hey guys. The voices are great, but here's some (hopefully) constructive critiscism:
Pick up the tempo in the conversations, it's a little too prolonged and awkward.
Secondly, try being much more descisive about the gags you use! You've had some pretty good jokes, but it won't hurt to just chop out some of the stuff that's "Yeah... kinda funny"
I am looking forward to seeing the next episodes though, good work.
@pandora5mix I concur, but abridged shows are typically faster paced. i almost feel like i just watched the full episode just dubbed over with almost no folley.... if someone points out to me that this was sam length of show, i will chuckle, as would have defeated the whole "abridged" part of name
Glad you the line Jen, this is like a dream for me. I've practiced DInobot's and Waspinator's voices since I was eight. So to now use them is a dream come true. Everyone did great, can't wait to work on the next episode.
No not a cliff hanger
ecwecwecw1 10 months ago
I like Megatron's voice, sounds good.
alterbr33d 1 year ago
Haha good job guys, love it. "Screw it, get them" lol. transformersvoice, perfect as always :)
OptimalOptimus2 2 years ago
I've been watching this almost every day when I get home from work.
transformersvoice 2 years ago 3
The last part was extremely funny between Dinobot and Optimus.
eishiba 2 years ago 2
I would like to do Rattrap for the next episode!
CartmanTuttle 2 years ago
okay. just put up an audition and I'll see if I like your voice.
ojex0 2 years ago
hey guys. The voices are great, but here's some (hopefully) constructive critiscism:
Pick up the tempo in the conversations, it's a little too prolonged and awkward.
Secondly, try being much more descisive about the gags you use! You've had some pretty good jokes, but it won't hurt to just chop out some of the stuff that's "Yeah... kinda funny"
I am looking forward to seeing the next episodes though, good work.
pandora5mix 2 years ago
@pandora5mix I concur, but abridged shows are typically faster paced. i almost feel like i just watched the full episode just dubbed over with almost no folley.... if someone points out to me that this was sam length of show, i will chuckle, as would have defeated the whole "abridged" part of name
apex2000 5 months ago
Glad you the line Jen, this is like a dream for me. I've practiced DInobot's and Waspinator's voices since I was eight. So to now use them is a dream come true. Everyone did great, can't wait to work on the next episode.
newguy09100 2 years ago
ahh that battle scene was awesome :) Dinobot. What? The episode's almost over. No wait.....
Y2JenJenn 2 years ago