i like the beat i like your voice i like you...all i have to say is the lyrics...i agree with 125600min the lyrics do need a little work but once you have a little more there i think you'll be set...dont stop trying there's always hope...best of luck :-)
Jonny: I like the lyrics and the song is pretty good. I just want to suggest you add a better beat. You know something that's a little more up beat at times. I'm like no pro but I think a flat beat through a whole song can ruin the good parts of it.
its got a great pop feel to it, i would like to hear some more variation in the instrumentation. just a thought would be to toss in a more folky instrument like a banjo or mandolin, it could give the song a whole new feel you might enjoy. i think you got promise mate, keep playing and experimenting with it.
ya know wat hun it aint bad at all i reckon if this is the kind of stuff ya gonna keep doin then i think ya gonna do well but i think u ask if u feel it a bit much babe other than that its all good hun xx
I have to agree with redbarktube the song has a very catchy beat. I love the way you build up to something beautiful. It would have been a bit better if the lyrics weren't so repetitive. You should definitely stick with it, one day you'll be famous. :)
I think its got a catchy, foot tapping kind of beat. Well done!!!! while I agree that the lyrics are simple, some of the greatest hits in the world have simple lyrics....(Elvis, "you ain't nothin but a hound dog", rolling stones "satisfaction", and even coldplay "yellow" is kind of simple, but SOOOOO well done) simple lyrics are good if they say something meaningful :)) Thank you for sending and congrats on a goood song!!!!!
As everyone here is saying, there's a bit too much 'feel it' in the lyrics. I also don't like you're voice in those parts... to me it sounds a bit like you're dying... Oo
I think you have a really good voice and all the instrumental work is good, but the lyrics need a little work. By the time you're done asking me if I can feel it, I've forgotten what I'm supposed to be feeling.
I wasn't expecting this much as it looks and sounds professional enough. But I think you can do it better as in more than just saying 'Can you feel it' :)
yeah man this is cool... keep up the good work mate. I am glad you sent me this track i will listen to this just as much as i listen to my other fav tracks......... well done!
From the start you reminded me of Coldplay. You have great vocals, at times they were a little weak but I felt the power during the chorus. Also, the verses seemed sort of dull to me. They were good, just dull. Loved the chorus though. :)
This is why I love YouTube, always such great people out there making music. Expect a purchase from me my friend. Also go out and buy yourself 10 spiral notebook pads, start writing. You are gunna need lots of material when you start moving up in the industry, trust me it will happen an they are going to want lots of songs out of you to make an album.
I really do like this song, but I agree with the others that the begining is a little slow. You said you were like Snow Patrol; you should take from Snow Patrol's example and add a few more instruments which will give it a sense of uniqueness. I find that because Snow Patrol has so many instruments, their songs are so intricate and leave me wanting to keep listening in order to find every bit. Over all, I believe that you are on a great start and I wish you much luck in your musical career.
You're good, really! Sounds very proffesional, nice song and everything. It's not reaally my piece of cake with this kind of music. But it's good, sure is. Good luck :)!
Actually I thought you were one of those hopeless people who would be musicians but had no talent. I was wrong. I'm glad that you sent messages out to people. But, anyway: most hate commercials, so if you are good you'll probably get a lot of views. Keep up the good work. :-)
Enjoyed this so much.. it reminds me of something the Courteeners would sing - your the next Liam Fray! i can defiantly see you performing at future festivals! Hope to hear more :)
I liked it, the music is nice but the video is... there is a bit to much going on, Its hard to tell whats really going on. Perhaps you could try to put in fewer and lengthier shots. its good music
The song i think is great, the letter is also great, i think at the beggining it needs a little mor guitar, so it can catch you, you know, i like the drums when you sing '' Can you feel it ?'', but you're the musician here not me, i think you have a good future
I think you have an amazing talent!! I like your vocals but I find that you lift off the song late i mean you should have had that up beat not at 1:42 but earlyer in the song.Anyways I really enjoyed it and look forward to hearing more from you!!
The repetitive "can you feel it" really started to get on my nerves. On top of that, it seems like you're trying very hard to achieve an "effortless" sound with regards to your voice, leading to a kind of purr or growl that is not so much singing as it is loud whispering. The song has potential, but I'm not a huge fan of where it's at right now.
A song this speed doesn't really need more instruments it sounded pretty good in my opinion with just what he had it fit the song. Yes he could do a little more with his lyrics but I'd like to see either of you write a good song, with good instrumentals, get some good camera work done, and post it on Youtube and get a good responce.
You have a fantastic voice, one I'd like to hear more of...BUT..you need to work on your song choice / lyrics....the song 'Feel IT' is lacking something...maybe as stated in comments above a few more instruments...I'm not sure, but the song is very flat and the lyrics aren't catchy......just my honest opinion, but then I guess that's what your looking for....you have a great voice tho..
keep doing what you like ,i hear 80's/90's, lyrics ???, your voice require more instruments , and try to suprise sb in your next song, i hope will be better
Okay song, the rhythm's pretty good but the lyrics are way to simple and I don't feel like you're telling me a story because that's what song's are supposed to do. Your voice wasn't the best either but if you keep going you might just pull it off.
This guy is awesome, a true legend in the making. Known him forever and have big respect ;)
bunnyhop28 1 week ago
I like the lyrics, sometimes simple is better
wiccart13 2 weeks ago
I like! sounds good !!!
sweta1308 2 weeks ago
not really no...
yasminab265 2 weeks ago
nice music and nice voice i like...
rain02674 3 weeks ago
VERY GOOD TANKS MY PACE IN COLOMBIAN PEOOPLE
tatan9529 3 months ago
thumbs up if you like the word CRUMBLE (IRRELEVANT) :D
19jom19 3 months ago
i like this one pretty much :)
19jom19 3 months ago
cool voice
MrHardstyle1993 3 months ago
you write some pretty amazing stuff :)
RockyRode19 3 months ago
Nice <3
blueyedblonde001 4 months ago
Great voice! definitely I can feel it :)
Gabby17176 4 months ago
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JonnyMcCraine22 4 months ago
so fresh! i love it! :D
TheCalabaza93 4 months ago
Welldone Cousin!
Check out : the vinyls-get it out of your head
This is what your cousin is doing.
Good luck and we'll support each other one day.
Barners x
bunnyhop28 4 months ago
I love it ! =]
You should consider being a Christian Artist.
jlovett111 5 months ago
You remind me of Coldplay.it's Great :D
taljonas 5 months ago
i like the beat i like your voice i like you...all i have to say is the lyrics...i agree with 125600min the lyrics do need a little work but once you have a little more there i think you'll be set...dont stop trying there's always hope...best of luck :-)
music4me1996 5 months ago
I like!
CyborgJ0 5 months ago in playlist More videos from jonnywhitemusic
Omg nice one
silverthunderbolt 5 months ago
the voice is nice....the lyrics are ok....
junisas1 5 months ago
nice
Lareniear 5 months ago
Nvm I heard it a couple times more. It's great like that.
xo1sasha1xo 5 months ago
Jonny: I like the lyrics and the song is pretty good. I just want to suggest you add a better beat. You know something that's a little more up beat at times. I'm like no pro but I think a flat beat through a whole song can ruin the good parts of it.
xo1sasha1xo 5 months ago
good!
TheMariasoad 6 months ago
i like it :)) i can feel it :P
NeSeTv 6 months ago
its got a great pop feel to it, i would like to hear some more variation in the instrumentation. just a thought would be to toss in a more folky instrument like a banjo or mandolin, it could give the song a whole new feel you might enjoy. i think you got promise mate, keep playing and experimenting with it.
42throwaway 6 months ago
Have to say that u r really GOOD
kitty820831 6 months ago
Its alright.noy badd
roxychic1231 6 months ago
Good song good voice and nice guy! I now him well. and he is good at singing thumbs up if you agree!
Herbvfleaham 6 months ago
your good
airsoftm16nut 6 months ago
ya know wat hun it aint bad at all i reckon if this is the kind of stuff ya gonna keep doin then i think ya gonna do well but i think u ask if u feel it a bit much babe other than that its all good hun xx
2011pompeyfc 6 months ago
you have a very good voice, I like it. I like the song. Keep going!
greeneyes2878 6 months ago
its good but like 126600min said the lyrics need a bit of work :)
i really like the video and the music it self :)
subbed.
bubblemonster3 6 months ago
great song, great voice and i kind of like the repetitive chorus well done.,
lillybelle08 6 months ago
I have to agree with redbarktube the song has a very catchy beat. I love the way you build up to something beautiful. It would have been a bit better if the lyrics weren't so repetitive. You should definitely stick with it, one day you'll be famous. :)
badroxy21 6 months ago
I think its got a catchy, foot tapping kind of beat. Well done!!!! while I agree that the lyrics are simple, some of the greatest hits in the world have simple lyrics....(Elvis, "you ain't nothin but a hound dog", rolling stones "satisfaction", and even coldplay "yellow" is kind of simple, but SOOOOO well done) simple lyrics are good if they say something meaningful :)) Thank you for sending and congrats on a goood song!!!!!
redbarktube 6 months ago
ur great and ur voice is great, but i would make the lyrics a bit more interesting, because... im feeling it a bit tomuch right now :D
blade888855 6 months ago
As everyone here is saying, there's a bit too much 'feel it' in the lyrics. I also don't like you're voice in those parts... to me it sounds a bit like you're dying... Oo
Cassidy13K 6 months ago
Can you feel it?
MichaelTindale92 6 months ago
i like it :) your voice is amazing and i really like the video
nice !
MissMuck93 6 months ago
great song, very indie. I could listern to this a few times without wanting to change the song, Il show my friends xx
cat69jones 6 months ago
the lyrics do sound a little generic
but I do love your voice :D
paloms54 6 months ago
It's amazing! All so lyrics, but It's too much of 'can you feel it'. Because of that it's harder to feel it.
JanAnneAmelink 6 months ago
Wow! Awesome!
TheGorillaz4ever 6 months ago
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I love it! Really great.
Menddraeda 6 months ago
This is good! its just not my type of music... :)
Bogafrog 6 months ago
Jonny White' song is so good.
ymctjny 7 months ago
subscribed! i think your top dog! lol
mm1k3y 7 months ago
you seem nice, but i don't really like the song but im sure you can do better :)
20cFilmWannabe 7 months ago
Pretty cool. I definately like it.
KacieNLuv 7 months ago
maccabees sound! (:
I like it :p
TheGoodChild12 7 months ago
hey nice music movie :-)
kinn5028 7 months ago
oh thumb me like a man!
jumpconnorjump 7 months ago
your off in the right direction man, keep it going! it'll get you somewhere (:
blackoutfour 7 months ago
I think you have a really good voice and all the instrumental work is good, but the lyrics need a little work. By the time you're done asking me if I can feel it, I've forgotten what I'm supposed to be feeling.
125600min 7 months ago 12
@125600min fuck off the lyrics are amazing.
mm1k3y 6 months ago
@mm1k3y He asked for opinions on the song. You may like his lyrics, which is fine if it's your opinion, but I respectfully disagree.
125600min 5 months ago
nice..
MARINAMORSKA 7 months ago
Has a chris martin feel, definitely ;) love it
WhiteHawkPROD 7 months ago
Hi thx for show me it ..I like colplay..it's like chris Martín's voice. See u GBY
Lizandra45ful 7 months ago
coldplay. this is nice. i like it
Cultzta23 7 months ago
i thought it was brilliant defonatly one i will get on my ipod
Marshmello5125 7 months ago
Great Job !
TheoMols 7 months ago
sorry bud, not feelin it...
sounds like you're whining :/
FolkListener 7 months ago
@FolkListener shut the fuck up.
WhiteHawkPROD 7 months ago
I wasn't expecting this much as it looks and sounds professional enough. But I think you can do it better as in more than just saying 'Can you feel it' :)
puredeviLry 7 months ago
nice. the colour correction is a good simulator of ADHD
poochengeez 7 months ago 2
I like this song a lot! Keep working on some more!
dcoye99 7 months ago
i can't fucking wait to see you get famous ! your music is so simple, proffesional and catchy !
pvtxpotrenko 7 months ago
Just saying freakin brilliant ,great beat and sound .•*¨*•♫♪
ccrider83 7 months ago
It was good. I liked it better as the tempo picked up. Good job. I hope you make it!
lzyprsn 7 months ago
im rating your videos on jmaster releases.. and maybe again on my other upcoming channels
jmaster2242 7 months ago
he has a great voice! love it!!!!!
RememberLucy 7 months ago
your shirt bothers me but the music makes up for it. (:
myychemmgurll22 7 months ago
yeah man this is cool... keep up the good work mate. I am glad you sent me this track i will listen to this just as much as i listen to my other fav tracks......... well done!
KingSlim1 7 months ago
it reminds me of mumford & sons
you have a beautiful voice :] keep up the great work :D
thelamestgroup 7 months ago
pretty good :)
iasmipunkrock 7 months ago
I like it
Anagaiardo 7 months ago
Very catchy! I like it.
tjung73 7 months ago
Pretty good man :)
MietKael 7 months ago
Oh my goodness! This is amazing!
HopeElizabethMusic 7 months ago
Sorry, sounds like shit to me.
1977andyb 7 months ago
love it
MrHomemadePain 7 months ago
It's cool man:)
eureka1e 7 months ago
like it, it reminds me of mumford and sons, sounds awkward, but I SERIOUSLY like this
14G302 7 months ago
I like it. Good job, man!
Good luck! Don't give up ;)
werodwo500 7 months ago
Randomly got this in my email, not bad. kinda catchy
ATRSGoat 7 months ago
Oh Wow is sooooooo Nice this Song is wow :-D ;-) Peace GAGA Greetings from Germany :-D
ThePlanetGAGA 7 months ago
Reminds me of mumford and sons i guess it's a good thing i like them ;).
Just keep doing ur thing dont worry about what's popular!!!!!
09saty 7 months ago
I did really enjoy this. It's a Kind of Kings of Leon/ ColdPlay song which are some of my favourite bands. Keep making songs like this!
TheIrishPC 7 months ago
From the start you reminded me of Coldplay. You have great vocals, at times they were a little weak but I felt the power during the chorus. Also, the verses seemed sort of dull to me. They were good, just dull. Loved the chorus though. :)
wAyInToL0V3 7 months ago
Oh,I can feel it,I can feel it......
ucantw84inspiration 7 months ago
While I'm not exactly a fan of this style of music, I thoroughly enjoyed it. I've subbed to you, now you return the favor.
DynaDuctINC 7 months ago
I LOVE UR VOICE AND UR SONG IS BEAUTIFUL ;))
good luck
jamito67082009 7 months ago
GOOD ENERGY, MOVE IT & MAKE IT REAL!
Xyionas 7 months ago
Tune is catchy but i like stronger vocals. Sounds kinda wimpy. Also needs drums. Good luck to u.
BiggADadd 7 months ago
This is great! Good Luck :)
DrLex97 7 months ago
thanks for sending this to me, i enjoyed it.
crazycookie66 7 months ago
I like it! but i'm agree with adrienne901, you need more instruments or vocals, but it's a pretty song. Good luck!!!
mire1618 7 months ago
Nice song, good luck guy!
mabi3112 7 months ago
it reminds me of a cross between Coldplay and Kings of Leon, i like it. your voice is great! :)
1taylorswifttwilight 7 months ago
Good song! Good luck x
missylikklespoon 7 months ago
the song is really good, I like it ..... good luck with your musical career
johanita91 7 months ago
This is why I love YouTube, always such great people out there making music. Expect a purchase from me my friend. Also go out and buy yourself 10 spiral notebook pads, start writing. You are gunna need lots of material when you start moving up in the industry, trust me it will happen an they are going to want lots of songs out of you to make an album.
SpartanT48 7 months ago
pretty damn good
YellowMTP 7 months ago
it has a unique sound to it or maybe its jus because is somethinhg i dnt listen to everyday but its allright
LieBeFiG26 7 months ago
I really do like this song, but I agree with the others that the begining is a little slow. You said you were like Snow Patrol; you should take from Snow Patrol's example and add a few more instruments which will give it a sense of uniqueness. I find that because Snow Patrol has so many instruments, their songs are so intricate and leave me wanting to keep listening in order to find every bit. Over all, I believe that you are on a great start and I wish you much luck in your musical career.
PreciousAndRare 7 months ago
I like the beginning a lot! the rest of the song feels like there's something missing. maybe some more instruments and backing vocals.
adrienne901 7 months ago
You're good, really! Sounds very proffesional, nice song and everything. It's not reaally my piece of cake with this kind of music. But it's good, sure is. Good luck :)!
agneshassler 7 months ago
the song and sounds are so lovely that the video really doesn't do it justice :D but hey, it's the song that matters and you've scored on that!
anime00manga 7 months ago
love it man! goodMusic!
MrClarkey480 7 months ago
You're so fantastic, I can definitely feel it!
OverRosie 7 months ago
Actually I thought you were one of those hopeless people who would be musicians but had no talent. I was wrong. I'm glad that you sent messages out to people. But, anyway: most hate commercials, so if you are good you'll probably get a lot of views. Keep up the good work. :-)
EmmaBasic 7 months ago
And this guy is'nt famous because???
CwummyCookies 7 months ago
Good job. Keep making great songs.
Didiencho 7 months ago
I like the song :)
It gives me peace.
Anderlxxi3 7 months ago
nice OMG <3 :D
TheLucyta 7 months ago
can you feel it, is unique
COLDPLAYYSNOWPATROL 8 months ago
good song for holidays xD +
sosen83 8 months ago
You have quite a unique voice. :-)
YourMicrophone 8 months ago
Enjoyed this so much.. it reminds me of something the Courteeners would sing - your the next Liam Fray! i can defiantly see you performing at future festivals! Hope to hear more :)
Kay2kaii7 8 months ago
You are absolutely melodic and original ! Come to Poland to play ! :o)
warhols25 8 months ago
i love this song
and the video is so unique
you can sing to me whenever
you need someone to test you music (:
lovess it!
inkyjuly93 8 months ago
great job. Nice video. Thanks for the link. Good luck :)
artnewkirkmusic 8 months ago
cool...
apictureinthesun 8 months ago
ure voice needs a bit of work but ure on ure way kid... kings of leon reference- don't go there
bones2063 8 months ago
I liked it, the music is nice but the video is... there is a bit to much going on, Its hard to tell whats really going on. Perhaps you could try to put in fewer and lengthier shots. its good music
TheM1a2d3d4y5 8 months ago
i really like it its very very beautiful :) great job :)
ooonlyupload 8 months ago
This is really, really nice. Your voice feels home-y in a way.
pepscake 8 months ago
This is fucking amazing,bro!!!
killingspeedrun 8 months ago
good song, you just need a bit more instruments to give it the wall of sound... reminds me a lot of Radioactive by Kings of Leon
GeneralSalt444 8 months ago
It's like Kings of lion, it reminds me a song of them
Tomi120597 8 months ago 4
@Tomi120597 Its Kings of Leon, mate :/
JBusie1996 7 months ago
@Tomi120597 Leon**
starkyliam 7 months ago
The song i think is great, the letter is also great, i think at the beggining it needs a little mor guitar, so it can catch you, you know, i like the drums when you sing '' Can you feel it ?'', but you're the musician here not me, i think you have a good future
Tomi120597 8 months ago
Great :)
SveMa100 8 months ago
oh mate thx for send me message :) your really nice go ahead: ) cover some coldplay cause your voce is nice to it
nitegamer123 8 months ago
Nice song, congratulations! There might be more lyrics or a bit more complex melody, but all in all it's good :))
MissSmaga 8 months ago
thats a fukin gud song mate. wud put u in a gud mood. gud luck 2 ya.
ezergood187 8 months ago
thats a nice one ......makes me happy . U have a awsome voice. i like it :-)
Alyssa0401 8 months ago
good job;) +
and good luck for you(:
[i think i can feel it:) ]
Ingridole 8 months ago
thumbs up if song will get alot of views like in a month
AbuelitoTracks 8 months ago
Dude... I like it :) Good luck with this!
Puckeep 8 months ago
awesome
AllysGoneCrazy 8 months ago
it sounds like Bloc Party! great!!
weeronika123 8 months ago
you snt me the email and im glad you did other wise id nbever of heard it and its really good!
mrscullen838 8 months ago
nice,I like it! :)
Dejana013 8 months ago
wow thats actually a really cool song
GiggleBum22 8 months ago
next time don't wear a polo shirt
TheEdithgreen 8 months ago
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TheEdithgreen 8 months ago
Your voice was much better in this video! The song is a bit boring though. Good job and good luck!
ShezAmes 8 months ago
it's nice..keep up the good work!!
mamu0202 8 months ago
I think you have an amazing talent!! I like your vocals but I find that you lift off the song late i mean you should have had that up beat not at 1:42 but earlyer in the song.Anyways I really enjoyed it and look forward to hearing more from you!!
tinkertoes1000 8 months ago
I really like it :) I can see a lot of potential in you. And thanks for sharing ;) I wish you all the best. Oh, and you're cute ;D
nugasek 8 months ago
I like this song, thank you for sharing this video with me!
porcelainheart2009 8 months ago
I think this song needs some adjusting....like it isnt the final version yet. Got potential though!!
T1theman 8 months ago
whats it called again?
eezlewax2 8 months ago
Wohh i like it.
koffiekaatje25 8 months ago
I like it. Really. I don't know why these people say it's monotonous. It's not! That's the point, the repetition.
Good luck, man:)
DeidaraUnLovesMe 8 months ago 5
It sounds a little bit repetitive!!
I dind't love it... it's just ok
monitadelafuente 8 months ago
The repetitive "can you feel it" really started to get on my nerves. On top of that, it seems like you're trying very hard to achieve an "effortless" sound with regards to your voice, leading to a kind of purr or growl that is not so much singing as it is loud whispering. The song has potential, but I'm not a huge fan of where it's at right now.
ahmunnaeatchoo1515 8 months ago
A song this speed doesn't really need more instruments it sounded pretty good in my opinion with just what he had it fit the song. Yes he could do a little more with his lyrics but I'd like to see either of you write a good song, with good instrumentals, get some good camera work done, and post it on Youtube and get a good responce.
selfdestructingpluto 8 months ago
Chris Martin's voice simulator.....
rafaelcbm 8 months ago
ok that`s all i can say
salamatqassem 8 months ago
ur hot
JumpingStarz 8 months ago
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Hi Johnny,
You have a fantastic voice, one I'd like to hear more of...BUT..you need to work on your song choice / lyrics....the song 'Feel IT' is lacking something...maybe as stated in comments above a few more instruments...I'm not sure, but the song is very flat and the lyrics aren't catchy......just my honest opinion, but then I guess that's what your looking for....you have a great voice tho..
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GinetteAshley 8 months ago
Good work really. Favo 'd it. facebook knows you :D
MilesHayesMusic 8 months ago
is that really you ? nice video and nice voice. i like it broo
babilah83 8 months ago
keep doing what you like ,i hear 80's/90's, lyrics ???, your voice require more instruments , and try to suprise sb in your next song, i hope will be better
michals2004 8 months ago
real good that, your'e one to look out for in the future :P
toby3330 8 months ago
it got better about half way through, not bad tune though ;)
mojo18881967 8 months ago
Very good, dude!
kajwilhelm 8 months ago
Okay song, the rhythm's pretty good but the lyrics are way to simple and I don't feel like you're telling me a story because that's what song's are supposed to do. Your voice wasn't the best either but if you keep going you might just pull it off.
4TheChangeOfScenery 8 months ago