The script is a bit packed for such a short film- little time is available in which to build up suspense. "Hi, I'm obviously not the dead fetus's father, oh wait I am, gotta go sacrifice myself so the Final Girl can get away, bye!" Plus, there's also Tak getting killed off in rather undramatic fashion. The skull flying was unnerving for about a half second.
I do like the lighting and set design- despite the script flaws, the visuals keep you interested through a painless five minutes.
GHOOOOOOOSSSTTTTT RAAAAAPPPPPEEE!!!!!!!
searesrayne 11 months ago
The script is a bit packed for such a short film- little time is available in which to build up suspense. "Hi, I'm obviously not the dead fetus's father, oh wait I am, gotta go sacrifice myself so the Final Girl can get away, bye!" Plus, there's also Tak getting killed off in rather undramatic fashion. The skull flying was unnerving for about a half second.
I do like the lighting and set design- despite the script flaws, the visuals keep you interested through a painless five minutes.
fearingalma1550 11 months ago
Did great mel! Sorry for fudging up my lines :-P
IrishBladesmith 11 months ago
My scream is still amazing!
spookymel82 11 months ago