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From: awsk321
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  • Not bad for a first stop motion. Trust me, I've seen worse than this, including my first stop motion. Beginners always have a hard time with this

  • pretty shitty.

  • very choppy, need to make smaller changes per frame, and add more visual effects

  • Motion needs more frames (WAY more). Personally, I'd say about 6 frames per action (such as a sword swing or aiming gun while raising shield). Overall, about 15 frames-per-second is about right (though sometimes you can get away with 10). As well as that, a tripod. Nothing makes it harder to watch than a shaky camera. Also, see if you can find less tinny sound effects. If you can, even try using a stand and edit it out with GIMP/ PS for jumps, etc.

    This is intended as constructive criticism.

  • ke puttanata

  • I understand why people dislike this movie, but hey, everyone who is making stop motion movies just start like that. Keep practicing and it wil be better. Good luck.

  • ever heard of thrusters

  • make it look more fluid - like motion, (more pics) longer fights :P and some hand to hand would be cool :D im also going to make my first vid as soon as my camera gets here from e-bay :P i have a HUGE collection .... about 50 or a lil more and i still dont have any idea on what to make the plot , or witch ones to use in my first vid from what i have. keep it up !!

  • yeah right

    exia owns rx78 in the real battle

  • did i here some battlefield 2 voiceovers? lol good job

  • You could use some more pictures but other than that good videos

  • All you need now is a tri-pod and more pictures and this will be one of the best on youtube. keep it up man!

  • i posted my stop motion vids but i got more

  • isn't that a beam rifle but it shoots bullets out

  • Exia's got owned

  • dont critasize him COMPLAMENT DA GUY U ASS HOLES i thoug it was awsum keep it up

  • dude we're not critaziseing him it said in his desciption what he could do better

  • yea that was good for a first time mine sucked and was too slow so i cant critisize

  • My first Stopmotion was way better than that!!!

  • heres a suggestion...USE MORE FRAMES!

  • not bad.

  • nice pretty cool keep it up

  • I like it

    Some of the gun shots were very "SHARP" to the ears like a needle

    And also i likes the walking sound effects :D

    Check mine too im new to stop motion maybe we can help with each other :D

  • lol-kk!

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