-Lastly, I totally get the idea that this is a mix of different historical figures set in modern time. I like the look and feel of a college house with a ragtag group. I would just like to reiterate that I feel the characters need to retain more of their historical context through acting.
Of course every reality show needs a gay, but if you are going to go by those standards, you need a black person too. I definately see potential here, but there is a lot of room to grow. Please don't take my criticism as negative. I enjoyed watching this video.
I like the premise, although it seems an awful lot like previous mockumentary reality shows. I think your weak points are lack of acting talent, and production value. You have a Chinese guy (who seems like a live action version of ling-ling from Drawn Together) that wears a silky Chinese garb and speaks Chinese....then you have an Italian DaVinci who instead of speaking Italian or even an accent, wears modern clothes with a hint of gay to go along with his poorly presented homosexuality.
No prob. Watch that hit counter go up. I have been reposting your video for others to enjoy.
JoskelkatProductions 2 years ago
-Lastly, I totally get the idea that this is a mix of different historical figures set in modern time. I like the look and feel of a college house with a ragtag group. I would just like to reiterate that I feel the characters need to retain more of their historical context through acting.
JoskelkatProductions 2 years ago
What I did Like:
-Marie Curie, very sexy, great lighting (music sells it!)
-Being banished...to the basement
-Title sequence seems professional, could see it being on a network
-Editing, cuts occur with perfect timing
- Framing of shots and camera movement perfectly mimic this type of show.
JoskelkatProductions 2 years ago
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Of course every reality show needs a gay, but if you are going to go by those standards, you need a black person too. I definately see potential here, but there is a lot of room to grow. Please don't take my criticism as negative. I enjoyed watching this video.
JoskelkatProductions 2 years ago
I like the premise, although it seems an awful lot like previous mockumentary reality shows. I think your weak points are lack of acting talent, and production value. You have a Chinese guy (who seems like a live action version of ling-ling from Drawn Together) that wears a silky Chinese garb and speaks Chinese....then you have an Italian DaVinci who instead of speaking Italian or even an accent, wears modern clothes with a hint of gay to go along with his poorly presented homosexuality.
JoskelkatProductions 2 years ago
Thank you for your fascinating and delightful comments. Thanks for watching!
CincyFringeFestival 2 years ago