This was actually really good. I was not expecting this to be such a well-written, well-rapped track. Beat's a little simple but otherwise got nothing but good things to say.
The beat is good. Seems like it could be a little more cohesive. I know you didn't ask, but I think the mallet instrument ( 2:18 ) is a little out of place/unnecessary. I know it fills out the track a little, but sometimes simpler is better. I'd also say the Dougie bass ( :20 ) is out of place. It almost undercuts the message in the lyrics in a way. Try the same note progression with a more sustained sub-bass.
this is actually pretty good dude. it was totally different from what i expected. i was thinking 'hey hear comes another bullshit dance song" but its not and thats what stands out aside from your lyrical ability. nothing but the bes to you bro. we might even do a track one day, together. STAY LYRICAL! dont ever let anyone tell you to dumb it down. thats what it takes to obtain langevity in this game now adays. lyricism. prime examples eminem
Lol yo my man you dont have enough views on this... My honest opinion is the beat is a little off... but your rhymes are on point... and the idea is hot 'kanye shrug' lol thats whats up... you deserve a little more cred... but really... the beat needs to be more bumpin
I sincerely appreciate that. Much motivation. Thanks for your time and attention. Tell a friend to tell a friend to tell a friend to...you get the picture. BTW, your assumption is correct.
Stumbled on this via YouTube suggestions. Normally I don't care for (assumedly) unsigned YouTube rappers, but this shit is kinda tight. Not super over the top impressive or anything groundbreaking, but I like what you're doing with this. Can't say I'd mind hearing this shit on the radio in the slightest. Keep up the good work. *Hits Like button*
Good Job man! You have a unique style (lil old and new); keep it positive and keep it moving. I will pass this along. Be you; stay you -- too many sound alike. Peace!
This was actually really good. I was not expecting this to be such a well-written, well-rapped track. Beat's a little simple but otherwise got nothing but good things to say.
MrDJnonsequitur 1 month ago
The beat is good. Seems like it could be a little more cohesive. I know you didn't ask, but I think the mallet instrument ( 2:18 ) is a little out of place/unnecessary. I know it fills out the track a little, but sometimes simpler is better. I'd also say the Dougie bass ( :20 ) is out of place. It almost undercuts the message in the lyrics in a way. Try the same note progression with a more sustained sub-bass.
Lyrics are on point.
uhwaykin 1 month ago
I decided to YouTube "Kanye shrug" after seeing the word on a post on Facebook about Dave's Piss On You video....the internet is fun :).
HybridD91 1 month ago
oh shit, you can rap. That is rare. What else you got Mixtapes, albums?
BRAZEN08 1 month ago
@BRAZEN08 thanks! I really appreciate it! yea, i got all that and im about to release a new album soon, just go to iamcash.net
CashisKingMCL 1 month ago
good shit.. keep it up.
Look out for some of my stuff soon.
TheDbot2000 1 month ago
@TheDbot2000 thanks! will do
CashisKingMCL 1 month ago
this is actually pretty good dude. it was totally different from what i expected. i was thinking 'hey hear comes another bullshit dance song" but its not and thats what stands out aside from your lyrical ability. nothing but the bes to you bro. we might even do a track one day, together. STAY LYRICAL! dont ever let anyone tell you to dumb it down. thats what it takes to obtain langevity in this game now adays. lyricism. prime examples eminem
3rdworldc3o 2 months ago
Another beat that sounds like the radio. Spice it up a bit.
-mos def
iAmMikecool 3 months ago
Keep it up bruh
youngmoney2828 4 months ago
Lol yo my man you dont have enough views on this... My honest opinion is the beat is a little off... but your rhymes are on point... and the idea is hot 'kanye shrug' lol thats whats up... you deserve a little more cred... but really... the beat needs to be more bumpin
ramonramos88 4 months ago
this is actually dope
KeeFBlizZ 4 months ago
, Ayoo Dis Talent :) I LIKE IT
NSilerio2350 5 months ago
he dope
candygurl248 5 months ago
Damn cash, you can get it.
MikMiks00 6 months ago
this shits pretty dope!
ohdamitscam 6 months ago
This shit nice homie!!
420MHarris 6 months ago
lol this is dumb but i like it
tevinasamoah 6 months ago
This is everything thats with the current rap scene...
havihavihavi 7 months ago
This is dope
MickSwaggger 7 months ago
I sincerely appreciate that. Much motivation. Thanks for your time and attention. Tell a friend to tell a friend to tell a friend to...you get the picture. BTW, your assumption is correct.
CashisKingMCL 8 months ago
Stumbled on this via YouTube suggestions. Normally I don't care for (assumedly) unsigned YouTube rappers, but this shit is kinda tight. Not super over the top impressive or anything groundbreaking, but I like what you're doing with this. Can't say I'd mind hearing this shit on the radio in the slightest. Keep up the good work. *Hits Like button*
kgoo867 8 months ago
When all else fails....*Kanye Shrug*
chumplaz 8 months ago
*Kanye Shrug*
catheriine1993 9 months ago
Vibe out beat, lyrically on point!!!! #Goodshit
abeezy43055 10 months ago
this is dope! im actually listenin this through haha
imPulse1919 10 months ago
@imPulse1919 Haha! Thanks alot sir...I'm glad it's bearable!
CashisKingMCL 10 months ago
Good effort
Geezyone 11 months ago
it's really dope, got some uniqe vibe, keep doing it brother, i'm feeling it
burdi72 1 year ago
@burdi72 Thank you & will do!
CashisKingMCL 10 months ago
I actually like this...
This is the first comment I've EVER left on a video. So props.
jalenNkaedyn 1 year ago
@jalenNkaedyn EVER?! Wow...I'm humbled...thank you SO MUCH
CashisKingMCL 10 months ago
I rate!
Y3MZ1 1 year ago
IDGAF WHAT YALL SAY, THIS SHIT IS HARD! *Kanye Shrug*
Mcnabb236 1 year ago
@Mcnabb236 I agree!
CashisKingMCL 10 months ago
Wow this is really reallyyy good, fqck a 'club banger', Im really digging this, good job, I hope to hear more x3
AnqieeB 1 year ago
@AnqieeB Thanks so much for taking out the time to listen and be sure to check out my latest mixtape at iamcash.net
CashisKingMCL 1 year ago
yo man this is hot,, you have a facebook?
beautifulme808 1 year ago
@beautifulme808 thanks, and yea it's facebook.com only1cash
CashisKingMCL 1 year ago
i mean.. no dissrespect but this isnt really a "club banger" more like a 3rd track on my album type ish but its good lol
Miketkd 1 year ago
@Miketkd thanks for your input, im jus glad u took out the time to listen, thats all that matters, appreciate ya feedback
CashisKingMCL 1 year ago
i like it
qwerty123456479 1 year ago
@qwerty123456479 thanks!
CashisKingMCL 1 year ago
Good Job man! You have a unique style (lil old and new); keep it positive and keep it moving. I will pass this along. Be you; stay you -- too many sound alike. Peace!
entorgcorp 1 year ago
@entorgcorp thanks, i really appreciate it, peace!
CashisKingMCL 1 year ago
this is great. thanks for commenting on my channel.
kinkinc88 1 year ago
@kinkinc88 no prob at all, glad you like it, spread the word! :)
CashisKingMCL 1 year ago
I like this song and keep cre8ing your craft - Kido Ankh
747networkz 1 year ago