Sort Action Movie with After Effects

[hobocamptheater]

not that great... sorry, but it's just not that well put together.

bad compression (although that's probably youtube's fault)

bad effects

wrong way to hold a gun

no recoil when firing

and some other glaring issues.

[MackEffects]

Which pixel is the guy?

[WALZ97]

tis ayt

[saturnpictures333]

mokkai

[alexMcrazy1]

wow that suked a lot

[alexMcrazy1]

sort?

[darkshadowxx9]

no recoil nice xD

[CPGiveAwaysAndCoins]

the word is spelled: short

[gmfilip1998]

wheres the muzzle flash i couldnt see it

[actionmovies101]

ur guns hav no recoil which is really fake, work on it a lil then show me wat it looks like later

[chug11649]

pretty good i guess....was this your first "film"?

[bluewing26]

Try to deinterlace so that the video doesnt get those horisontal lines. Also the muzzleflash are waay to small. Check out other videos on muzzleflashes.. The rest are cool =)

[RevolutionStudiosPro]

do you always keep your guns unloaded?

[FeelingGoodFilms]

pleaaasee change the title...

retard.

[Continental4328]

@FeelingGoodFilms  why?

[FeelingGoodFilms]

@Continental4328 it says sort, not short.

[Rakisakarnir]

@Continental4328 it says sort not short

[Continental4328]

@FeelingGoodFilms why?

[Spitfireunleashed]

some more constructive tips-

#4 - DEINTERLACE YOUR FILM!!! there is nothing that makes a video look more unprofessional than interlaced film

#5 - colour correct

#6 - when you did the nuke you should have masked it out behind the trees so you couldnt see the power plant thing

thats it

you have all of that good stuff - sony vegas, action essentials, after FX and if you dont use them right what use are they at all if you have more questions visit my channel or drop me a message

i can help

[Spitfireunleashed]

ok some constructive tips here-

#1 - pretend the gun has some kick if you fire an M4 you will not be standing perfectly still

#2 - make your muzzle flashes bigger MUCH bigger

#3 - use better sound effects if you cant find any proper sounding ones compose your own string together using say the slider of a glock with the gunshot of a desert eagle then add water splashes for a wet bullet hit effect

putting more in another comment vote this one up so he can see it

[261469933]

You´ll get better ^^ Let´s be friends

[JoeFoShow95]

there is this really annoying thing that actually DOES affect your aiming accuracy......its called recoil.....

[rocker4579]

LEARN TO SPELL

[asterix645]

YOU....ARE...HORRIBLE.

this video has to be a joke. You suck. I'm sorry but you suck at composting.

[XXDarion]

nice

[nacolydude]

dont matter where you hold your gun

man that was badass dude

[DrinkyCrowShow]

@PranKsTuRz oh haha sorry.

[DrinkyCrowShow]

@PranKsTuRz I dont think faggots can like you have the ability to respond to a comment defending someone unless your a fucking troll. And dont call me a homo for not being a dick.

[balltre321]

Better in 240p

[Lekopetro]

ur title sais sort

[DjDuckyStyle]

Nice one (; but the effects doesnt really fit in.. If you had shoot the movie at night it might have been better.. Doesnt look real at all.. But nice try! (;

[GotLegoBricks]

Haha Great start on your after effects movies! Keep up the good work!

[ownorpwn]

those were small muzzle flashes the lighting was off so was the qaulity the matte footage from the actual film, nothing was tracked properly. everything was a still shot making it look bad. if theres action and explosions theres bound to be shakiness in the camera. meh

[midgetking101]

that was terrible! it was terrible for your first time! but hey u gotta learn from your mistakes... try using different camera angles and maybe have other actors than just u ... maybe add an antagonist too.

[HaZMaTTTTTTTTTT]

u suck ass!

[Continental4328]

@HaZMaTTTTTTTTTT wtf is wrong with you?

[SporeGladiator]

@HaZMaTTTTTTTTTT You only wish he did so you two could be butt buddies

[AltShiftSpam]

ANd soney vegas ! <:DDDDD

[131salomon]

wath for weapon did you use?

[simoxiii]

needs a lot of improvement but good for a first attempt

[harukitproduction]

He don't know how to spell either!

[Continental4328]

haha sorry me not holding the gun right makes so many people mad

[DeathEffect1]

hes gay doesnt know how to hold the gun he put the butt of the gun under his armpit

[Continental4328]

@DeathEffect1 I'm stright man but thanks for your comment :I

[DrinkyCrowShow]

@DeathEffect1 I dont think you can classify some as gay because they hold a gun different from someone else. Faggot

[Jensuchild]

i thought the nuke was the best part

[niquelapeaulisse]

its pretty cool but you have to tracking when the camera moves. but it s nice for a 1st movie

[BENSTER489]

thas very good, i love these short action films!

[pookie748]

nice make totorial on effects

[jojofelina]

LEARN HOW TO SPELL

[jojofelina]

you mean SHORT not a SORT

[Hauntedboy95]

that was cool! dude! nice work! :)

[Continental4328]

yeah i know its not very good but this was one of my first, yes i will make more once i buy a new camera

[23Ian1]

That was the greatest. Make more!

[UCAGOASHADOW]

You held that CAR-15 wrong when you fired it.

[RickRay9]

What part in "my first time" don't you understand? Stop being a dumb shit, you know it's his first time.

[UCAGOASHADOW]

lol calm down, I'm just telling him so he knows.

[RickRay9]

okay, sorry, dude. I overreact often on the internet, I think mostly of the guys just wanna ruin the video with bad comments.

[zakaria044]

that is fine good luck in AF

[nipanstudio]

Keep it up man.

[quesillo299]

how did you made the nuclear bomb ? that was cool

[Magicrazy1]

it's damn hard making a hole in the ground :-/

[goldenjabba]

TRy using black gaffa tape to cover up the orange tip during shooting (of the film)

[ninjahinda]

makes it look more real then

[clonemasterman]

lol not how u fire gun....shoulders down unless u is randomly aimlessly firing....then u do like that (im a old navy seal retired)

[ihatejadeturner]

haha yeah, i know plenty of retired seals who use the words LOL and spell you "u". who are you kidding.

[RickRay9]

Yeah, yeah, plenty of retired old seals use LOL and U as "you". I'm so sure...

[JLProductions1000]

Pretty good job! nice sounds effects

[shadowblackmagic]

I have a proposition for you. My video will explain all.

[detonateasplode]

Only improvement I can say is make your gun have blowback.

[KaiwalkProducer]

could use to track motion EXPLOSION stay in one place

[Continental4328]

I just googles them

[grandastra]

wher e to get those sounds????

[animatorxz]

nuke not good? omg, it awesome, i dont think the nuke is wrong, its great, 5 stars

[jonascale]

its a nice start but you sould look into building a stead cam or shoot wide and then run a stablize motion in AE it helps sell some of the effects you could all so use some of the motion tracking to add some blast craters or something but all in all it was good

[XXavierTaylor]

I have some advice 4 the nuke. Use a tripod to keep it steady.

[Ricebawx]

NIce video impressive for just a one man character.

[Continental4328]

thanks

[DWho42]

i quite liked this! :*)

[Continental4328]

wow get off my back already, I said I type realy fast so I make simple mistakes I know, you dont have to keep reminding me!

[ryansmuc]

ur the worlds shittest speller dude check ur videos first

[ampix0]

..SO many spelling errors..

[LightningFireFilms]

Type this in the search and tell me what you think of my video. - Warzone 2 -

[juusiksi]

Nice! Go see my movie trailer by clicking my channel and komment thx

[robdvda]

hew cool movie check out the short action movie i made i hope you like

[Continental4328]

yeah sorry I tend to type realy fast lol my bad

[Ballowall]

Hey not bad! Just learn how to spell and you'll be on your way!

[markandmilo]

i kinda wanna see a second part of this its really good for amateur effect people you should look into the show heres i do loads of special effects remakes about them lol thumbs up!!!

[JePaProducties]

can u send me some special effects? think ur movie is really cool!

[belmin16]

Check out my vids..well type in "Diamond Effects Final Version"

[rustenhaven]

dude thats pretty good

i got after effects and i cant learn how to do all that

[Continental4328]

thanks :0)

[tjokken14]

tell ya.. my first time was WAY more sucky than that... ++ kiddo

[Continental4328]

um i got them from a cuple of places some from Freesounds home page some from google ect... just bout everywhere

[1DoubleMproductionS1]

thanks man

[1DoubleMproductionS1]

nice one man!

where did u get ur sound fx?

[Explode79]

not bad, you NEED to do that Forrest Gump parody you were talking about.

NATCO approved.

[Nextizious]

nice video :)nuclear explosion was good. u just had to track video and parent explosion footage on main footage. Because without it explosion looks like it's don't belong there. it's like made using just copy and paste. Anyway, as first test it's really good. keep practising. :)

[anthonybsb]

hahha the nuclear xD wasnt too bad ^^ maybe a bit the visual fx ^^ lol but the sound and the light white on all the place was really great ;) many congratulations! :D

[Continental4328]

thanks matt

[tacotacochimichonga]

lol u r a nuke virgin! that was pretty funny. better than da plastic bags

[Continental4328]

Hey sorry for the realy bad Nuclear explosion if I could find a better one then the Detonation films but ohwell