One constructive comment . . . the first two rubatos should have the top note as d flat, not e flat! Sorry - but you asked for constructive criticism!
Its great to see people playing this. You asked for comments so here goes. I don't play this piece, or have the score, but I have heard it quite a few times. I think you should slightly up the tempo, particularly in the phrase immediately following the initial outburst (at c5" on your video) - have a look at how Florian Steininger does it on another YT video. I think that a sense of forward momentum is important in this piece (which should last c3', I think). However, good work so far!
haha i played this for my vce too XD
YinziTra 9 months ago in playlist VCE Music Solo Performance Program
One constructive comment . . . the first two rubatos should have the top note as d flat, not e flat! Sorry - but you asked for constructive criticism!
willows79 2 years ago
Its great to see people playing this. You asked for comments so here goes. I don't play this piece, or have the score, but I have heard it quite a few times. I think you should slightly up the tempo, particularly in the phrase immediately following the initial outburst (at c5" on your video) - have a look at how Florian Steininger does it on another YT video. I think that a sense of forward momentum is important in this piece (which should last c3', I think). However, good work so far!
PSearPianist 2 years ago