Here's a random critique from someone who doesn't know you from adam. I like the mix/contrast of bright images with the blurred dark images. I think it gets at the conflict of the song's character, he imagines being the winner for this girl, but just feel like he's gonna screw it up. Hire some professional actors and get the band to do the guitar and lip syncing and I'd call this a music video.
The green screen work comes off as a litle cheesy, you might have been better off being on location and using natural light. Other wise great job!
wilmorrill 1 month ago
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21mjw 1 month ago
Great job, you should be proud. Look forward to seeing more work of yours.
koosticdead 2 months ago
Here's a random critique from someone who doesn't know you from adam. I like the mix/contrast of bright images with the blurred dark images. I think it gets at the conflict of the song's character, he imagines being the winner for this girl, but just feel like he's gonna screw it up. Hire some professional actors and get the band to do the guitar and lip syncing and I'd call this a music video.
devonabrazier 2 months ago
Nice job! Enjoyed it! Hope your grade turned out well.
kostoj 2 months ago
if there was better acting this would be really good :)
tracyx11 3 months ago
Maybe this was good idea, but it's pathetic. Lyrics are strong and masculine, so video should be in that way.
pantofna 4 months ago 2
@pantofna i...what
TheToooby 1 month ago
it is not good in my opinion, sorry
wojt4spes 4 months ago 2
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coops45 10 months ago
Nice job!
srszee 1 year ago