Wow, that was a great little horror short! Creepy character, if this were a theater film he'd easily become a horror icon. Really enjoyed your fx and editing on this as well.
Could you all maybe look at my videos on my channel, and maybe subscribe. I'm an up and coming film maker, and i just want to get my work out there while i'm young, so i can make a name for myself. I'd really like it, and i would do the same to you if you did.
It's amazing how you, during your studies (you were then) can make a movie which looks much more professional than every polish movie made by professionals...
perfect horror ive seen for a while. most short horror films are shit but this one pulled it off. there could of been brushing up on the editing but other than that, amazing piece of horror. I LOVE THE BLOODY EATING SCENE.
I liked it very much. Having someone like a demon or an undead is cool. But if he wears a hat, that's a way cooler! Hats make fear) Another thing i liked about it is that this film creates atmosphere that's creepy and scary. That's a right way. Wrong is when all ''horrorness'' is based on unexpectedness, namely - jumps out of the corner, sudden opening of eyes, sharp and loud sound FX and shit like that. It's become sooo trite nowadays.
I think the prob with most super short films is trying to present intense emotion/suspense in too short of a time. After watching it twice I assumed it was Ben she was talking to on the phone though I don't think that is mentioned, and yet Ben shows up and I'm going, "Who's this dude and why is he here?" Also, it's hard to imagine a girl who knows nothing of the occult would know how to pronounce grimoire. The film looks great--just make the stories solid before going to film.
Hi, I like the cinematography and the general lighting/grading. Good pro job looks like a real film. My only comment would be the woman didnt seem scared enought to see such a horrific sight. I would of been going mad and making a lot of noise if I saw the PIN and had time like she did!.
I make films too but I wish I had a team of 35 people like you have credited on this one.
brilliaant film !! abss loveed it ! .. but whoo thee hell would leave a baby in a room on a big bed with the door closeed?! & why didntt shee tryy to escaape thaat weird mann????!!!!!!! yeaah i knoee... its just a film... i meaan *onee of the best horrors on utubee !! ............. i hopee thee baby didnt diee:( :(
brilliaant film !! abss loveed it ! .. but whoo thee hell would leave a baby in a room on a big bed with the door closeed?! & why didntt shee tryy to escaape thaat weird mann????!!!!!!! yeaah i knoee... its just a film... i meaan *onee of the best horrors on utubee !!
not bad. although you should have used a more dramatic music instead of keeping the same one during the killing scenes. Also, the woman should have screamed!
I think the whole fact that she doesn't scream is more intense than some lame ass, hysterical scream you hear in horror movies, I think that in real life if something like that would happen, only a true hysterical prom queen would scream, a normal human being would go into shock and would be out of breath and couldn't scream even if he/ she wanted to...
@dyld921 lol if somebody did like he did to you(im not sure what he did), you would just be totally silent?... And also if you look at the shot when she first sees him.. she just turns around an runs.. that shot seem little empty. if she like screamed or something it wouldn't be so empty... i don't mean she should scream like in horror movies... that is too much... but no scream or what so ever at all is to little^^.. Little screams ad little excitement.
Absolutely brilliant. could you check out my short horror film Backseat Murder, my first try at a horror movie. no where in the ball park of this film but i did get an A+ for it
It was missing something. @ 1:10, when she entered the house, we should have seen a wide shot of the inside of the house, maybe with a huge staircase, showing the erieness along with some forboding creepy bassy tones. Otherwise,very good & pro looking.
Very good quality; nice angles and special effects. I quite liked the view pf the suit case, for some reason... One thing I have to wonder, though; would she really turn around when he's that close? I'd have thought she'd keep trying too open the door 'til the last available moment.
@lynnwinchester even thought its probably yes... i don't want a baby to get killed,so i'm gonna say the "PIN" takes the baby to a nice nursery where (s)he becomes all happy
This shits on any horror movies in the theaters right now
MrFloopy99 2 weeks ago
Oh my god! This is seriously the most realistic horrorvideoproject I ever have seen! Oh man, ED: F*CKING NICE WORK!
G4pBrick 1 month ago
This should be made into a feature film! I would love to see this in theaters! and pay for the blu ray copy :)
hurleyman01 1 month ago
Wow, that was a great little horror short! Creepy character, if this were a theater film he'd easily become a horror icon. Really enjoyed your fx and editing on this as well.
MrBracey100 1 month ago
good job :) i like it ... bravo
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twilightproductiontv 2 months ago
Yea okay she wud b driving with the baby jus laying down in the bak seat
Music2012Luver 2 months ago
Nice work, I LOVE it!
NextDeadScreamQueen 2 months ago
Ed could that be a reference to Ed Gein??? i wunder?
1headphoneguy 3 months ago
holy shit his username is ed.
MLGRoosters 3 months ago
VERY GOOD!
Jochuum 3 months ago
tig ol bitties
alotgreaterthanthree 3 months ago
Edddddd!!!!
shadyfan381 3 months ago
....best Username EVER
iWaffleFTW 3 months ago
nicely done.
blah21218 3 months ago
thubs up if household hacker send you here
retardedfishfrogs1 3 months ago 33
What did I just watch?
pripetko 3 months ago
i have no idea how to react...
missypriss100 3 months ago
It's amazing how you, during your studies (you were then) can make a movie which looks much more professional than every polish movie made by professionals...
Macekrocks 3 months ago
how can your nickname be ed, wow
ishikawamaster123 3 months ago
Liked!
SCOTTaMINUTE 3 months ago 6
that actress=no
fobrox97 3 months ago
awesome
JaredGivens1 3 months ago
kinda sick
GregoryScottChannel 3 months ago
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Good! I like it!! Keep doing.
I make short films too, Take a look please and comment. watch?v=d9gGAFVNxLM
huskyds 3 months ago
What kind of camera did you use
JmpRpe97 3 months ago
@Ed @SuperEd86 How did you handle the bugs? Even the jacket etc, but especially coming out of his mouth?!
Also, what's the difference to you between Visual FX and Special FX?
Thanks.
DredPyrateLoL 3 months ago in playlist Videos from Ed
it's cool. pretty weird though,
Dajumper000 4 months ago
fucking awesome man!!
spook12321 4 months ago
i still love watching this. very creepy and unknown. :)
shapman87 4 months ago
That was freakin' awesome!
crazychiktoni 4 months ago
He looks like Harrison Ford!!
funnyfilmsman 5 months ago
you went from making masterpieces like this to "I MAKE POOPIES"?
inWald 5 months ago
Hey Ed! that was AMAZING!
franniediowna 5 months ago
fuckin creeper..
gibsonlespaul111 5 months ago
nom nom nom nom babies..
emmatheenglishmuffin 5 months ago
That Egg Proves Nothing!!
therumsha1 6 months ago
pretty creepy but i dont undertand
JmpRpe97 6 months ago
is there any sense you stupid dumb motherfuck.. no proper story.. its like piece of shit I've wasted 7 mins of my life ..
legendarychandu 7 months ago
ok I really liked this film only my opinion but i rate it -
8/10 - acting
7/10 - scary
9/10 - story
8/10 - overall
but hey I don't believe in critics so keep up the good work
asimobry 7 months ago
Your not supposed to leave a baby unattended on a bed without some sort of rail on it...
666Skaterkyle666 7 months ago
I love a happy ending
Jerrk64 7 months ago
you done wellll !!!!!!!!!!!! the monster the the gore was excellent
shitchops 8 months ago
What program do you use to edit?
joster571 8 months ago
There is a lot of things I would do differen here
Diffrentjamsith 8 months ago
45 people read from an old book.
RosekillProductions 8 months ago
perfect horror ive seen for a while. most short horror films are shit but this one pulled it off. there could of been brushing up on the editing but other than that, amazing piece of horror. I LOVE THE BLOODY EATING SCENE.
morell1234 8 months ago
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really good editing
oochakawaya 8 months ago
MAKE A FULL MOVIE!
zamdude7 8 months ago
ho.ly.shit.best.short.horror.film.i've.ever.seen. :D I love the audio. Super gruesome and disturbing.
LuvVCatii 9 months ago
Yep, Bad Ass!!!!
Apocalypseoncydonia 9 months ago
LOVE IT you guys just needed to work on audio a bit! but the rest is GREAT
Snipefox 9 months ago
great job. I would love to be able to learn to do this. I got all the ideas and stuff I need to get good at this editing stuff and fiming techniques.
TheShootTruth10 9 months ago
That Was Badass
LoriDonuts209 9 months ago
that was pretty badass
youmovie08 9 months ago
the baby was chuck norris and kicked his ass!!!!!!happy ending...
ZGReelProductions 9 months ago
love it :)
ridlazz921 10 months ago
too much like freddy, expetially with the tendents. and the hat. just like dream worries.
flirter53 10 months ago
Great job, Ilove it!!!
TheOctoberspirit 10 months ago
Totally brilliant! Top stuff in every way. PIN is one scary mother.
stevebobionic 10 months ago
you should make a part 2 to this!!! This is the best that i have ever seen yet Ed.
NieNieXCreations 10 months ago
I liked it very much. Having someone like a demon or an undead is cool. But if he wears a hat, that's a way cooler! Hats make fear) Another thing i liked about it is that this film creates atmosphere that's creepy and scary. That's a right way. Wrong is when all ''horrorness'' is based on unexpectedness, namely - jumps out of the corner, sudden opening of eyes, sharp and loud sound FX and shit like that. It's become sooo trite nowadays.
HevyDev 10 months ago
DOPE..
TonyJoaquin3 10 months ago
Been awhile since i've been truly scared by a film, very nice..why is it titled PIN?
finalfuryan 11 months ago
@finalfuryan PINocchio probably
Ulrock7777 9 months ago
what the hell man. there's rules in horror. you don't kill baby's or animals. that's not nice. unless you're micheal myers who killed how many dogs?
RegisPhilbinFan 11 months ago
I think the prob with most super short films is trying to present intense emotion/suspense in too short of a time. After watching it twice I assumed it was Ben she was talking to on the phone though I don't think that is mentioned, and yet Ben shows up and I'm going, "Who's this dude and why is he here?" Also, it's hard to imagine a girl who knows nothing of the occult would know how to pronounce grimoire. The film looks great--just make the stories solid before going to film.
AlanSessler 11 months ago
Hi, I like the cinematography and the general lighting/grading. Good pro job looks like a real film. My only comment would be the woman didnt seem scared enought to see such a horrific sight. I would of been going mad and making a lot of noise if I saw the PIN and had time like she did!.
I make films too but I wish I had a team of 35 people like you have credited on this one.
spitfire1936 11 months ago
Good as fuck!
KeeganMurnahanCO 11 months ago
brilliaant film !! abss loveed it ! .. but whoo thee hell would leave a baby in a room on a big bed with the door closeed?! & why didntt shee tryy to escaape thaat weird mann????!!!!!!! yeaah i knoee... its just a film... i meaan *onee of the best horrors on utubee !! ............. i hopee thee baby didnt diee:( :(
xPrincessJazx 1 year ago
brilliaant film !! abss loveed it ! .. but whoo thee hell would leave a baby in a room on a big bed with the door closeed?! & why didntt shee tryy to escaape thaat weird mann????!!!!!!! yeaah i knoee... its just a film... i meaan *onee of the best horrors on utubee !!
xPrincessJazx 1 year ago
Awsom great job
joshpeace23 1 year ago
When I saw this film, it really inspired me to make my own. It only has 375 views right now, but we found a really creepy laboratory to make it in.
If you all could check it out and leave a comment, well, I don't think you'll be disappointed.
Abandonment - /watch?v=LeT_amI1sF8
Magicrazy1 1 year ago
Great stuff, well directed, great lighting, fx and sound work.
psynno1 1 year ago
that was a really nice idea for a killer, like a puppetmaster or something.
3manhorrorstudio 1 year ago
I know what its like to do student films and to wear lots of hats. Well done!
3BrainProductions 1 year ago
this sucks. no plot means it sucks
inoyu49 1 year ago
@inoyu49 Short films aren't exactly known for deep and complicated plots
Ulrock7777 9 months ago
I don't like bad peoples , Zeyre not good Zey making evils
Its is bad to make lies, i am only friends wiz good guyz,
It is not good to be bad, if you are bad
you can make somebody sad
It is not very nice to kill, also
You should pay credit card bill!
Rhumak 1 year ago
kinda creepy but good =)
Barbara4u2 1 year ago
very nice film
sandyspidermanjack 1 year ago
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SplinterzProductionz 1 year ago
good work
bleumproductions 1 year ago
She was supposed to be there for a week. didn't last a day. How pathetic.
Very well made film.
BluncheonMeat 1 year ago
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TheSantanico 1 year ago
howd u make thecredits
chrismetal29 1 year ago
wow great job
crimsonkids 1 year ago
wow that was actually really impressive, great job!
mrextremedude 1 year ago
Creepy, he looked like an evil mad-hatter.
MSHS420 1 year ago 2
did he eat her tits?!!?
muekid 1 year ago
wat program did u use for editing
sniper275 1 year ago
Its Harry Potter! His mothers love will save him!
DPKFineArts 1 year ago
Hhaha, you went/go to the art institute? This was used as material for us in our editing class and I made a trailer out of it. Haha
Zbandit511 1 year ago
Whaddya think woulda happened if that thing was in Chuck Norris' house?
JonOptimusPrime 1 year ago
@JonOptimusPrime someone's ass wouldve been beggin for mercy or it wouldve been beat!!!
roxygrl09 1 year ago
wow
msdominae 1 year ago
That was AWESOME!
thatgirl208 1 year ago
Well aslong as the dog didn't die...
oblivionfan345Tony 1 year ago
give a smile folks
:)
mustajabz 1 year ago
give a smile
mustajabz 1 year ago
he killed the baby...thats not cool man
xbox360prof 1 year ago
@xbox360prof you don't know that he could have taken it as his own to be an evil puppet master with him
boogereater987 6 months ago
not bad. although you should have used a more dramatic music instead of keeping the same one during the killing scenes. Also, the woman should have screamed!
Xaviersama016 1 year ago
oh, damn, that was some ugly killing
NeroLior 1 year ago
really cool man
reddincthemovie 1 year ago
Damit! I paused and it went to the channel in the middle of it !
LoLucas02 1 year ago 8
@LoLucas02 happened to me 3 times :/
Anthon5y 8 months ago
Awesome creepy killer!
yournotrandom 1 year ago
Eh, was kinda week.
dan51978 1 year ago
garry potter had it coming.
arnab1021976 1 year ago 2
this is amazing and creepy and very well done
Blakeonacoaster 1 year ago
that was creepy
flamekaster4 1 year ago
I think the whole fact that she doesn't scream is more intense than some lame ass, hysterical scream you hear in horror movies, I think that in real life if something like that would happen, only a true hysterical prom queen would scream, a normal human being would go into shock and would be out of breath and couldn't scream even if he/ she wanted to...
AJ2987 1 year ago 2
She's fucking dumb. Everybody knows you shouldn't read out loud text from an old book.
dyld921 1 year ago 29
@dyld921 true, she obviously hasn't seen evil dead
mathmason 1 year ago
@dyld921 "Xander, don't speak Latin in front of the books."
NeverwaY 8 months ago
its annoying that she don't screams^^
HardCoreKing360 1 year ago
@HardCoreKing360 You don't always have to scream. She's too scared and out of breath. Personally, I'd never scream either.
dyld921 1 year ago
@dyld921 lol if somebody did like he did to you(im not sure what he did), you would just be totally silent?... And also if you look at the shot when she first sees him.. she just turns around an runs.. that shot seem little empty. if she like screamed or something it wouldn't be so empty... i don't mean she should scream like in horror movies... that is too much... but no scream or what so ever at all is to little^^.. Little screams ad little excitement.
HardCoreKing360 1 year ago
@HardCoreKing360 Yes I'd be silent. Maybe a little gasp here and there, but a scream isn't necessary. I'm not much of a screamer.
dyld921 1 year ago
pretty good work, man! liked the idea, the angles snd effects.. keep it up
SomecallmerobTV 1 year ago
the professor knew that was gonna happen. what an asshole.
YellowTurtle13 1 year ago
Very proffesional
MrExplosionBoom 1 year ago
this made me lol
opi694lyf 1 year ago
great use of imagination definitely !! what grade did u get for this ed?? lol
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EyesBeyondMovie 1 year ago
that bit where Ben screamed scared the fuckin crap out of me!
tanyadancer96 1 year ago
this is..woah..this is..okay..shitted in my pants ._.
Stormbubi 1 year ago
A nightmare on elm street meets Hellraiser
Bandit0511 1 year ago
@Bandit0511
A Nightmare on Elm Street meets Hellraiser
and then they have sexual intercourse
and after talking about an abortion and Hellraiser smoking weed while having the baby
It comes out
I;
KSNewbz 1 year ago
awesome and creepy.....really good production & post
DuBoseEric 1 year ago
Absolutely brilliant. could you check out my short horror film Backseat Murder, my first try at a horror movie. no where in the ball park of this film but i did get an A+ for it
TimAfterDinner 1 year ago
i poopied my pants
fruitypuffjr 1 year ago
this video made me think of NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET but other then that... it was AWESOME!
JackSparrow424 1 year ago 2
that was some scary ass shit
thedog404391 1 year ago 2
she doesnt even scream lol
Trollingismyhobby 1 year ago 2
It was missing something. @ 1:10, when she entered the house, we should have seen a wide shot of the inside of the house, maybe with a huge staircase, showing the erieness along with some forboding creepy bassy tones. Otherwise,very good & pro looking.
dumfree254 1 year ago
Very good quality; nice angles and special effects. I quite liked the view pf the suit case, for some reason... One thing I have to wonder, though; would she really turn around when he's that close? I'd have thought she'd keep trying too open the door 'til the last available moment.
glumpot 1 year ago
I wouldn't want to be the actor playing the antagonist... Bugs crawling basically in my mouth... no thanks.
MestizoFilipino 1 year ago
Me likey =)
MLH 1 year ago
if this was a full length film i would totally rent it
Itfun2bEviL 1 year ago
that was sick. PIN 2!!!
Ry2DN 1 year ago
Very nicely done i wish i could make a video like this
nice2meetuja 1 year ago
but really good!
Tcdirtman3 1 year ago
OMG that was sick!
Tcdirtman3 1 year ago
Ed, you're a man after my own heart. Will you marry me?
GrumpyPandaFilms 1 year ago
Oh my god, that was so nasty! Who gives a fuck? No one wants to hear you complain, you stupid dicks.
Cedlor2 1 year ago
you are good man :D
good job
DFLoureiro 1 year ago
bloody good
ocossa 1 year ago
Nice one, Ed.
bullyfan4 1 year ago
ugh nasty but awsome
freeblefrable 1 year ago
wow, man , its great =)))))
402room 1 year ago
That was really well done. Don't think the chick was scared enough, but over all sweet job. Better than B movies for sure.
stickytoonz 1 year ago
this is wiked man
lou0kang 1 year ago
ughh, nice fx but it was gross
ClickHereForGuitar 1 year ago
awsome!!!!
shimonthepro 1 year ago
Oh My God I was totally shitting myself!
richiecola2k 1 year ago
did it kill the baby:((
lynnwinchester 1 year ago 17
@lynnwinchester No, I'm pretty sure the idea was that the baby somehow summoned the demon guy to kill the other two.
xPoints2prizes91 1 year ago
@lynnwinchester even thought its probably yes... i don't want a baby to get killed,so i'm gonna say the "PIN" takes the baby to a nice nursery where (s)he becomes all happy
TechnologyMAN1245 1 year ago
omg looks professional!
PatData 1 year ago
this fuckin sucks..
fulismilk 1 year ago
LMAO that was sooooo funny I mean Queef hahahahaha .... ur fooney
HitachiinsMentalSpaz 1 year ago
dang everyone from china sure likes this
SuperGuy7965 1 year ago
WOW!!!
walk888 1 year ago
WOW that was very good. Freakedd me out when it showed bens neck :o good word
KevinC1012 1 year ago
Did he die?
DJHyperRhythm 1 year ago
check out my film
gravymeatballs 2 years ago
This is sooooooooooooooooooooo go very good work!
jboyer99 2 years ago
That's very good work! :D a lot of blood and gore.
You should definately make a longer one!
I'm going to be a video producer as well :p
Punkie282828 2 years ago
need more screamos :).
damienfah3y 2 years ago
Yikes! Really ruthless, scary killer! Excellent! 5/5
brunospaws 2 years ago
I really enjoy your work, I think you're going to do very well in the future of films.
n00bb3k3r 2 years ago 3
EPIC
cellerfullofpopcicle 2 years ago
hmm
mister edward vilderman
(y) nice.
OddSocks1995 2 years ago
wo i cant say any thing
this is amazing
misteryoka69 2 years ago
Wanna swap subscriptions?? I need to learn from you, great video!
NextDeadScreamQueen 2 years ago
the make up and fx were better than avatar!!!!! so was the Film!!!
bonnerhigh2013 2 years ago
yo really good video and you did the editing and special FX... impressive
buba516 2 years ago