well, japanese haiku are 5-7-5 onji sound units, which approximate about 12 english syllables, but this guy thinks english haiku are supposed to be 17 syllables. cute, but you're no refrigerator
I like it...i think there is a significance to that number 8 in the middle, a hidden aesthetic beauty to it. It's a continues figure and in a way the brain-thoughts are too. So in turn, this is a poem trying to capture nothing. haha
5 stars my friend...for something that meant showed us nothing. There's beauty to it.
Very nice.
Damienf77 1 year ago
Oh wow! Expertly crafted, sir.
neondoto 1 year ago
well, japanese haiku are 5-7-5 onji sound units, which approximate about 12 english syllables, but this guy thinks english haiku are supposed to be 17 syllables. cute, but you're no refrigerator
rytisg 2 years ago
I like it...i think there is a significance to that number 8 in the middle, a hidden aesthetic beauty to it. It's a continues figure and in a way the brain-thoughts are too. So in turn, this is a poem trying to capture nothing. haha
5 stars my friend...for something that meant showed us nothing. There's beauty to it.
OsvaldoPaese 3 years ago
i don't get it...please help me to see the light-
haroldcampbell 4 years ago
I liked it as mistryel and i still like it....
PuzzledDragonVideo 4 years ago
what?
lalaluuuh 4 years ago
umm Can you explain what it mean? I know that haikus are 5 7 5 right?
Troublesum1226 4 years ago
That is great! It works on so many levels (no pun intended).
kenrg 4 years ago
thanks...you've really lifted my spirts (pun intended).
blairtoo 4 years ago
I think there was a pun intended. You don't have to hide it.
whitefloweret 2 years ago
You are so brilliant,
love this.
:o) x
cheeki72 4 years ago
Clever rascal! that's really funny.
mistryel 4 years ago
this sort of thing is by no means for everybody. i'm glad you liked it.
blairtoo 4 years ago
the plane is headed
away.
blairtoo 4 years ago
Clever. Honest.
Where's that plane headed?
meredumais 4 years ago