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  • Love the Japanese-sounding strings and smooth flute Dansonn. It totally makes this song for me. ^.^

  • Craziness in my mind, will it stop in time

    not enough to be considered even sublime

    They be creatin, while most be hatin

    Shoulda know my limitations

    They said it before and I say it again

    know when you're wrong and be a man

    Stop the nonsense my friend, oh shit here it comes

    guess its the end

  • @sunpaintsthesky Very nice! Love the line about being a man. ^.^

  • Free Beats for anyone who wants them no catch just visit my page!!!

  • who am i but did i really forget or did i truly want to know if i truly exist and if my name is still on the guest list and if my work is already finished im underminded and forgotten my symptoms are underlining still deciding if i am living life or if it is part of a great designing cant fight the urge my system's bout to start the purge dont know if i'll emerge or jus slowly submerge into the world that i once knew im still confused soon imma need a fix am i awake or still in the matrix
  • I find it funny how so many people rap on the comments but not on a video of them selfs rapping I mean you never know who might be looking at it. This maybe your one shot to get notice, but you just gotta find out yourselfs.

  • @RedDeadAssassin55 this is kill time activity, i record as well. some people just aren't about throwing themselves out there in an act of desperation on youtube. some are about making sure it's all perfect instead of cutting and pasting slop. and those are the ones who get looked at in the long run.

  • Beat hard

  • As i walk down this lonely road....im thinkin bout the choices i chos in life.....

    dats how u come off this beat

    ..

  • @lolrozie23 'As I walk down this lonely road, I'm thinking about choices i chose in life.' That's how you come off of this beat.

    ^ That's how you type in English.

  • @OhSoPsychoMusic ACTUALLY you are both wrong because "choices I chose" is an example of redundancy, which is grammatically incorrect. IT SHOULD BE "choices I made." come at me bro hahahaha

  • who am i who are you.

    thats the big clue.

    we should be together man i am so confused.

    we can put 1 and 1 together thats makes 2.

    who am i who are you.

    i dont know what to do.

    when i think of you.

    who am i who are you

  • Is there a chance i could use this beat please?

  • i'm ready to take a bullet for my homies while your health will not be steady because my rhymes are heavy and you'll probably die when i'll spit them in a hemi damn it ! i'm not so dope on the mike but i can tell you that you're not so tight so shut the fuck up ! you can't rap but i'll prepare a magical blunt and i'll be so fucking high while you're tryin' to copy Bone Thugs you should give up ! i'm just sayin' that you can't rap (my native language ain't english so .. ye xd )
  • tko sam ja kristijan brate svako mene zna ko si ti pusi ga automatik puca sad ako krenes sve do kraja imas cuku imas jaja vidim ti po ocima da si umetni kriminalac!!AJMO SRBI!!!!!!

  • Its a test 2 express This way dat i feel But as i take a deep breath I realize what is real Then i close my eyes As i try & visualize A seen without surprise But it seems theres only lies In my head im thinking why Why must i even try I feel left out here 2 die & i wonder if i do Will anybody cry Will they remember who i was Or just forget about duh past & move forward with their lives It seems ill never know So time will only tell But pray i go to heaven Cuz im already in hell........

  • @Tristelocko Nice

  • I rap like a great white shark in the dark

    The only thing ya see coming is the bloody scars of the mark

    Just like super man, scratch the bit about clark

    The one that say now, and ninja stars get thrown at ya heart

    Ya might have a degree but the street, you aint smart,

    U look a retart stinking like a week old dead fishes fart.

    Theres no blade as fast or sharp, as my words,

    i like to sit on curbs ryhmin verbs about birds.

    My lyrics aint in packs, they travel in powerful herds,

    Check my vids

  • To The wacked up Cracked up Niggas gettin smacked up

    your On a beef ting like burger king.... back up

    Stacks up Tracks up, lemme get my facts up

    Roll A blunt and hold what you racked up

    Fat cuz, ive always been a killa

    big zoot billa im a dream fore filler

    im a winner ur a sinner and ill munch you like dinna

    tiny b I be a real fucking nigga :)

  • hey bro i can use this beat.

    I will give you the credits

  • @SPM2313 Sure thing :)

  • The shits got deep, in the jeep on the creep, the wolfe after the sheep now they sleep, i hate talk so cheap so i fix it, dog shit on my shoe only way ya live is lick it, do what i do smoke my icky icky to forget it and the wolfe moves on. I am so gone nobody can see me but it dont mean you cant feel me. my lifes a horror movie filming, id like my brains on the ceiling can you do it? get to doin, and thats how i keep movin.

  • Simple simon asses.

    Ha,

  • lets start from this coz this be me im so fucking mad typing on utube jus becoz i ant going

    to the studio im being to lazy tru say i should bcoz i dont get paid like jayz but ive got

    one over on him i have to two babies so i need a ticket out here to much of a cold world to smoking weed n deinking beer look at the fear that i posess finding like a diet to hard to digist so im happy ive been blessed and not ened up in wintess protection wearing bulletproof vests

  • He was her son. The first one. Always under the gun. Never had fun. He'd never weep. Never sleep He was a creep. God had his soul to keep. He had a desease. He couldnt be free Stuck on weed. its sad cuz that kid was me
  • this album's an epic about a guy whose mind is a weapon

    his rhymes are aggressive, and his timin's impressive

    his lines could progress but then the valium suppresses him

    how he addresses his problems is undoubtedly testin him

    and next to his office is the lounge that he's restin in

    except for his doctor the only sound is a resident

    whose resonant voice is houndin and hecklin him

  • around him are pests and hes surrounded by messages

    effectin his rest- so he pounds on his head until what's left of his

    sanity's dead- he shoulda listened to what his family said

    but he didnt- he went and took a bunch of acid instead

    and now he's just starin at a glass, laughin hysterically

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  • all of you are weak, ill take you all with my unique techniques.

  • Who am I?

    I can't pretend,

    but then again, everything I thought was

    comes to an end, so in the end,

    who is really real or not

    am I really ill or not?

    am i terminal, maybe i'm remedial?

    Come with every diss you got.

    I won't sweat the disrespect, cuz I know you're super cereal.

  • yo yo yo shut the fuckup

  • I like it, could be played in a Sillent Hill game.

  • wow this beat brings alot of death raps out of people.

  • who am i wat am i here just another answer never uncovered i wonder if i will ever live again its unpeacful world n everything is a sin dont see why i should go on for no reason im pleadin wantin to go been in this struggle to long cant hold on the easy way out aint seemin so cold

  • story of my life no shorty no wife/got a loaded 40cal n im ready 2 die 2nite/my mind aint right so im sippin on dat hennessy/mix it with a little hypnotic..now thats the remedy/im tired of this fuckin grind suicides been on my mind drunk lookin in the mirror like who the fuck am i/livin without a purpose my life is fuckin worthless/livin in hell what did i do 2 deserve this/nothin seems 2 go my way prayin 2 the lord that ill die 2day/hate my pops 4 leavin/lost a couple homies n im still grievin/

  • i spit flamenigga so be ready to burn, nightmare you neva seen when you make the wrong turn,so you might wanna learn to watch where ya drive, next time you just might not make it out alive, but chances come and go as do people, so we cheer for the love frown upon evil. but not me im a devil seeker searchin for the hate, stirin up all disater the seeking out a bigger plate, cant tame a monster let alone a beast, call peopl eater and im ready for my feast

  • sounds greek mate

  • I'm on the phone arranging your death like BT

    Pushed me too far I'l send you home like ET

    The murders on the TV your never gonna find me easy

    Passport on the side, Villa bought in Italy

    My minds clearer than It's ever been, I'm classed as crazy?

    Because I ignore laws and morales and do what comes naturally?

    I'm human, not into slavery, problem is that you get envy

    When you meet a guy who can't and won't be controlled freely

    And your the ones trapped in your governments brainwashed society

  • Hey bro, I produce as well if you could check out some of my videos it would be great.

  • till you head is knawed off ill drop boms and spit venom as long as you hard off/ bitch you aint hard your beyond soft/called upon to polish knobs and swallow cock till it falls off/bitch i aint never fallin off/ bitch im soo sick i was diagnosed with a cough/doctor said it was prolly from bitchin poppin off and me having to check them/ them bitches i wrecked em/ put my whole scepter right in his rectum/exceptions for none cause im done with these infections

  • at 0:01 (talking) ok look i dont know what you been hearin about me but im just here to set a few things straight so shut up and listen........

    (rapping)

    yo.... i dont care what you say about me i doubt you will bounce me and ride me or wtv/ your rhymes gotta be more clever if you wanna battle me cause me losing to some pussy on youtube shit thatll be the day that my nuts turn blue and fall off till then ill spit my jaws off come at you with the sawed off

  • work the flow try to match the show

    for the beats can be justified by a rappin soul!,lock ur eye balls read this as CAPITA!

    spot rhymes like decimals the priciple here is stop right wen u choke lyrical! or wrote pretty much, but the consequence kills the subliminal brings out the pain even if minimal! sick of strange syllables i wrote rhyme scrap'ol biblical when jesus took a mic n spat some'ol historical....

  • I like this beat i got a rap 2 it :)

  • picturing hopsin's song "I Am Raw" fits perfectly with this song...starting from the beginning of the vid up until 4:00

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  • is it free to use?

  • yo i hide in the dark waiting to devour u like a shark thumbs up bitchs for the masterpiece ending haha

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  • Il mio nome è Arnese, e non voglio casini,

    Vivo nella pace fra i palazzi e i giardini,

    Con i miei amici fumiamo diciotto spini,

    E poi collassiamo ridendo come bambini,

    Non guardo la TV, preferisco la natura,

    Mi godo una bella giornata e non ho paura,

    Queste barre le scrive per combattere la dittatura,

    Che affligge i giorni nostri, costi quel che costi,

    Tu non mi sposti, io sono CONTROCULTURA!

  • Hey man, I read your bio, maybe I got it condused, but it said you were from LA? I am too man, Anyways, I was thinking that maybe we can partner up? Maybe I can use your beats for non-profit, and I promote you? Something like that, Cause your beats are dope, and I think they fit my style better than any other youtube prducer ive hear, Thanks for reading.

    Let me know if we can work a deal out. Thanks again

    -Evoke

  • @MOOKIEMUZIC You should have rapped this comment out, so it would make him want to produce you more. .

  • @MeProductionsJL HAHA. yea, Good idea, but I misspelled a lot on the comment.

  • My words are a deadly powerful weapon. As long as Im around you will always be second. God chooses me like a natural selection. People like you are just adding to the infection. A virus, and I am the injection. A cure to al of the world's imperfections. Taking names and trophies for my collection. A forever morphing ocean coaching all the broken. A motion so cold and unspoken it closes all the open.

  • could I use this beautiful song?

    

  • 21sec- ima phenom need my feet massaged, lookin like god floatin up above in my cloud lodge, mothafuckas try and touch this im some other substance bubble up and trouble kids, in their dreams seeing things cuz of me im fucking insane, drain out ur blood and scratch out ur name, boi u kno wat it is crispy always the same snap ya neck and frame get back ya lame. as i rocket off to my loft in the realm of hell where i dwell and smell like that reefer ima big heefer compiler call me magivar
  • 5 people can't hear

  • 1

    im right here falling a sleep, i dont realy know myself,

    what am i to be? will a fail or will i be a human being,

    will my dreams tell my destiny, or will i just walk

    wherever the road takes me, will i be living a good life

    or will i end up a lonely guy, or will my girl find me befor

    i give up and drown in my tears, so many questions, but

    so many things that cant be explained, cause im not realy

    the correct man, define me as the UnkownPiece

  • 2

    u dont realy know me, but im here to write down my story,

    middle of night with all theese mirrors, looking at myself

    all night, trying to write down my life story, cant judge

    myself, cant put this bar for me to cross by myself, cant

    seem to get anythingh right, unkown in this world is what i

    wish to be, i dont wanna be no biggie, i just want my

    normal life, but still i ask myself, who am i to be,

    why cant i be like others and have an amazing dream,

  • i wanaa use this if you dont mind youll get all the credit for the beat

  • Awesome beat

  • I am the god with the devil on his shoulder, I am the game as well as the game over, I am the creator, you are the beholder, I'm the fire maker in a world gettin colder, I am the general, I am the soldier, a cold waistline for a .38 holster, I am the shooter, I am the reloader, I am the future fortune teller shoulda told ya, I'm an individual, I am a loner, slavin for this industry, not me i'm it's owner

  • @eazy843 eazy you better calm that ass down/you gaspen for air but you 6 feet under ground/but you know you lost and never found/you say you got a .38 but never busted off a round/got your mom screaming on all fours cause im going to town/cops think they got a lead so they searching with blood hounds/as my scope fallows them my heart pounds/ they are undiging your body so i bust off 158 rounds/now they all laying on the ground screaming in pain/so i put this heroin needle in my vain/

  • @bmirish33 come correct, fore you leave here with less respect, I'm a nightmare beware fore beds get wet, before you wake with sweats, before you live with regrets, before you touch the wrong nerve and then you get the reflex, be the next one to get dumbed down and checked, now go reflect son, upon the words you said, forget the beatdown, think bout what you learned instead, leave the loss take the knowledge that you earned instead

  • @eazy843 Thats dope

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  • nigga u may aswell be an organ donor, hip-hop needs us we cuz we know her, the mainstream a bitch and well show her, to music, man we owe her, u from the underground, im from the over, this beat is a hunters sound, we capture chapters as the dopest rhyme holders, we youngins just growin older, mention creation613? ill man it must be...

  • @creation613 it's a cipher, jump on in i invite ya, ghostwriters on the wigi board to fright night ya, I lay the lines out just to entice ya, let a fish bite i guarantee you fish i'mma fry ya, fire with fire, bar for bar, I'mma go hard collect my scars then recharge, sweet cards I'm just workin with the hand I was dealt, sweethearts put their hands in my hand n they melt, what can I say I'm finesse at it's finest, in the lead with the best and the rest are behind us

  • WHO I AM, WOW, I ASKED THAT A LONG TIME, I ONCE KNEW THE ANSWER, BACK IN MY PRIME I WAS KING, NOBODY MESSED WITH ME, I WAS THE MAN, KING OF THE STREETS THEN I WAS SHOT, THAT WAS A WAKE UP CALL, MABYE IM NOT SO BIG AND BAD AFTER ALL NOW IM A NOBODY, ASKING FOR CHANGE, SCINCE THAT DAY MY LIFES NEVER BEEN THE SAME I HAD MY CHANCE, I LET IT SLIP, YOU STILL HAVE ONE, NO GO, GO GET IT........
  • I'm not a man , I'm about a thousand grams of coke, these aren't lyrics, these are complex plans I wrote, to leave the world choked up, puttin my hands to throats, through speakers, got em all sayin damn he's dope, I grew up sayin, damn my whole family's broke, rich folks on tv holdin up grammys so, when they asked me in school, what I wanted to be, doc, cop, or astronaut I said I wanna emcee, I wanna, hold a mic, move the crowd, do this hip hop thing right n make music proud

    -EAZY843

  • Anyone need a song writer??!?!? Im pree good at it, if you need just questions then inbox me im good at advice with rapping, within im only 14 myself :) Inbox me up guys

  • Hey man, can I use this beat for non-profit. I will release it here on utube, but not for profits.

  • @TheXpaladin I will also give u all the credit.

  • Great , what VST are you using and where do you got your great drums from ?

  • FUCKIN ILL!!!!!!! I SO WANNA SPIT TO THIS MAN!!1 BELIEVE ME IF SPIT TO THIS I WILL SHOUT YOU OUT, I WILL GIVE YOU ALL THE CREDIT!!!(THATS IF IT OK WITH YOU ANYWAY)

  • I need someone to write lyrics for me, not just for this instrumental but MANY others, any takers?? if so this is how it will work ill send you the instrumentals and then you'll write me lyrics and ill do the song and give you full credit for the lyrics (= i have a good voice but am not able to write my own songs smh.....so i would very much appreciate it #im going to make this dream, reality<3 contact me on my page...... please somebody help me!? i sing/rap thank you :)

  • i came to bring pain, cant you tell how my thing swing, float like a butterfly but i bet the thing sting, no matter how many of them pretty girl you got i say bring, i just want to marinade, and sarinade all day, then when night come i just want to i just want to lay, no play, u just bring, i say stay or go way, she just come to my door, ring, i scream magic word? and she better say sing ok? and then i take her to my bed, and thats enough said.

  • weed smoke in the air, im so high i go chinese eye, ching chong, as i take a big puff of the bong, i sing song about the ting, so high i tink dat i sing wrong, while i wonder why nobody love me, i get my bling on, wit hat to da side, call me a king, so many fat girls, my phone be gettin ring on, we should have fling, or get married, and have a kid name bing,or if its a girl name ling. wonder why they think im so lame i do the dang ting, let my flat girls belly dance to this, i make rain,ch ching

  • SHUT UP

  • I guess I’m better off running Not knowing where this cruel world takes me I hope I awake from this dream called life Hopefully remake my story again Shake off and take what’s rightfully mine Intertwine and find happiness Cause life goes on and thankfully I'm still alive I will revive my soul my goal is to be the best Ready for any test My past has showed me how to live again Life goes on there’s always a plane coming back To direct us to the right track Fighting off demon attacks
  • THANK YOU ALL FOR WRITING DOWN THE LYRICS NOW IM GONNA STEAL THEM ALL WITH NO HESITATIONS...........

  • @fixmybrokencondom Because after all, stealing is an art, too.

  • @fixmybrokencondom Except they aren't good enough to use.

  • @fixmybrokencondom hense why i wont write lyrics on here lol coz then you go to another tune and there they are lol

  • @fixmybrokencondom then watch them take you to court and show proof of you stealing their lyrics then you will be poorer then before you got rich lmao

  • @fixmybrokencondom the one's with enough skill for you to even consider taking their lyrics in the first place can do this shit all day. I got verses all over youtube. flatter me.

  • @eazy843 yeah no shit this dude is just hurttin lol i dont care if people steal my shit cause im just gonna keep progressivly gettin better anyways so the shit i drop today isnt gonna be as good as the shit i drop tommorow anyways and the really good shit i keep and record so steal the shit and get rich off it then ill know that im that much doper then everyone else cause my good shit made it and the shit i gave away made it soo fuck it

  • @Jmoneypsc exactly, a painter always paints and this shit is art.

  • @fixmybrokencondom dont do it, theyre shit anyway boss

  • @fixmybrokencondom Anyone who valued their lyrics wouldn't put that shit on youtube without recording or copyrighting.

  • @fixmybrokencondom  ur goonna steal them whack ass rhymes, good luck with that

  • @fixmybrokencondom lmfaoooooooo

  • @fixmybrokencondom

    LMAO!!!!!

  • @fixmybrokencondom <---- should be president of the world

  • @fixmybrokencondom ur stupid.Cant u b creative and make ur own? lol

  • @BabyGirlz2000 well if someone writes them for him, why should he? {or she} lmao :P

  • @fixmybrokencondom haha fuck YOU

    man thats not COOL U NEED TO ASK THEM

  • @fixmybrokencondom No hesitations, born steal this i dont really care cause im simply Masturbat'in , why u hat'in, what you remind me of a crook name Sudan Huse'in please stop play'in cause nigga you look like an afro john mad'in you still wont get no were so stop play'in

  • Just some daft bars off top of my head.

    I'm pinging like pong my life's song beats to the sound of a gong.

    The Oriental people sing along I'm writing the lyrics up with wong.

    Using the Buddah as my bong smoking all day chong after chong.

    Giving all the Asian girls a taste of my tongue all night long.

    I prowl the streets of Hong Kong as if I'm hiding out in Viet Cong.

    Flashing the school girls give them a glimpse of my shlong.

    It's 14 inch long ask the girls if you think I'm wrong.

  • hey can i use this beat for a rap and put it as a response

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  • find me man for we are both lost in this world waer we are the monsters that they all fear for if we where to become the men we wish to the we would bring the end the crap .for we have hearts that care about the world more the n are selves and that is we would show them what they the have become for we are those that seek truth.

  • Erinnert mich ein wenig an Silent Hill ^^

  • with my face paint on i hit the night

    not knowin everythings gonna be alrite

    once down the road

    i pull out my bud already rolled

    i start puff puffin away

    cause someone called me a freak today

  • who i am is who i want to be who i am is a weido or a freak but who cares surely not me being a weirdo is to be different see so to others being different is a freakish nature to me it makes it easy for me to be identified by others to see me out of the crowd so who i am i am proud i must let you know i am me not you so stay out of my life and keep your mouth closed from discriminating me for not being you and being like me i am who i am so you can just deul with that
  • This is epic...Someone hand me some lyrics to this so I can rap -3-

  • @MomentoiyaHalfDragon JtoTheK1000 put up some did u not see that?

  • i could see nate dogg on this.. R.I.P

  • If Dansonnbeats and Redhooknoodles got a collabo goin, we'd be in for some real ish!

  • lets talk about reprasent no doubt its obiously of then i get bent im very permanet, hardly seems like a intoxicant sent to prevent, haha monopoly is my intent, down with the m the elatant now thats the sound of the dinaclue chant.

    you talk about bodies but yet you will not kill an ant well my skill is amp pelling it like a stamp now check callaba is of excallaba now you be damn

  • its always sad to see the same syllables used/tearin up because i feel its always abused/the bad the bleak the bantered and all the confused/it cant be hampered tampered or even defused/people cue the clues for all of their views, but they beat around the bush like they lookin for shoes/its funny till the duece duece gets to poppin too/the dumbest bum the youngest toungues spittin the truth/blockin words that are bein spoken from the youth/who are they to pick and choose what is on the news

  • Ait tell me why its so hard to go and be yourself,why you always gota go off the opinions of someone else,well let me tell you something,were made an original don't become a copy,cuz once you go down that road there ain't no stopping,the change that's destined to be,this is why i always stuck to the real juggalo family, not them posers tryin to be somebody else,i accept that im different im crazy nd i need help, nd after that i know im on my own,but its ok cuz our destiny ain't carved in stone

  • i can use beat?

  • why was i cursed but at the same time, blessed to berserk and cause all this hurt, i lurk the shadows at night, keeping up the fight against my own mind i gotta keep tryin but at times i wanna just die an.. dissapear like the moon behind the clouds sorry i couldnt make you proud but i gotta spit this loud life is hard, living the voices my mind gone rogue, thats why i walk this road alone
  • Who am I?! Im a cheat Imma whore,

    I was once in love but I dont care no more,

    Feet on the ground wishin I could soar,

    My foundation is sore because life is a chore,

    My heads in the clouds but my soul's on the floor,

    Pockets full of shit and my bank is poor,

    The streets are my life you can call it curblore,

    Storm is coming tonight so the rain will pour.

  • when shit happens whats done is done

    no bother tryna fix the past cause karma has already won

    fly though life as if your the only one

    live life as if you only hav one.. day to live

    make your life count cause life is great.. to be alive

    and well.. fight every second to live

    cause the reaper will come and it will be a struggle between everyone

    struggle that you can fight and over come..

  • who am I you say? I'm just one man with a split heart. trying to find my purpose. why do i go on you say? because I think it'll eventually get better. yeah my life gets sweet and nice, but afterwards it get shitty and goes downhill, I don't know what else to do, so i just carry on. what is this worth? I don't know, I ask the same question to myself, i'm not genious so don't ask me, I just keep on moving until i can't take it no more, I just fight and fight and fight.

  • @kuger34 really? i hope thats not a rap and just a comment cause thats fucking shit

  • @worshipthewitch666 no, it's not a rap, it's poetry, I can't rap worth shit, but yeah it's poetry.

  • Who I am/ Is different than who you are/ Otherwise, I wouldn't what I am/ And you wouldn't be what you are/ If we were similar, what would be the point?/ Clonin us with no imagination, like a joint/ All the same on the outside/ But inside/ Different components are used/ Depending on who has perused/ The mixture of the substance before you/ Wrapped in simple paper, but even so/ Each is different from the next/ Life is a blunt, don't forget to smoke it.
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  • many of us know that feeling, feeling weak, theres no fast healing, i hold out my hand since i hear you appealing- unite - and with these problems we can start dealing,  i always feel like on on my own, walking these streets my only company- beats from my phone, in a corner laying bars to get me in the zone, thats when my mind starts to roam, and i really feel at home. asking for help doesnt do any harm i offer respect and friendship, just grip my palm.

  • had a conversation with myself the other night/ I was thinkin could it be this fucking high?/ nah I aint really tripping, im hearing my conscience speakin/ all the words he saying and the info that he be leakin/ I sometimes question myslef, who am I speaking to? is it really me? or you know who/ its kind of scary the thoughts that are clogging up my brain/ like go insane, leave them niggas in stains/ terrorize the rap game/ all you get diminished!

  • continued-so leave me be before you enter the belly of the beast

    it's cold in the streets where the screams and cries never cease

    falling to your knees praying "oh lord, please"

    ain't got money to get your kids something to eat

    walking for days, with blood blisters on their feet

    holding on, till there's nothing left, "SMACK" hit the concrete

  • Who am I? I'm a simple man on the road this raps my life just looking for a place to go A place of my own, a place i can call home cause I'm sick of living in my twisted serial killer dome I'm moving on time to throw it and forget the past Cause i do what i do i ain't got no class fuck your doubts and what you said you can't take it back stick your sorry's in a sack and shove em' right up your ass Hell yeah,I smoke that icky stick smelling grass it helps me not haul ur body off with the trash
  • WHY ARE PEOPLE MAKING LYRICS TO THIS IT'S LIKE IF THEY MADE LYRICS TO ZELDA MUSI...FUCKING SHIT!!!!

  • this is who i am/ holdin out my hands/ to the man in the sky/ but he dusnt give a fuck/ now im liftin up/i feel like im fadin/so im sprayin and slayin/all thes other mcs til they decayin/betrayin those who betrayed me/shuldnt never made me/this crazy/baby/ alone in this world where every1hates me/ cuz i wont stop/ wont drop/ almost lost my life in that parking lot/but i swear everything iv been thru/ that iv always been true/ been glued/ to this game since birth/ cursed/ to spit da sikest verse/

  • who am i just i another face in the sky. loving my lyrics motherfuckers even try spy. im the fucking greatest. bring even the bravest. ill fucking tear them up just like a fucking stub. you aint shit. motherfuckers cant be claiming shit. when you feel the shit i spit youd be like who he hit. sit- ting on the top of my throne i am the king of the underground send a text through your phone and let all these motherfuckers know that i just left your face like woah..

    you like it?

  • damn this beat is sick making me wanna vomit surely i can make better raps that the two top comments, aint talkin shit, think i should just quit, get educated and come back in this bitch all manipulated a product of the system....but all these other people just dont listen, working in secrecy nowadays we overthink everything and think its a conspiracy overcomplicate the simple and the simple we dont even pay attention to...cuz those are the poeople that should be becoming you...

  • Hey everyone i just did a goodbye song to my girl on a danson beat. everyone check it out and see what you think. Thankyouuu

  • mind if i use this

  • if you like hearing rap about depression and dark times, check out my channel.

    ps. Subbed.

  • I'm glad you don't have a stupid computer voice playing throughout your beat (Noodles). For that reason I love you man, keep up the good work!

  • Who Am I? Proly the best question out there. Thinkin so hard that you stress and lose all your hair. And you can't man up to look at the man inside the mirror. Won't recognize shit, even when that shit is appears. But when the problems arise, is when you disappear. I've been telling em my whole life that you wasn't there. But when you returned All you got was hugs and a lot of cheers. While I sat in my room, eyeballs filled up with a lot of tears. Cuz u didn't fill up their nights w/ alot fear.
  • HEY CHECK OUT MY RAVE / TRANCE MUSIC.

    - JOEL AVALO

    - JOEL AVALO

    - JOEL AVALO

  • plz dont leave ur the only one who inspirers me i love you jus like u love me? i still walk around a night wishing you were wil me! you never left my heart your the only thing that keeps it going and u leave me not knowing if your gona show up or leave me crying my tears that fall for you, all i want to do is be with you and u cant be with a fuck up.

  • @ArizzlE786 I already have them as lyrics on one of my tracks, evil inside me, you can check it out if you want, other wise i would of said yes

  • @everyone

    Try to do something better then pre-school ok. shit anymore is just bogus

  • I love your song.. They just dont need any words, music speaks for him self :)

  • How do you grow up when you're always put down,

    a shook frown that needed fixing but took hours,

    my look now is still not a hood crown,

    but a good smile strengthened by a good power,

    A bloomed flower the essence could fool cowards,

    explosive energy just like the 2 towers,

    like they went and filled my mouth with black powder

    I'll be the reason you need to call jack bauer

  • Start on the :11 second

    I am who I am but everyone like my brands. Halla past the shores and forever give up to them codes, never cheated just enjoyed getting beatten all the way past the clones

  • ngb001 is better then dansonn and noodles

  • :@ Its sold Arrrrgggggg

  • hehe this is not sad :P love it bro .peace

  • Great work. :)

  • Why must i be the one who always suffers defeat

    This is an answer that i constantly seek

    I am truly sick of getting verbally beat

    Sick of being the one who looks like a freak

    Keeping my head low i walk down the street

    ...Tryin to figure out whats wrong with being unique

    Why cant my life be simple and sweet

    But instead my esteem is constantly weak

    Is anyone there to take my hand and help me

  • @JtoTheK1000 "Cause it feels so empty without me!"

    =D?

    Sorry, I had to man. Your lines were awesome but they just screamed "eminem joke" at me so I had to make one. But dude, no hate on you. Just a chance to be dumb. XD

  • @Codeafo1 haha yea i could actually hear it that way to lol its funny im the next white boy rapper whoohoo haha

  • @JtoTheK1000 nice barz bro :) keep it up regardless! peace

  • @streetstaruk thanks man :)

  • @JtoTheK1000 eh?!

  • @edysonmacho eh?! eh what?! lol

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  • @JtoTheK1000 Damn... that made me kinda sad. and by kinda...i mean depressed.

  • @MULTINASTYZ Yea i know what you mean, i wrote a whole song, the lyrics are rather depressing for sure