Hey Sarah. I'm a Film student too. There's alot to analyze abt this video. There r couple of mistakes, more like carelessness. a lot can be improve on the sound as well. I will not comment much on the footage wise since u guyz were only using HandyCam without tripod n lightings .We can discus more on BlofTv, if we see again nex time.. Great Job.. Keep chasing your dreams..
Ben zo trots als een aap met drie lullen op mijn Camera-Dochtertje Anne. ook leuk om die jurk weer eens terug te zien. LOL
Jammer alleen dat in de aftiteling tot drie keer toe de naam Zohlandt verkeerd staat gespeld. Is een kleine moeite om even te controleren hoe iemands naam geschreven dient te worden.
@yoshimannetje t.a.v. je tempo-tip: Bullshit!!! Spanning heeft niets met tempo te maken.
Kuwait's right! :( امر مؤسف الخداع يكسر القلب هل هناك من يشعر بذلك ؟؟؟ ارجوا من كل شاب ان يتفهم معني الحب كما لك الحق في الحب لها الحق كذلك انكسار القلب اشد من الضرب سيبقي مع الزمن وبجوار الالم والحزن
great, great ! congratulations ! some attention to some details is what you miss. For example the lady with her dog in the background destroys the scene in the beginning or the musical selection at the end that doesn't fit with the rest of the film. But obviously you have great talent !
This is to add on to my previous message. You might want to include the songs you use so that way people will not throw this off the internet (because you have Metric and they could for any reason take it down it you don't acknowledge the music). Just to let you know.
Also, your transitions were pretty good and the makesup as well. Overall, nice job and for a first time great!
@annzie1991 "panning" is a term used when you move a camera from one side to another from the left to the right, or right to left. Sometimes it is just for 180 degrees, sometimes less or more. But that is the general meaning of the word.
A few things and this is from a film perspective, and I know you are amateurs...
Some panning was a bit too much, could have used a bit less or not as fast.
It was nice a dramatic, which is good but for the bride her face was kind of one note, and didn't really change except for the last part of the movie. I know it was devastation and revenge, but there could have been a little more emotion or ways to show it.
Hey Sarah. I'm a Film student too. There's alot to analyze abt this video. There r couple of mistakes, more like carelessness. a lot can be improve on the sound as well. I will not comment much on the footage wise since u guyz were only using HandyCam without tripod n lightings .We can discus more on BlofTv, if we see again nex time.. Great Job.. Keep chasing your dreams..
injune5 11 months ago
Ben zo trots als een aap met drie lullen op mijn Camera-Dochtertje Anne. ook leuk om die jurk weer eens terug te zien. LOL
Jammer alleen dat in de aftiteling tot drie keer toe de naam Zohlandt verkeerd staat gespeld. Is een kleine moeite om even te controleren hoe iemands naam geschreven dient te worden.
@yoshimannetje t.a.v. je tempo-tip: Bullshit!!! Spanning heeft niets met tempo te maken.
zohlandt 11 months ago
I read on filmforum that ya wanted to go to filmschool,
so I thought that a littlebit advice from a film student wouldn't hurt :)
-keep tempo: a mistake made by many, a video must be fast so it doesn't gets bored
-montage on the music: cut the shots on the music, wich means, when there's a beat, or a ping, or a sudden noise
-sound fx: most important thing for a vid is that is sounds right
-do not give up: follow ur passion
-subscribe to my chanel (optional :p)
good luck!
yoshimannetje 1 year ago
very good job! why didn't you tell me you finished this one :P
I really need to say , that wedding dress looks so lovely on you ^^
midoridoll 1 year ago
this is amazingggggg
ohheyjill 1 year ago
@ohheyjill thank you very much! :D
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
i actually liked this a lot
animeXdanceXreader 1 year ago
@animeXdanceXreader Yay, cool :)
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
Kuwait's right! :( امر مؤسف الخداع يكسر القلب هل هناك من يشعر بذلك ؟؟؟ ارجوا من كل شاب ان يتفهم معني الحب كما لك الحق في الحب لها الحق كذلك انكسار القلب اشد من الضرب سيبقي مع الزمن وبجوار الالم والحزن
SuperLion911 1 year ago
Wow so impressive! ;) Well done!
fedyukstanislav 1 year ago
@fedyukstanislav :D Thanks
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
Thanks for sharing :) good job
PoemVidz 1 year ago
Hey I liked your video very much!!
maximilianoamaral 1 year ago
@maximilianoamaral Well, I liked your comment very much!! ;D
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
nice video :). good job
Production2x 1 year ago
Ok toch maar gelijk ff gekeken :P Hij is vet!
EelcoVlogging 1 year ago
nice !!!
flori25flo 1 year ago
wow! very nice!
swallowsrh 1 year ago
@swallowsrh thank you my friend :)
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
scared the shit outta me!!!! great artistic impression!!!
bigtarrose 1 year ago
@bigtarrose haha, thank you very much! :D
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
Hahaha geniaal! Wat ben je eng Sarah. Nou durf ik neit meer naar school xD
Echt knap gemaakt.
spenzur 1 year ago
@spenzur MWRAHMWRAH
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
great, great ! congratulations ! some attention to some details is what you miss. For example the lady with her dog in the background destroys the scene in the beginning or the musical selection at the end that doesn't fit with the rest of the film. But obviously you have great talent !
TotalFreeDomGr 1 year ago
@TotalFreeDomGr My teacher said the same things haha. Thank you very much! :)
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
Lol #Person in the background with a dog.
Really great video[:
domoandfamilyguylove 1 year ago
@domoandfamilyguylove Lol, yeah that was not supposed to happen haha. But I couldn't change it. Thank you! :)
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
You are going to the top!! :)
DjayJohn 1 year ago
@DjayJohn haha, I don't know about that, but thank you! :D
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
max :D
P.S how can you give a comment on this video, Jumpstyle Ft. C-Walk, I'll be grateful for comment: /watch?v=VjIkKJ-tGiw
1Break1 1 year ago
a tie omg so gay
0Trumpet0 1 year ago
The songs are in the descriptionbox. All music copyrights belong to their respective owners, obviously. Thanks for watching.
SarahahaProduction 1 year ago
This is to add on to my previous message. You might want to include the songs you use so that way people will not throw this off the internet (because you have Metric and they could for any reason take it down it you don't acknowledge the music). Just to let you know.
Also, your transitions were pretty good and the makesup as well. Overall, nice job and for a first time great!
kenobigirliz 1 year ago
@kenobigirliz I told her the same about the music:) What do you mean with 'panning' by the way?
annzie1991 1 year ago
@annzie1991 "panning" is a term used when you move a camera from one side to another from the left to the right, or right to left. Sometimes it is just for 180 degrees, sometimes less or more. But that is the general meaning of the word.
kenobigirliz 1 year ago
Hey this is Kenobigirlliz from DA, nice video...
A few things and this is from a film perspective, and I know you are amateurs...
Some panning was a bit too much, could have used a bit less or not as fast.
It was nice a dramatic, which is good but for the bride her face was kind of one note, and didn't really change except for the last part of the movie. I know it was devastation and revenge, but there could have been a little more emotion or ways to show it.
kenobigirliz 1 year ago
This is sooo cool really!:D Beautifully dramatic:D
annzie1991 1 year ago
@annzie1991 thaaank you <3
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago
watch out for - here comes the bride - all dressed in white ( itsa nice day for white wedding day)
72ve17 1 year ago
@72ve17 Yes, it was, haha.
SarahahaProduction 11 months ago