Please give out 7 as fast as you can, my heart has never beated this fast while reading something. You should be a writer, make big fat books, I would have read them! :D
you shouldn't mention no-names like lexi and that new boy in the story. they make ppl less interested... btw- i'm not trying to be mean and sorry if it sounds like it. :-) no hard feelings, just criticism babe! XD
okay... i understand you're trying to give me tips & all. but i prefer if you didn't . im just saying, i write my story the way i want to, & obviously people like them. & if their not interested, their not interested.
where's part 7?
I really really loved it, I love you! xD
Please give out 7 as fast as you can, my heart has never beated this fast while reading something. You should be a writer, make big fat books, I would have read them! :D
Sanglerke 2 years ago
<3333
DSALANGA1 2 years ago
loveee it
u make really good storiessss :)
and i love this song soooo much
shelly9167 2 years ago
loved it
cant wait 4 the nxt one!!!
i think its tom at her window
XxgoddesshannahxX 2 years ago
oh and i just have to add
bad Dezi bad dezi tsk tsk lol she cant like that other guy she has to stay with tom :P andi bet its tom at her window
Chickofmanywonders 2 years ago
ur my new favorite person so glad u uploaded and ur right getting older only gets harder but oh well =/ gr8t ch. luved it
Chickofmanywonders 2 years ago
you shouldn't mention no-names like lexi and that new boy in the story. they make ppl less interested... btw- i'm not trying to be mean and sorry if it sounds like it. :-) no hard feelings, just criticism babe! XD
MusicandDenim 2 years ago
okay... i understand you're trying to give me tips & all. but i prefer if you didn't . im just saying, i write my story the way i want to, & obviously people like them. & if their not interested, their not interested.
cici92 2 years ago
wow... ok...
MusicandDenim 2 years ago
i know i kinda sound like a bitch. but like i said, i'm just saying.
cici92 2 years ago
Oh, well ur cool! :) Haha! :)
MusicandDenim 2 years ago
i think she's trying to make the story more dynamic. Make it interesting, and stir things up.
LexiInfinity483 2 years ago
great story!
nieve564 2 years ago
it was amazing
Anarchy347 2 years ago