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  • This guy is awesome, a true legend in the making. Known him forever and have big respect ;)

  • I like the lyrics, sometimes simple is better

  • I like! sounds good !!!

  • not really no...

  • nice music and nice voice i like...

    

  • VERY GOOD TANKS MY PACE IN COLOMBIAN PEOOPLE

  • thumbs up if you like the word CRUMBLE (IRRELEVANT) :D

  • i like this one pretty much :)

  • cool voice

  • you write some pretty amazing stuff :)

  • Nice <3

    

  • Great voice! definitely I can feel it :)

  • so fresh! i love it! :D

  • Welldone Cousin!

    Check out : the vinyls-get it out of your head

    This is what your cousin is doing.

    Good luck and we'll support each other one day.

    Barners x

  • I love it ! =]

    You should consider being a Christian Artist.

  • You remind me of Coldplay.it's Great :D

  • i like the beat i like your voice i like you...all i have to say is the lyrics...i agree with 125600min the lyrics do need a little work but once you have a little more there i think you'll be set...dont stop trying there's always hope...best of luck :-)

  • I like!

  • Omg nice one

  • the voice is nice....the lyrics are ok....

  • nice

  • Nvm I heard it a couple times more. It's great like that.

  • Jonny: I like the lyrics and the song is pretty good. I just want to suggest you add a better beat. You know something that's a little more up beat at times. I'm like no pro but I think a flat beat through a whole song can ruin the good parts of it.

  • good!

  • i like it :)) i can feel it :P

  • its got a great pop feel to it, i would like to hear some more variation in the instrumentation. just a thought would be to toss in a more folky instrument like a banjo or mandolin, it could give the song a whole new feel you might enjoy. i think you got promise mate, keep playing and experimenting with it.

  • Have to say that u r really GOOD

  • Its alright.noy badd

  • Good song good voice and nice guy! I now him well. and he is good at singing thumbs up if you agree!

  • your good

    

  • ya know wat hun it aint bad at all i reckon if this is the kind of stuff ya gonna keep doin then i think ya gonna do well but i think u ask if u feel it a bit much babe other than that its all good hun xx

  • you have a very good voice, I like it. I like the song. Keep going!

  • its good but like 126600min said the lyrics need a bit of work :)

    i really like the video and the music it self :)

    subbed.

  • great song, great voice and i kind of like the repetitive chorus well done.,

  • I have to agree with redbarktube the song has a very catchy beat. I love the way you build up to something beautiful. It would have been a bit better if the lyrics weren't so repetitive. You should definitely stick with it, one day you'll be famous. :)

  • I think its got a catchy, foot tapping kind of beat. Well done!!!! while I agree that the lyrics are simple, some of the greatest hits in the world have simple lyrics....(Elvis, "you ain't nothin but a hound dog", rolling stones "satisfaction", and even coldplay "yellow" is kind of simple, but SOOOOO well done) simple lyrics are good if they say something meaningful :)) Thank you for sending and congrats on a goood song!!!!!

  • ur great and ur voice is great, but i would make the lyrics a bit more interesting, because... im feeling it a bit tomuch right now :D

  • As everyone here is saying, there's a bit too much 'feel it' in the lyrics. I also don't like you're voice in those parts... to me it sounds a bit like you're dying... Oo

  • Can you feel it?

  • i like it :) your voice is amazing and i really like the video

    nice !

  • great song, very indie. I could listern to this a few times without wanting to change the song, Il show my friends xx

  • the lyrics do sound a little generic

    but I do love your voice :D

  • It's amazing! All so lyrics, but It's too much of 'can you feel it'. Because of that it's harder to feel it.

  • Wow! Awesome!

  • This is good! its just not my type of music... :)

  • Jonny White' song is so good.

  • subscribed! i think your top dog! lol

  • you seem nice, but i don't really like the song but im sure you can do better :)

  • Pretty cool. I definately like it.

  • maccabees sound! (:

    I like it :p

  • hey nice music movie :-)

  • oh thumb me like a man!

  • your off in the right direction man, keep it going! it'll get you somewhere (:

  • I think you have a really good voice and all the instrumental work is good, but the lyrics need a little work. By the time you're done asking me if I can feel it, I've forgotten what I'm supposed to be feeling.

  • @125600min fuck off the lyrics are amazing.

  • @mm1k3y He asked for opinions on the song. You may like his lyrics, which is fine if it's your opinion, but I respectfully disagree.

  • nice..

  • Has a chris martin feel, definitely ;) love it

  • Hi thx for show me it ..I like colplay..it's like chris Martín's voice. See u GBY

  • coldplay. this is nice. i like it

  • i thought it was brilliant defonatly one i will get on my ipod

  • Great Job !

  • sorry bud, not feelin it...

    sounds like you're whining :/

  • @FolkListener shut the fuck up.

  • I wasn't expecting this much as it looks and sounds professional enough. But I think you can do it better as in more than just saying 'Can you feel it' :)

  • nice. the colour correction is a good simulator of ADHD

  • I like this song a lot! Keep working on some more!

  • i can't fucking wait to see you get famous ! your music is so simple, proffesional and catchy !

  • Just saying freakin brilliant ,great beat and sound .•*¨*•♫♪

  • It was good. I liked it better as the tempo picked up. Good job. I hope you make it!

  • im rating your videos on jmaster releases.. and maybe again on my other upcoming channels

  • he has a great voice! love it!!!!!

  • your shirt bothers me but the music makes up for it. (:

  • yeah man this is cool... keep up the good work mate. I am glad you sent me this track i will listen to this just as much as i listen to my other fav tracks......... well done!

  • it reminds me of mumford & sons

    you have a beautiful voice :] keep up the great work :D

  • pretty good :)

  • I like it

  • Very catchy! I like it.

  • Pretty good man :)

  • Oh my goodness! This is amazing!

  • Sorry, sounds like shit to me.

  • love it

  • It's cool man:)

  • like it, it reminds me of mumford and sons, sounds awkward, but I SERIOUSLY like this

  • I like it. Good job, man!

    Good luck! Don't give up ;)

  • Randomly got this in my email, not bad. kinda catchy

  • Oh Wow is sooooooo Nice this Song is wow :-D ;-) Peace GAGA Greetings from Germany :-D

  • Reminds me of mumford and sons i guess it's a good thing i like them ;).

    Just keep doing ur thing dont worry about what's popular!!!!!

  • I did really enjoy this. It's a Kind of Kings of Leon/ ColdPlay song which are some of my favourite bands. Keep making songs like this!

  • From the start you reminded me of Coldplay. You have great vocals, at times they were a little weak but I felt the power during the chorus. Also, the verses seemed sort of dull to me. They were good, just dull. Loved the chorus though. :)

  • Oh,I can feel it,I can feel it......

  • While I'm not exactly a fan of this style of music, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I've subbed to you, now you return the favor.

  • I LOVE UR VOICE AND UR SONG IS BEAUTIFUL ;))

    good luck

  • GOOD ENERGY, MOVE IT & MAKE IT REAL!

  • Tune is catchy but i like stronger vocals. Sounds kinda wimpy. Also needs drums. Good luck to u.

  • This is great! Good Luck :) 

  • thanks for sending this to me, i enjoyed it.

  • I like it! but i'm agree with adrienne901, you need more instruments or vocals, but it's a pretty song. Good luck!!!

  • Nice song, good luck guy!

  • it reminds me of a cross between Coldplay and Kings of Leon, i like it. your voice is great! :)

  • Good song! Good luck x

  • the song is really good, I like it ..... good luck with your musical career

  • This is why I love YouTube, always such great people out there making music. Expect a purchase from me my friend. Also go out and buy yourself 10 spiral notebook pads, start writing. You are gunna need lots of material when you start moving up in the industry, trust me it will happen an they are going to want lots of songs out of you to make an album.

  • pretty damn good

  • it has a unique sound to it or maybe its jus because is somethinhg i dnt listen to everyday but its allright

  • I really do like this song, but I agree with the others that the begining is a little slow. You said you were like Snow Patrol; you should take from Snow Patrol's example and add a few more instruments which will give it a sense of uniqueness. I find that because Snow Patrol has so many instruments, their songs are so intricate and leave me wanting to keep listening in order to find every bit. Over all, I believe that you are on a great start and I wish you much luck in your musical career.

  • I like the beginning a lot! the rest of the song feels like there's something missing. maybe some more instruments and backing vocals.

  • You're good, really! Sounds very proffesional, nice song and everything. It's not reaally my piece of cake with this kind of music. But it's good, sure is. Good luck :)!

  • the song and sounds are so lovely that the video really doesn't do it justice :D but hey, it's the song that matters and you've scored on that!

  • love it man! goodMusic!

  • You're so fantastic, I can definitely feel it!

  • Actually I thought you were one of those hopeless people who would be musicians but had no talent. I was wrong. I'm glad that you sent messages out to people. But, anyway: most hate commercials, so if you are good you'll probably get a lot of views. Keep up the good work. :-)

  • And this guy is'nt famous because???

  • Good job. Keep making great songs.

  • I like the song :)

    It gives me peace.

  • nice OMG <3 :D

  • can you feel it, is unique

  • good song for holidays xD +

  • You have quite a unique voice. :-)

  • Enjoyed this so much.. it reminds me of something the Courteeners would sing - your the next Liam Fray! i can defiantly see you performing at future festivals! Hope to hear more :)

  • You are absolutely melodic and original ! Come to Poland to play ! :o)

  • i love this song

    and the video is so unique

    you can sing to me whenever

    you need someone to test you music (:

    lovess it!

  • great job. Nice video. Thanks for the link. Good luck :)

  • cool...

  • ure voice needs a bit of work but ure on ure way kid... kings of leon reference- don't go there

  • I liked it, the music is nice but the video is... there is a bit to much going on, Its hard to tell whats really going on. Perhaps you could try to put in fewer and lengthier shots. its good music

  • i really like it its very very beautiful :) great job :)

  • This is really, really nice. Your voice feels home-y in a way. 

  • This is fucking amazing,bro!!!

  • good song, you just need a bit more instruments to give it the wall of sound... reminds me a lot of Radioactive by Kings of Leon

  • It's like Kings of lion, it reminds me a song of them

  • @Tomi120597 Its Kings of Leon, mate :/

  • @Tomi120597 Leon**

  • The song i think is great, the letter is also great, i think at the beggining it needs a little mor guitar, so it can catch you, you know, i like the drums when you sing '' Can you feel it ?'', but you're the musician here not me, i think you have a good future

  • Great :)

    

  • oh mate thx for send me message :) your really nice  go ahead: ) cover some coldplay cause your voce is nice to it

  • Nice song, congratulations! There might be more lyrics or a bit more complex melody, but all in all it's good :))

  • thats a fukin gud song mate. wud put u in a gud mood. gud luck 2 ya. 

  • thats a nice one ......makes me happy . U have a awsome voice. i like it :-)

  • good job;) +

    and good luck for you(:

    [i think i can feel it:) ]

  • thumbs up if song will get alot of views like in a month

  • Dude... I like it :) Good luck with this!

  • awesome 

  • it sounds like Bloc Party! great!!

  • you snt me the email and im glad you did other wise id nbever of heard it and its really good!

  • nice,I like it! :)

  • wow thats actually a really cool song

  • next time don't wear a polo shirt

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  • Your voice was much better in this video! The song is a bit boring though. Good job and good luck!

  • it's nice..keep up the good work!!

  • I think you have an amazing talent!! I like your vocals but I find that you lift off the song late i mean you should have had that up beat not at 1:42 but earlyer in the song.Anyways I really enjoyed it and look forward to hearing more from you!!

  • I really like it :) I can see a lot of potential in you. And thanks for sharing ;) I wish you all the best. Oh, and you're cute ;D

  • I like this song, thank you for sharing this video with me!

  • I think this song needs some adjusting....like it isnt the final version yet. Got potential though!!

  • whats it called again?

  • Wohh i like it.

  • I like it. Really. I don't know why these people say it's monotonous. It's not! That's the point, the repetition.

    Good luck, man:)

  • It sounds a little bit repetitive!!

    I dind't love it... it's just ok

  • The repetitive "can you feel it" really started to get on my nerves. On top of that, it seems like you're trying very hard to achieve an "effortless" sound with regards to your voice, leading to a kind of purr or growl that is not so much singing as it is loud whispering. The song has potential, but I'm not a huge fan of where it's at right now.

  • A song this speed doesn't really need more instruments it sounded pretty good in my opinion with just what he had it fit the song. Yes he could do a little more with his lyrics but I'd like to see either of you write a good song, with good instrumentals, get some good camera work done, and post it on Youtube and get a good responce.

  • Chris Martin's voice simulator.....

  • ok that`s all i can say

  • ur hot

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  • Good work really. Favo 'd it. facebook knows you :D

  • is that really you ? nice video and nice voice. i like it broo

  • keep doing what you like ,i hear 80's/90's, lyrics ???, your voice require more instruments , and try to suprise sb in your next song, i hope will be better

  • real good that, your'e one to look out for in the future :P

    

  • it got better about half way through, not bad tune though ;)

  • Very good, dude!

  • Okay song, the rhythm's pretty good but the lyrics are way to simple and I don't feel like you're telling me a story because that's what song's are supposed to do. Your voice wasn't the best either but if you keep going you might just pull it off.