@Snockooz its a good try and Im glad that you gave a wack at this but your script needs some improvements, the characters feel like there lacking emotion in there words and the writting is a bit awkward "it seems the pilot has left the ship." "I know...." I think a better response would be "they could be near by, cortana*or what ever ai you want to use*scan the area for life signs other then USNC personal." "scanning, . . . . . . . . to many life signs detected how ever a unique power is near."
However, for material used. fairly good use, and I Liked the cinematic approach to the scenes.
I liked it.
actually quite surprised that the Seraph as the same general shape of Samus most used ship XD
I would have given Samus the plasma pistol though.. even though it doesn't look like her arm cannon, it fires beams the right color and has a charge shot.
Galatic federation actually still have projectile weapons in use.
whether they are enhanced in anyway (kinda glow a bit), is unknown.
as it it so far, only Special Ops still use them and as side arms too high ranking officers.
based off observation, it may be that they use lower scale armor and weapons when not in war.
however, I'd suppose her evaluation would still be valid, their weapons still look cruder and have less streamline/advanced armor than the GF's soldiers
@Xerkxes Yea, After I wrote the script I found out that in other m they used Projectile weapons... oopps.. LOL What I'm going to try to do is have her always using the Plasma Rifle but make it look like it fires overcharged shots, which will be fuel rod shot, and rockets. Glad you like.
This is a good try,but honestly it's not that good.
Just my opinion. Also,don't stop trying. You can only get better!
MetroidMan95 3 months ago
@MetroidMan95 Yea I know I'm trying to get better.
Snockooz 3 months ago
@Snockooz its a good try and Im glad that you gave a wack at this but your script needs some improvements, the characters feel like there lacking emotion in there words and the writting is a bit awkward "it seems the pilot has left the ship." "I know...." I think a better response would be "they could be near by, cortana*or what ever ai you want to use*scan the area for life signs other then USNC personal." "scanning, . . . . . . . . to many life signs detected how ever a unique power is near."
ODSTx25 3 months ago
your welcome snock for the saraph i think you should put me in cradits thats not cool to leave me out =(
jzaper1 4 months ago
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jzaper1 4 months ago
I want to be apart of this my gamertag Kage no bushi13 hahaha :P
DavidLopez417 6 months ago
When Is episode two coming out?????
TheChristian5606 6 months ago
@TheChristian5606 soon don't worry.
Snockooz 6 months ago
The editing is very well done. I love all the different shots, it flows really well. Nicely done :D
AkuunKyande 6 months ago
However, for material used. fairly good use, and I Liked the cinematic approach to the scenes.
I liked it.
actually quite surprised that the Seraph as the same general shape of Samus most used ship XD
I would have given Samus the plasma pistol though.. even though it doesn't look like her arm cannon, it fires beams the right color and has a charge shot.
Xerkxes 7 months ago
Galatic federation actually still have projectile weapons in use.
whether they are enhanced in anyway (kinda glow a bit), is unknown.
as it it so far, only Special Ops still use them and as side arms too high ranking officers.
based off observation, it may be that they use lower scale armor and weapons when not in war.
however, I'd suppose her evaluation would still be valid, their weapons still look cruder and have less streamline/advanced armor than the GF's soldiers
Xerkxes 7 months ago
@Xerkxes Yea, After I wrote the script I found out that in other m they used Projectile weapons... oopps.. LOL What I'm going to try to do is have her always using the Plasma Rifle but make it look like it fires overcharged shots, which will be fuel rod shot, and rockets. Glad you like.
Snockooz 6 months ago