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From: AvidusVinco
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  • fucking love it bra bra whre you from

  • this is fantastic

  • yo man this is really good, but i have a suggestion for you, sometimes so many multi syllable rymes offers such awkward word choice, like some of this dont make n e senese but it rymes well, if ur trying to get a serious meaning across, choose your words wisely and not just cause they ryme

  • I like this... nice man very nice Subbed and liked. Good work put out more.

  • Im downloadin this shit...great work homie

  • Nice man!

  • Your lyrics are so dope and your voice has a hint of Eminem in there. Nice job

  • pretty damn solid man, just noticed your message to me...I can dig this...

  • thanks for PMing me this is a great song :]

  • I like this A LOT! Great job man. I look forward to hearing more...

  • Shit bro! you are a beast, enough said!

  • damm the songs great it all flows togethr thanks for sharing ;)

  • You sent me a friend request bro as soon as I listened to the body beat song, Now this shit is good bro.

  • nice flow i digg this

  • God damn. ILL FLOW and LYRICS ! Good shit man i love it

  • beasttttttt man subedd!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • I JUST CAME

  • You're going the right way, it's all about the content quality. And you certainly are good at writing lyrics, the multi sylls are good too, always a bonus.

  • the lyrics is sick fam..but the beat is not poppin to me...other then that im diggin it

  • This is some dope work here!!!!! U were right I would like this:) peaze

  • hey! good stuff!

  • You should put those lyrics on a different beat that beat is garbage sorry man.

  • very nice I like it alot

    M.V.B Films

    please keep in touch

  • cool thanks for sending it to me i like it

  • awesome stuf mate.

  • lyrics are good beat is too slow though not feeling that beat.

  • So dope.

  • holy shit a new non pussyfied eminem u got the rhymes and thatr beat is sick gud job keep it up

  • nice work , good job

  • youre like a tonedeff with a more powerful delivery. i love the meaning of this song, we all have that feeling of being trapped, even the free man. there has to be something to that, right? "dont even try to comprehend the source of aids' existence" so true. WHO gave Africa aids! its not a question its a statement (World Health Organization) -Prince Ea

  • you are fucking dope when it comes to writing

    but you should work on you sound: editing/mixing/

    mastering/ into higher quality nahmean? hit me up.

  • Yo, Feelin the lyrics Bro, Nice work!

    Peace!

  • good shit mang, thanks for the invite and message. keep doin your thing homie!

  • dude good shit, thanks for the message

  • Awesome, thanks for sending me this video, great music! :)

  • oh shit!! im glad i clicked on this video. i thought he was some annoying bitch, no offense, but he is good. SUBSCRIBED

  • wow... great rapping!!! you do actually sound like WAX. but a bit better IMO. there's something different... keep it up.

  • You definitely have skills. My suggestion would be this: Don't focus so much on making words rhyme, focus on that...and constructing your rhymes in a way that they sound like natural language. It makes it more genuine and ill. You're nice though, no doubt. Peace.

  • That was actully pretty good. I thought it was going to be stupid.

  • First I tought it was just some stupid spam. But this is actually really good, great flow, you could be a bit more "agressive" and go with a less linear melody, up the beat and the voice sound a bit. Great text too.

  • really nice , man ! good work.

  • songs good man

    keep it up

  • tuff man

  • dope cover graphics, and nice flow

  • Hey man thanks for the add and invite...as for sounding like Wax you are too complete sepparate beings...and emcees...I see no comparison and that's a compliment. Wax has the mainstream essence and you have more of a underground style....nice work, like the fact you actual focus on what you are saying rather than just saying it....check my page out too man I'm trying to update with new ish I'm far from the greatest just doing me!

    Respect

    Token of Thin Ice

  • good delivery

  • cool song, like it.

  • nice, i like how you got variety showing in your beats, lyrics are dope as always

  • Another dope, drop bro! This one though has a very powerful message; a line that really stuck out with me;

    ''This page I've written might seem like my own inflated wisdom

    These metaphors are so confusing they debate with millions..''

    Brilliant stuff man. Lyrically/content wise this was one of my favourites from you; you had two streched lines in this one though which took away from the flow a bit; but I think that's first. Keep speaking truth, bro. Ears are wide open in these times.

  • Nice! love the content, love the beat. and good use of multis.

  • dude will your album be up on datpiff . com?

  • man you easily just became one of my favorite rappers right now. this shit is dope and so true. i like your multi syllables. automatic download.

  • Nice track, keep rapping

  • how could it be we've grown adults with the traits of infants/

    instead of trying to make a difference we embrace the system

    Dope shit man, nice flow and lyrical content.

    Some constructive crit... I would work on your drums. I know how it is making beats, but try to find some good drums that really bang, lackluster drums are holding the beat back. And perhaps change up the flow every now and then. But if that's your style then its cool, it works.

    Keep it up brotha

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