@almayim -- you know I have no idea -- '(something) grins with knuckles tight or white' it sounds like - but I can't make out the first word. I wrote the additional parts to the poem (the choruses) in a few min one day just as an exercise during a recording session. I didn't write any of it down... Thanks for your comment tho - Maybe you can come up with a better line that would work - Then i can re-record it. That is if I could remember the chord progression. :-)
I love this so much. I think the lyrics, both the ones from the original poem and the ones added, are amazing, and I love your voice. It really brings life to the poem =}
that is awesome... I find myself wanting to watch this again and again.. visually, lyrically, melodically. WOW. ever get to the Okanagon... ( I am a friend of Ferrons brother and sister ) I have only seen Ferron once at the old breakers in Point Roberts BC. but she was unreal to see as well. Cheers Sarah. You are inspiring!
@shoretabc Thanks for all your comments - It's always dangerous to interpret a beloved piece of work - I am happy people aren't lining up to string me up by the heals.
"and see you for who you are".... what is the line after that? I can't understand it. Great rendition!
almayim 9 months ago
@almayim -- you know I have no idea -- '(something) grins with knuckles tight or white' it sounds like - but I can't make out the first word. I wrote the additional parts to the poem (the choruses) in a few min one day just as an exercise during a recording session. I didn't write any of it down... Thanks for your comment tho - Maybe you can come up with a better line that would work - Then i can re-record it. That is if I could remember the chord progression. :-)
atworkartists 8 months ago
@atworkartists Aw.... i was going to ask for the chords next! I'll let you know if i do think of something, thanks!
almayim 8 months ago
Wow, and well. I may share this in writing classes.
mberning1 10 months ago
i love your music sarah...i listen to your songs alot. you should be famous. patty
leaferin 1 year ago
omfg this is amazing...i love it..its such a good creative adaptation, your voice is amazing...it totally made my day...soo good!
octobereves10 1 year ago
I love this so much. I think the lyrics, both the ones from the original poem and the ones added, are amazing, and I love your voice. It really brings life to the poem =}
sleepanxiety 2 years ago
that is awesome... I find myself wanting to watch this again and again.. visually, lyrically, melodically. WOW. ever get to the Okanagon... ( I am a friend of Ferrons brother and sister ) I have only seen Ferron once at the old breakers in Point Roberts BC. but she was unreal to see as well. Cheers Sarah. You are inspiring!
1jashe 3 years ago 4
wow that was great. That is my favorite poem and the song you created from it really does it justice,
shoretabc 3 years ago 5
@shoretabc Thanks for all your comments - It's always dangerous to interpret a beloved piece of work - I am happy people aren't lining up to string me up by the heals.
atworkartists 8 months ago
Good work, Great singing and playing!
Katiemizuno 3 years ago 3