Good job, this is very good. The only thing better you could do, at least I think lol, is try to put a lot of power in the snare in the beginning. Props
jmo, bro, i think that solo could've had a lil' vibrato in after the arpeggio type thing, then you could develop it even more just an idea ... like dudulduduldulduldud wheeeew! etc.
ASOME! The vocals is good but the RUGH thing lisson really cerfully. THis SONG IS AMAZING! i got this poor kiddy band. im only 13 and shit. but dude we made like 2 songs. im working on 1 song. make a cd please lol!!! people are starting to lisson to RAP OMG!
Dont worry bout sounding like someone else, there are always subtle differences that keep it original. This is one of my all time favs by u guys. Get the vocals down in a studio and you've got a hit.
well ptw to put it at that prospective yes i could hear that the the singer did need a little vocal training but to my view i see potential and he probably wrote the song which gives it a diffrent feel
besides vocal technolgy now adays will make you sound like a god even if you cant sing keep it up dudes i would buy the album keep rocking
all through the song i was listening and rocking out man you have me as a fan
I think the only thing that has to be done is turn up the vocals and i dont mean by singing the song but to have a clearer sound to hearing the lyrics that is the only thing
I could imagine how it would sound if you got in a studio
plz let us know when your band hits a record deal
It sounds awsome but I'm still not nuts about the vocals. This song sorta reminds me of The End by Bullet For My Valentine. Have you ever heard of them? If not, you should definatly go look them up and try to see if you can play any of their songs. The End is sorta like this song except it gets very heavy in some parts. Another song you should try to play is All These Things I Hate (Revolve Around Me) here's a link to that song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jtviH-wemrw
you need anger management really bad. like when someone told you you had too much distortion on your master of puppets video you freaked out. i actually think its funny how angry you are getting and over reacting over one thing i said when you didnt have to go freak out over it. and umm i think i am right about not listening to a band that i thought sucked. i dont think i would critisize a band that i liked. does that make much sense to you? god, your really an idiot.
you're the real jack-hole cause you always think you're right but you're not if you don't like a band don't go saying it cuz it gets ppl pissed off at you and then they think you're a total ass hole if you wanna continue this bullshit fine by me but I'm ignoring whatever the fuck you say from now on fucktard.
AWESOME! ;)
PlagueOfDisaster 2 years ago
Good job, this is very good. The only thing better you could do, at least I think lol, is try to put a lot of power in the snare in the beginning. Props
Stenwal28 2 years ago
great!!what kind of p.a system
traumajr 2 years ago
singing could be louder/ more audible
guitarTy345 2 years ago
Very good compo! i love that!
awesome
thx428 2 years ago
jmo, bro, i think that solo could've had a lil' vibrato in after the arpeggio type thing, then you could develop it even more just an idea ... like dudulduduldulduldud wheeeew! etc.
Damagecraft88 4 years ago
ASOME! The vocals is good but the RUGH thing lisson really cerfully. THis SONG IS AMAZING! i got this poor kiddy band. im only 13 and shit. but dude we made like 2 songs. im working on 1 song. make a cd please lol!!! people are starting to lisson to RAP OMG!
llamo666999 5 years ago
dude !! your infuluences from breaking benjamins ? sounds a bit like so cold but fuck man !! awsome ! keep it up
Peacock181 5 years ago
nice one the solo is a little bit unrelaited to the song and make the vocals louder and canot heare the bass
but thets jjust me a critic iloved the song
kirll37 5 years ago
Wow, I love this song. Hope you get a record deal soon, I would buy the album. Good luck in the YouTube competition.
alexitfc 5 years ago
thanks, vote if you get a chance!
cottagecheez 5 years ago
Already voted for you :D
alexitfc 5 years ago
Dont worry bout sounding like someone else, there are always subtle differences that keep it original. This is one of my all time favs by u guys. Get the vocals down in a studio and you've got a hit.
obilesk 5 years ago
you are not in the band.
cottagecheez 5 years ago
lolol. nice. yeah I'll buy the demo!!
obilesk 5 years ago
sameee
guitarshred56 5 years ago
well ptw to put it at that prospective yes i could hear that the the singer did need a little vocal training but to my view i see potential and he probably wrote the song which gives it a diffrent feel
besides vocal technolgy now adays will make you sound like a god even if you cant sing keep it up dudes i would buy the album keep rocking
chucksta50 5 years ago
all through the song i was listening and rocking out man you have me as a fan
I think the only thing that has to be done is turn up the vocals and i dont mean by singing the song but to have a clearer sound to hearing the lyrics that is the only thing
I could imagine how it would sound if you got in a studio
plz let us know when your band hits a record deal
chucksta50 5 years ago
thanks man...yeah it could be a little clearer...we NEED studio time...AND MONEY!!! haha.
cottagecheez 5 years ago
You guys rock
kraponastyx 5 years ago
cool song, but i could never jam in a place that small
shroomheadsb 5 years ago
haha...we're used to it!
cottagecheez 5 years ago
It sounds awsome but I'm still not nuts about the vocals. This song sorta reminds me of The End by Bullet For My Valentine. Have you ever heard of them? If not, you should definatly go look them up and try to see if you can play any of their songs. The End is sorta like this song except it gets very heavy in some parts. Another song you should try to play is All These Things I Hate (Revolve Around Me) here's a link to that song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jtviH-wemrw
EMCS2Videos 5 years ago
I like the vocals in this...we don't like screaming.
cottagecheez 5 years ago
dude, bullet for my valentine sucks. i think the vocals in this are pretty good.
TheTrooper13 5 years ago
Bullet For My Valentine is awsome. How can you say they suck? You suck!
EMCS2Videos 5 years ago
no really they suck.
TheTrooper13 5 years ago
Youm really suck you know that don't go criticizing other people's bands if you don't even listen to them you dumbass
EMCS2Videos 5 years ago
dude calm down ok. maybe i dont listen to them because i dont like them? i dont know? why else would i think they suck.
TheTrooper13 5 years ago
and i have heard there songs before and i didnt really think they were very good.
TheTrooper13 5 years ago
and why would i listen to a band that i thought sucked?
TheTrooper13 5 years ago
You know what just fuck off alright.
EMCS2Videos 5 years ago
you need anger management really bad. like when someone told you you had too much distortion on your master of puppets video you freaked out. i actually think its funny how angry you are getting and over reacting over one thing i said when you didnt have to go freak out over it. and umm i think i am right about not listening to a band that i thought sucked. i dont think i would critisize a band that i liked. does that make much sense to you? god, your really an idiot.
TheTrooper13 5 years ago
you're the real jack-hole cause you always think you're right but you're not if you don't like a band don't go saying it cuz it gets ppl pissed off at you and then they think you're a total ass hole if you wanna continue this bullshit fine by me but I'm ignoring whatever the fuck you say from now on fucktard.
EMCS2Videos 5 years ago
ok ill stop even thought you didnt have to turn it into a war.
TheTrooper13 5 years ago
nice one, wel done
maddoxhell 5 years ago