckerpellwurst 3 years ago 2
Totally incredible. The DoF effects were awesome. Regardless of your skill level, that's still a hella lot better than I could ever do.
kph59 3 years ago
wow, nice man
arlazar 3 years ago
nice, it looks like those early 1990s music videos, that part of the Mecha walking in the driveway, looked really good!
TERRANCIO 3 years ago
not bad
slggrsrus 3 years ago
This is really cool. I'd work on a movie with you any time. Good stuff
jonlambert76 3 years ago
LOL
Thanks
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
cool good joob!
mstickmaster 3 years ago
Hey man. Don't listen to other people tell you you're an amateur. You did good and the more you keep doing your stuff the better you become. I do some modelling and i am still learning about Materials and character rigging. Its a good video and the planes are good.
18zela 3 years ago
Thanks bud, unfortunately I am an amateur! This was pretty much the last 3D piece I did, its not really my focus :) Subscribing to your profile though, keep us up to date on how you get on
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
man ure awesome...telll me is cinema4d easy or is 3ds max easy
safee91 3 years ago
wow
dydy53 3 years ago
silly
adceph 3 years ago
Thanks for the input, since you have NO videos I'll comment on you in a one word summary too..... USELESS!
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
great job on the compositing, the models weren't really that great, idk how you did the transparent ships flying around, im guessing a displacement map, but that was really cool.
chronocastro 3 years ago
can some help me to get cinema 4d for free if any one can thank
bas4lyf 3 years ago
i dont think thats possible i got it of a friend who got it of his uncle who bought it for £2000 a lot of money eh
Pigeon1080 3 years ago
u can get it using WAREZ
rapperyz 3 years ago
if you gonna start doing stylish videos your very amatur at the moment. imange a good music video with 3d effects all in rhythem and in time with the best animation and unrealstic which is releastic possable mostly without immganation. (you know when you listen to a good tune and you vizailure a cool music video with you friends dancing and all that style and 3d that comes with it. ) well erh come on pick up the pace !!!!
fuckercuntemilyosmen 3 years ago
err... thanks man, but Im not going into stylish videos mixed with 3D just yet! Or do much video work at all
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
Cool vid man!! Check out my After Effects Vids when ya get a Chance! and maybe subscribe if ya want to >:)
TheLastScene 3 years ago
the invasion scene is too long with nothing interesting happening in it. shorten it or add something more interesting than camera pans.
finally the biggest killer is the fake look of the models against the photographs. you need to add some serious film grain and desaturate the colors of the models to make them fit in better with the photographs (or in your future videos, video film). this is what makes pro cg stand out from amateur cg. sorry to sound harsh, just hope these criticisms help out.
itsumonihon 3 years ago
sorry but didn't think it was very good and the music was annoying and reeked of amateur video. please take this as constructive criticism and not bashing of your video:
the models walked poorly. for example the feet seem to be slipping as the machine walks, is he walking on ice or something?
the models move too slowly. it makes the movie boring. the model turns its head too slowly, again, boring. nobody wants to wait for a mech to turn its head observing a neighborhood with nothing else in it.
itsumonihon 3 years ago
Thanks for the feedback, your comments aren't harsh, their very true. I know what you mean about each point made, I was aware of them in the process of making it but as it was my first short piece I wasn't too fussed about getting it even near to a pro cg level.
Thanks though, and will try and cover each point maybe when I do a project in the future
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
Pretty slick.
itsbojangles 3 years ago
lol. turbine engines in space? pretty tight though.
natetheflip 3 years ago
dang that was good for using after effects
pkedbyestr3 3 years ago
Nice masking on the tree at the end, good vid :D
assassin3004 3 years ago
that cloaking effect is realy cool
snipperbes 3 years ago
the only part that bugged me was the aerial scene, with the clouds. it didnt look 3d at all. but other than that, the effects and models were all exceptional.
demonikreaper 4 years ago
Thanks, the aerial scene was just an idea, didn't come out brilliantly, but was worth the try
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
very very nicely done, what is the orginal name of the real movie, with all those blood crosses on the door
arabelista 4 years ago
Im not sure actually, I simply added that as an idea from the days of the plague! To mark the idea that the houses had been infected
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
nice. 5 star
trattygalle 4 years ago
Awesome work!!!! 5 stars!
montaramike 4 years ago
is after effects hard to use?
1Cmanny1 4 years ago
In my opinion, no, very easy to use for this and was actually the more relaxing part of this project compared to the complexity of 3D in Cinema4D, which in comparison requires alot more thinking!
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
but after effects isnt a editing program is it?
1Cmanny1 4 years ago
No it's not. You _can_ use it for editing but it will give you more headaches than using real NLE software :)
Senapse 4 years ago
whats a good one for beginings then?
1Cmanny1 4 years ago
I accidentally removed a good reply to this!
Basically, Windows Movie Maker is easy to use, does the job! Then Sony Vegas is pretty good, but can be alittle more complex but is more flexible too
I used After Effects to edit as my scenes were composites/transparency layers from Cinema 4D - I wouldnt advise it for basic editing, its abit of a pain for that
SeeDoubleYouUK 3 years ago
thanks
1Cmanny1 3 years ago
it's a nice idea...but it would be nicer if you detailed the plane more.
BUT nice music...nice vid....NICE
ikkeennigij121 3 years ago
It reminds me of an animation done by a guy named Bahamut, but he did his with pivot.
77777jax77777 4 years ago
its superbe man,i love you,but how can you do a long movie whith a small space.
aminebios 4 years ago
Great! Very Good Job!!! Bravo Complimenti!
Why not you used any sound effects?
Wideshut80 4 years ago
Thanks :-) Had no time for sound effects back then :-(
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
brilliant! only issue I see, is as awesome as they are. The alien ships have turbines...in space :'(. Maybe you intended to use those in a different project though and wanted to save time, so it's no big deal. Otherwise it was a freaking awesome concept! I'm a 3DMAX guy myself, but C4D definitely seems to have better fire effects and minor things like that :P
ArcangelZero7 4 years ago
The fire effect was cheated on here, simply visible different coloured strong lights with animated to flicker. It was a rushed project, the 'turbines' were just to look cool ;-)
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
Well the turbines do a good job of looking cool, for sure :P. That's interesting, I don't know if MAX can make flickering lights like that. For a rushed project this is really nice. Especially the composite scenes! I like that robot's walk too, how the parts come together. One note for next time is the paper-thin wings on the ships. :P Keep it up, very promising!
ArcangelZero7 4 years ago
yes, very nice!
robenghuse 4 years ago
Man I wish I could program as well as well as u can video. We could so make a kickass game...
striker865 4 years ago
Lol, sounds like an excellent concept!
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
good job! did you use a walk cycle for the mech?
B44rules 4 years ago
No I have quite limited knowledge on Cinema4D, I just did it manually which was tedious and hasn't created a great movement but worked for the time scale I had
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
cool! I forget, is Cinema 4D free, or do you have to pay for it?
B44rules 4 years ago
The educational version is free but watermarks all renders, other than Im afraid you have to pay for it
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
Darn. Well, thanks anyway!
B44rules 4 years ago
pretty good
MasterHasbar25 4 years ago
criticism is always useful but just negative feedback is pointless & rude.
Good job on motion graphics. Love how the bots walk.
068139 4 years ago
i must have the most expensive mac mini in the world
theinsane101 4 years ago
I really think i should use it to help make some videos. Ok the robots look fine but the top of it doesn't seem to figit, not even in movies like Star Wars or Final Fantasy or even real life are like that. Other than that, compliments man.
Ghakimx 4 years ago
Lightning in the beggining sucks, and the robot seems to be floating, not walking, that sucks too.
NneutronN 4 years ago
Lightning?
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
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nicz908 4 years ago
Good... but i bet now you could do much better....
raeeees 4 years ago
nice
but too short..
ramone66 4 years ago
that's good
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Sorry dude ... but this sux
Proacro 4 years ago
let's see your 3d animation. wait, you don't have one!
CITGProductions 4 years ago
nice dude! keep it up...... like at some more texture detail to your next or something.... but really nice!
LlamaBeetyPic 4 years ago
I do this for real. But you're alright at it too. Maybe one day we will dual.
bdlfilms 4 years ago
impressive, can u plz tell me a bit about cinema 4d, with a bit of skill cud u create better stuff graphicly(no offence)and have a bit more detail, like can u make ur own backgrounds. I'm anxious uve inspired me.
Jamesf17 4 years ago
OMG, what software did he use ??? learn 2 read it says in the title and in the credits @ the end, my god ...
x1c3x 4 years ago
....
LinkinParkLyrics 4 years ago
Can you read? He said he cant even do it and gave it 5/5. So dont talk bullshit.
And its a FACT that the textures weren't really great. Say whatever you want. Still,great work!
ScriptorSarpedon 4 years ago 2
Hi..:D your work is pretty amazing, by the way what video editing software did you used to make this video? is it Pinaccle studio? Sony vegas? Please :)
afriendmar 4 years ago
It was written:
1. Cinema 4d
2. After effects
ballynr1 4 years ago 2
has any one got leftfield from exeter uni couple years ago lookin 4 wilti
janiez1 4 years ago
Grafics sucked but it was cool and i cant even do half of it soyeah its awsome 5/5
bloodkaiser360 4 years ago
meh
RallyMotoXfan 4 years ago
its pretty good but it should be longer
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Wildxxhorses 4 years ago
Not done on a MAC? Cinema 4D is Mac only software? or thats what it says on the website...
coolass222 4 years ago
Cinema4D is available on both (!), same with the other software used for this; After Effects and Photoshop :)
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
is cinema4d free?
doggant27 4 years ago
afraid not, although there is a free educational version I think but its limited
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
wonserfull
omaralmudaries 4 years ago
Boooooooooooring but thats just my opinoin
lilfury97 4 years ago
This reminds me of old PC games
Linky001 4 years ago
im from nottingham aswell lol,
gearsf4n 4 years ago
Fair play to you! Lol, noticed your a GoW player - might be joining the darkside that is Xbox360 soon! Lol
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
cool..i think it could be edited down further. some parts I felt as if I was waiting. ex..when the mech was reading the paper. areas in the editing could be more dynamic...cut more into the action so we dont wait for the action. Let the audience figure it out.. its good to let them catch up...keep them wondering. the shots of invading planes could be edited down.. Change up the sound, to neighborhood ambience ..once they land...overall...nice collection of shots and action.
xpez 4 years ago
Great advice indeed, most constructive and educating comment so far! Thanks alot, will try out your pointers next time I try something similar to this :)
Thanks again!
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Doviux09 4 years ago
Wow! That must have taken a LOT of work. Nice job, great match moves, and a good story as well. Keep up the good work!
mbunds 4 years ago 3
Nice you got the shadow and everything...good work
LlamaBeetyPic 4 years ago 3
I just noticed that you're from Nottingham, that's where I'm from. I now live in Florida, but I moved here from Sherwood 4 years ago.
johnjohn187 4 years ago 2
cool... small world as they say! lol. Hows life in Florida compared to Nottingham?! Lol
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
how long did this take you to create... im interested in doing an animation for my HSC art... please help! anyone
sheep41 4 years ago 2
zzzzzzzzzzz rubbish
ausdylan2005 4 years ago
sux
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ifrit11 4 years ago
Google the sound you wanna have. Or the easiest way, extract as many sounds as possible out of games. Best way to built up a database.
Dontneedanickname 4 years ago
Would be a lot better using sound effects...
Dontneedanickname 4 years ago
indeede it would, any links to a good sound fx site would appreciated everyone!
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
That was very nicely done, especially with the shadow effects, o man that was amazing. But this is just a personal thing, u could have spent a little more time on it and made the robots and engine flames a bit more realistic, but hey, thats just me.
Snoman17 4 years ago
no your right, they were rushed and them project and process in a short time scale were more my focus and not the models - something to look at in future :)
Cheers
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
Happyafro is correct. As a 3D artist I can tell you that everything you did here sucks balls. Sorry but your Compositing, animation, texturing, modeling, lighting, and after effects all suck. For the people here giving you props and good feedback, they're the retards who sit inside all day and watch a crap load of gay ass Anime, you have no sense of artistic abilities...sorry to bust chops but you need to hear that.
doodlerboy 4 years ago
Thanks, your spot on coming from a 3D artists perspective - but Im not a 3D artist! Pointers how I can improve each of your points would be helpfull rather than just slating them ;)
Cheers
SeeDoubleYouUK 4 years ago
Thats a bit of a harsh review, he never claimed to be a fucking 3D art God. Give him a break you cunt.
johnjohn187 4 years ago
Apart form the bad animation on ED108 and a half, A nice little film. The space ships were a bit cut and paste and boring looking but maybe their a race of Aliens from Orpington.
happyafro 4 years ago
HMMMM the Aircrafts lokk like a "F302" type are they? But first nice work!!
CeTeR1234 4 years ago 2
ridiculous!!
brevleq 4 years ago
omg how did you get it into the landscape?
tell me tell me tell me ^^
really well done!!!
I'm deeply impressed!!!
Go on working xP
Shadowscorpion89 4 years ago
truly inspiring
Glassmanprs 4 years ago
this thing is pretty cool but too bad u didnt do this 15 years ago cuz nintendo would probably want u
chillbabe104 4 years ago
lol. nice one.
Jwats96 4 years ago
props to u dude
dicostu 4 years ago