Honestly I think your lyrics are pretty good, good flow and rhymes, and I like the real subject matter. Keep it up bro, I'd like to see more coming from you. PEACE
Haha you remind me of JLive I mean just like him it was a hot verse but you gotta make it flow ya know find your sound center your emotions towards what your talking about and get your delivery on point cause your lyrics is dope but like someone said before your lyrics will only get you so far ya digg
pretty nice kid liked "the memories froze in time like a kodak image" line i'd say though if u could get your own sound you'd be nicer cuz good lyrics will only get u so far. Good job tho kid
oh thanxx man, i really appreciate the advice n iknoe exactly what ur talkin about, when u said choppy ima try to work on that, but thanxx again... REALYZE.
i remember spittin to that beat mad long ago..thats was dope homie...thats my criticism :)
j4mes570 7 months ago
Its was pretty good i just dont like your voice other wise good job.
Troy1478 1 year ago
holy shit. this is the best
CokenailMcFurri 1 year ago
damn that was some down as verse props man!!
drumster15 2 years ago
girls r hoe's all of dem idgaf
fatboiiyy 2 years ago
cant stop listening to dis track
givemehead101 2 years ago
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givemehead101 2 years ago
what the fuck? You just impressed me like, on a major scale, subed
T0ughstuf 3 years ago
while i shed tears now u use an umbrella. while ur heart contains the beat
mine remains accapella
omg....
doPE!
razbsgurl09 3 years ago
that was nice to hear! 5/5
NmCmal 3 years ago
sick bra
thug4life4444 3 years ago
I ben jammin ta dis fam u really lit dis up keep droppin gold
DatboYeLz 3 years ago
nice
DatboYeLz 3 years ago
"while your heart continues to beat and mine remains a cappella."
amazing line. amazing remix. great job
Chingster22 3 years ago
alot of youtube artists are terrible
theres only a few good ones out there
and you are definitely one of the good ones
i liked your content and your choice of instrumental and my god your flow was great
seriously hope you get far with your music
because you deserve it more then alot of artists who break on to the scene and then chat shit
serious respect
XpeaceX
ondank 3 years ago 4
Honestly I think your lyrics are pretty good, good flow and rhymes, and I like the real subject matter. Keep it up bro, I'd like to see more coming from you. PEACE
FiLTHyRiCHards 3 years ago
Haha you remind me of JLive I mean just like him it was a hot verse but you gotta make it flow ya know find your sound center your emotions towards what your talking about and get your delivery on point cause your lyrics is dope but like someone said before your lyrics will only get you so far ya digg
RoofR2Ent 3 years ago
pretty nice kid liked "the memories froze in time like a kodak image" line i'd say though if u could get your own sound you'd be nicer cuz good lyrics will only get u so far. Good job tho kid
btakus 3 years ago
Sick shitt man nicee lyricss just pick up da flow a bit n yull be on ur way man but sick shitt keep ur head up man ightt pcee homiee good luck to yu
HiTecMusiz 3 years ago
aiight man thanxx 4 the advice, much appreciated
REALYZE4 3 years ago
np man yu inspired me that im writtin a remmix to whered yo go so check it will be out by tm ightt pcee homiee
HiTecMusiz 3 years ago
all thats whats up im glade i can have that kind of impact on u...let me knoe when u finish so i can hear it...Good Luck
REALYZE4 3 years ago
yeahh i will for shure man
HiTecMusiz 3 years ago
Your delivery is alot better than JLiive's and the lyrics flow alot better. I really like it.
b1o0dlust 3 years ago
IM really glad u like it much love...REALYZE
REALYZE4 3 years ago
yo dude, the lines are I'll l!!!
only thing I gotta say is to try to make it flow more, u know, not so choppy......BUT 5 STARS THOSE SOME BAD ASS LYRICS!!!
TkCroniC 3 years ago
oh thanxx man, i really appreciate the advice n iknoe exactly what ur talkin about, when u said choppy ima try to work on that, but thanxx again... REALYZE.
REALYZE4 3 years ago
THAT SHIT WAS ILL...YOU STAY KILLIN ON THEM LOVE TRACKS THO KID<<<REALTALK!!
GOOD LOOKIN OUT ON THAT SHOUT OUT...AND FOR CLAIMIN ME AS YO COUSIN
(and dont think i didnt hear jedi mind tricks playin in the beginning)lol
emohkay 3 years ago
that shit was crazy im not just sayin that cuz u my boi either there was some sick lines in there ... tight yo..stay up
JLiiVE3 3 years ago