You two did a great job on this, congrats. One suggestion: If your audience asks questions about the film, it might be because something was left out. They only know what you show them. Two girls in a house, one leaves... The audience may conclude they live together, since it's not made clear by action or dialogue. Sure, make the audience work a bit, but they do need clues. Good camera work BTW.
I am waiting up for her cause she promised to be home by a cetain time so that we could go to the movies.. I'm her little sister and we don't live together. And she starts drinking and gets drunk and then drives to pick me up when she realizes what time it is. Then.. she hits me cause she was drunk driving...and she told me to be waiting outside the house.
waiting up for her...if they lived in the same house would the black haired girl know she was there? then the blonde says she's on ehr way in it shows her pulling out of the driveway...but the black haired girl is at home and they live together. its decent, but it def needs to be reviewed and you gotta make sure it makes sense.
she is my sister and she is home for the weekend from college. she goes back to her apartment after her boyfriend looks at another girl and she is all depressed...
ok...very nice and all.. but what i dont get it...in the beginning the blonde girl is leaving the house that she shares with the black haired girl. then the blonde one walks into her room and the bacl haired girl is
HOLY CRAP :O She's cutting herself in the arm because her oyfriend checked out another woman O_O
Charmpingvinen 2 years ago
LMAO it was cute but the cutting was just funny. good job
ronaldo09ronaldo 3 years ago
You two did a great job on this, congrats. One suggestion: If your audience asks questions about the film, it might be because something was left out. They only know what you show them. Two girls in a house, one leaves... The audience may conclude they live together, since it's not made clear by action or dialogue. Sure, make the audience work a bit, but they do need clues. Good camera work BTW.
marjamada 4 years ago
I am waiting up for her cause she promised to be home by a cetain time so that we could go to the movies.. I'm her little sister and we don't live together. And she starts drinking and gets drunk and then drives to pick me up when she realizes what time it is. Then.. she hits me cause she was drunk driving...and she told me to be waiting outside the house.
make sense?
jessicajolene 5 years ago
waiting up for her...if they lived in the same house would the black haired girl know she was there? then the blonde says she's on ehr way in it shows her pulling out of the driveway...but the black haired girl is at home and they live together. its decent, but it def needs to be reviewed and you gotta make sure it makes sense.
silverlining723 5 years ago
she is my sister and she is home for the weekend from college. she goes back to her apartment after her boyfriend looks at another girl and she is all depressed...
jessicajolene 5 years ago
ok...very nice and all.. but what i dont get it...in the beginning the blonde girl is leaving the house that she shares with the black haired girl. then the blonde one walks into her room and the bacl haired girl is
silverlining723 5 years ago