i hate to be an eye for detail but there were two instances where I could see people that obviously werent supposed to be in the shot. the first was at 2:33 where two people walked by in the background, and the second one was at 5:42 where you can see the cameraman. its small details especially since they first one all you saw were two white dots. but for the cameraman a different camera angle slightly more diagonal that kept the cameraman out of the shot would be better
@monolithispure Yeah I noticed that before too haha. The first one you pointed out, I hadn't noticed they were in it until I finished editing. And unfortunately the second shot was the only take I had so I had to leave it in. But thanks for the criticisms. Check out my other shorts if you have time.
hi there, quick question, were you accepted into the suny purchase film program with this?
494ta 4 months ago
hey arent you form pointlespictures?
iMDeagle 9 months ago
@iMDeagle The actor is; Gage. He's in a few of my movies. Check out "The Exchange"
DPKFineArts 9 months ago
@DPKFineArts ah okay :) you make pretty good movies :)
iMDeagle 9 months ago
@iMDeagle Yup! and Thanks!
DPKFineArts 9 months ago
i hate to be an eye for detail but there were two instances where I could see people that obviously werent supposed to be in the shot. the first was at 2:33 where two people walked by in the background, and the second one was at 5:42 where you can see the cameraman. its small details especially since they first one all you saw were two white dots. but for the cameraman a different camera angle slightly more diagonal that kept the cameraman out of the shot would be better
monolithispure 1 year ago
@monolithispure Yeah I noticed that before too haha. The first one you pointed out, I hadn't noticed they were in it until I finished editing. And unfortunately the second shot was the only take I had so I had to leave it in. But thanks for the criticisms. Check out my other shorts if you have time.
DPKFineArts 1 year ago
God your so talented, you will love me someday
DPKobsessed 1 year ago