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From: cici92
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  • where's part 7?

    I really really loved it, I love you! xD

    Please give out 7 as fast as you can, my heart has never beated this fast while reading something. You should be a writer, make big fat books, I would have read them! :D

  • <3333

  • loveee it

    u make really good storiessss :)

    and i love this song soooo much

  • loved it

    cant wait 4 the nxt one!!!

    i think its tom at her window

  • oh and i just have to add

    bad Dezi bad dezi tsk tsk lol she cant like that other guy she has to stay with tom :P andi bet its tom at her window

  • ur my new favorite person so glad u uploaded and ur right getting older only gets harder but oh well =/ gr8t ch. luved it

  • you shouldn't mention no-names like lexi and that new boy in the story. they make ppl less interested... btw- i'm not trying to be mean and sorry if it sounds like it. :-) no hard feelings, just criticism babe! XD

  • okay... i understand you're trying to give me tips & all. but i prefer if you didn't . im just saying, i write my story the way i want to, & obviously people like them. & if their not interested, their not interested.

  • wow... ok...

  • i know i kinda sound like a bitch. but like i said, i'm just saying.

  • Oh, well ur cool! :) Haha! :)

  • i think she's trying to make the story more dynamic. Make it interesting, and stir things up.

  • great story!

  • it was amazing

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