Carma - Life Stories Pt.1 [Acoustic Rap]

[BCFChighlights]

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[Mercedeszx33]

good good !

[ixslipknotxi]

You got talent. Them lyrics are good and the guitar is a change of scenery. If you got better recording equipment and mixed it and sent it to a label you could possibly get signed.

[DshankumMusic]

@ixslipknotxi Thanks bro, I appreciate it!

[Rustymonkfish2011]

Great song m8!

[DshankumMusic]

@Rustymonkfish2011 Thanks bro!!

[fazemuzik]

I checked out ur stuff and I like it. I did an acoustic rap with friends. Check it out. thug mansion military acoustic

[DshankumMusic]

@fazemuzik Thanks bro and yeah I'll watch it now.

[porkchop05031997]

This is real rap, I rap myself and you could be a real inspiration. Keep it up I love it

[DshankumMusic]

@porkchop05031997 Thanks bro, means alot!!

[jshhutchfan8]

This is really good!! Keep up the good work :)

[DshankumMusic]

@jshhutchfan8 Thank you ")

[Cronus1aga1]

nice guitar play same as your lyrics, I bealive you wrote them yourself, you gotta big talent man.

[DshankumMusic]

@Cronus1aga1 Yeah I did and thanks!

[xddonx]

Fucking epic song man.

[DshankumMusic]

@xddonx Thanks bro.

[1994briffa]

Yo dude, I visited this track via maverick saber. And tbh this track hit me, the guitar is awesome! And the lyrics was so so good, you need to make yourself known! When are you making some new tracks? Oh yeah, you don't mind if I post this on facebook?

[DshankumMusic]

@1994briffa Thank you so much, I appreciate that. And i'm trying, but I think I might have to look in to asking places if I can perform. And I made a new one about 3 days ago, called 'The Boxer', its on my Youtube channel and yeah sure you can that would be great thanks.

[dilaw92]

realy cool songs keep doing what you do brother !! you do great thing !

[DshankumMusic]

@dilaw92 Thank you brutha, appreciate it

[iAmAIive]

Yo, i came here via Eminem's vid and I must admit you have a real talent, both with the guitar and the lyrics. Did you wrote them yourself? Also, I'd want to suggest the next time you make a video, try to be closer to the mic (if possible) because I did had trouble listening well without raising the volume too much. But meh, little things.

All in all, good job! Keep on doing what you do, I am following you from now on!

[DshankumMusic]

@iAmAIive Thank you so much man, my new video is more clearer because of my new camera, but I take everything you said as constructive, so I appreciate it.

[billybobway1]

Really good :) Do you mind putting the lyrics up on one of your next songs?

[DshankumMusic]

@billybobway1 Thanks so much, was you thinking of covering it or something? But yeah i'll upload the lyrics for my acoustic raps now.

[billybobway1]

@DshankumMusic no i wasn't planning on covering it, but i guess it would help someone else if they want to cover it or something, and thanks :)

[DshankumMusic]

@billybobway1 Alright then :)

[DshankumMusic]

@DshankumMusic The lyrics for Life Stories are up now.

[xXiAsh7Xx]

Pretty good man but you definately need proper recording equipment

[DshankumMusic]

@xXiAsh7Xx Thank you and my most recent video has a HD camera, maybe I need a mic, can you tell me something that can make my recording better?

[DshankumMusic]

@TheBabecc Thanks and my new videos are clearer.

[TheBabecc]

Nice! But make it more clearly

[DshankumMusic]

@THEwhiteLINEBACKER thanks man.

[THEwhiteLINEBACKER]

This is actually really good

[DshankumMusic]

@chuckmarks2010 Erm, I havent got around to recording this a MP3, but I managed to use 'Youtube to MP3 converter' to see how it sounded MP3, and it sounded alright to be honest, so I have no problem wih you doing that to get it as a MP3.

[chuckmarks2010]

Can I download. This???? Pretty. Cool

[RAD1CALB]

need a better flow and to speak more clearly, very good lyrics and the guitar adds to it

[davidheroX5]

Ok im not even going to lie to you.... I wanted to hate this!!! I actually watched it just to see how bad it would be..... I am happy to admit i was wrong. That was pretty dam awesome mate. Bang on job :)

[ChanSkarKz]

Kool ...guitar n rap. :)

[Yollyyyyy]

you should do some dubstep tuneeez! :)

[callingPluto]

good talent, keep it up star

[DshankumMusic]

@callingPluto Thanks man.

[l33don]

yes yes d shanks manz killin hold it dwn g

[DshankumMusic]

@l33don Safe don.

[itssophiepop]

love thissss

[DshankumMusic]

@itssophiepop Thankyou :)

[rimcdonpat95]

u got talent still u shud get famous g

[iRateIslam]

hmm, ur accent..sounds northern..doesn't suit a rapper tbh, but meh.

First time:

I see a black person with acoustic

I see a black person with northern accent

I see a black person not raping about the usual drug, sex, crime.

[DshankumMusic]

@iRateIslam Im from England, there is a lot of rappers in England, so it does.

Lots of black people play guitar, but is the last part supposed to be a compliment?

If yes then thank you.

[kswiss250]

@iRateIslam You mean rapping, white-boy.

[DshankumMusic]

@kswiss250 Thanks, you tell him lol.

[PSTRIPPLEE]

Improved allot you should be the new justin beiber the black version

[DshankumMusic]

@PSTRIPPLEE Thanks for that.

[richimeredith]

liking this a lot man, keep going

[DshankumMusic]

@richimeredith thanks.

[TrackVolume11]

a black brit...wtf

[DshankumMusic]

@TrackVolume11 Yes LOL, Britian has a lot of races believe it or not. Are you American?

[TrackVolume11]

@DshankumMusic yeah im American

[XiStrBro]

You look like you just stole something.

[DshankumMusic]

@XiStrBro LOL, yeah the guitar :)

[LD33MING]

good flow tbh 

[DshankumMusic]

@LD33MING Thankyou.

[Rynbow3]

Sick, love it :))

[DshankumMusic]

@Rynbow3 thankyou :)

[yungr33zy23]

Dats sick bro. put me in your box. and subscribe to my channel.

[SweetLiikeKandii]

Itz alott styll i like da acoustic concept =] x

[DshankumMusic]

@SweetLiikeKandii Thankyou :)

[OceansLost]

Safe, Just saw your comment on Lowkeys video, I like this video man Im not far from brum I like your style its deep man, we did something a bit like this at a local pub as a joke but the sound actually works its mad! take care of ur self man x hit me up msg me if your intrested in being awake I mean about whats going on etc behind closed doors etc bit like what lowkey talks about

[DshankumMusic]

@OceansLost Thanks a lot man, and sure I'll holla you later today.

[andimichh2216]

you are so talented, maybe in a few years, I'll see you on tv(;

[lsu98981]

Tht was sick .. You got talent my friend(:

[DshankumMusic]

@lsu98981 thankyou :)

[DshankumMusic]

@lsu98981 thankyou so much, and hopefully lol

[shanmalaika1]

this is good stuff. liked the playing and rapping at the same time, i've never seen that before. original :) thanks for sharing :) xx

[DshankumMusic]

@shanmalaika1 thankyou :)

[ChickLax19]

keep it up and believe you have talent.

[OfficialJayFantasy]

Well done I'm proud of ya little bro for that video !!!

[DshankumMusic]

@OfficialJayFantasy thanks.

[IpodsHelpingHand]

Is good to see that Britain still has young talent.But if u become a star don't become like Justin Beudber. There is no one on face book named Duaine Carma Roberts

[DshankumMusic]

@IpodsHelpingHand thankyou. and yeah if you go on facebook and type in duaine carma roberts, then you will see me.

[DshankumMusic]

@MrHearMyVoice thanks a lot, its nice getting a comment from you considering your amazing voice.

[legit13371]

how can you fucking play guitar and rap your amazing man

[DshankumMusic]

@legit13371 i dont know lol, thank you though. do i get a sub?

[Ireaper1111]

like it cant wait for part 2

[DshankumMusic]

@Ireaper1111 thanks a lot

[ilovemw2121]

i subbed nice video

[DshankumMusic]

@ilovemw2121 thank you for the sub

[Xcal2007]

your talented man keep it up

[DshankumMusic]

@Xcal2007 thankyou.

[gtavsmw2]

Nice video

[NewAgeWorldMusic]

Good Video & Cool Music

[DshankumMusic]

@NewAgeWorldMusic thanks.

[ayedee14]

you go hard :)

i like the lyrics ,

[rrogers2009]

That is good bro and i don't know how you rap with a guitar !XD

[DshankumMusic]

@rrogers2009 just play the chords and rap the lyrics man :)

[ashliexxxx]

nice vid! xx

[DshankumMusic]

@omnomnomandrew thanks, this is a really good comment. and it was memorized, its just that in my 'ready for anything' video, people said i was looking down too much and should look at the camera, so thats why i had the eye contact, but yeah next time i will.

[muskyjamjam]

yhhh niiice !!

[xddonx]

the acoustic rap suits you!

[chriztp07]

I agree with some of the other comments u need more emotion. change the lv of ur voice Over all Nice vid

[DshankumMusic]

@chriztp07 yeah thanks for the constructive feedback.

[leohammondb3]

nice video.

[DshankumMusic]

@leohammondb3 thanks.

[ChickLax19]

pretty good



[DshankumMusic]

@ChickLax19 thanks.

[MrWastegash]

your okay man, put your emotion in enit

[DshankumMusic]

@MrWastegash yeah, next time i will.

[dookiebirds2223]

Nice!!

[Bayleybeats]

You're to plain... don't just say the lyrics... you gotta mean them!

Spit with emotion not visual content

[DshankumMusic]

@Bayleybeats thanks, yeah i wasn't in the best of moods, cause my new camera didn't come, so i had to use another one, but yeah i'll make sure i connect in thenext video. what did you think of the lyrics and guitar playing though?

[DNMEmusicRecords]

Yeah yeah yeah, you got something going for you bruv, on the guitar and rapping. Keep that up the industry needs more like this right now, not just rappers alone.

[DshankumMusic]

@DNMEmusicRecords thanks man.

[1234567569281]

keep up the good work

[DshankumMusic]

@1234567569281 thanks.

[1234567569281]

@DshankumMusic your welcome

[5250Ds]

I liked the video. You can rap very well, and you seem like a seasoned guitarist. Keep it up, I think you have a huge career ahead in the music business. :)

[DshankumMusic]

@5250Ds thanks alot.

[BeccaKeturah2]

saw your comment on the gunna dee vid..

I reckon this is good but the best thing is that you play guitar, that's cute!

can you sing also? cause that would be awesome!

[DshankumMusic]

@BeccaKeturah2 thanks. and im not sure, check my wavin flag video on my page, i sing in that, but i dont think im a good singer.

[pinchers12]

your lisp is cute!xx

[DshankumMusic]

@pinchers12 thanks :)