The "mystery" parts in the Chorus is really flat, and it's not due to the doubling. Also on Luna's last part, doesn't matter if you couldn't do her last part - there's always the option of using your head voice or singing an octave lower (which will be a bit weird) instead of singing way off. I really think you're lacking lots of support in your singing as well as energy. The Amber parts were the best, but still, there needs to be that attitude in there. Good try though.
@iKrazim Thanks for the critism~ I really needed one to improve. This cover was very disappointing to me cause I wasn't able to put my best efforts in. I will try to improve for my next cover then. Any suggestions on how I can improve?
when you are singing "mystery" and "history" part, it's flat.. O.O not to be rude, but the rest A B S O LU T E perfect! :)
gltzsprklz3 1 year ago
WOO NUABO xD!
dannieeeeeeftw 1 year ago
i like :)
dancekpop 1 year ago
The "mystery" parts in the Chorus is really flat, and it's not due to the doubling. Also on Luna's last part, doesn't matter if you couldn't do her last part - there's always the option of using your head voice or singing an octave lower (which will be a bit weird) instead of singing way off. I really think you're lacking lots of support in your singing as well as energy. The Amber parts were the best, but still, there needs to be that attitude in there. Good try though.
iKrazim 1 year ago
@iKrazim Thanks for the critism~ I really needed one to improve. This cover was very disappointing to me cause I wasn't able to put my best efforts in. I will try to improve for my next cover then. Any suggestions on how I can improve?
yangmingming93 1 year ago
Cuute =]
You're a bit off during the hystyeric/mystery parts? or is it just me..xD
And luna's final part.
LOLL i love your amber parts =D
arrythmiaax 1 year ago
@arrythmiaax lol, i couldnt do luna's part..and i doubled the chorus part...so maybe thats why it sounds off
yangmingming93 1 year ago