You doing alright!!!! And who ever said that and child born in the sticks of Smithfield or Suffolk (I'm from Suffolk) could never be nothing!!! This is a very nice 3rd person/character poem... I'd like to see you scratch the part at the end about yourself and become your mother... Not just her words, but her tone, her style, her mannerisms - when a poet takes the stage and transform themself into someone else - thats impressive... After all - How hard is it being you???
very nice...and she is beautiful which really makes you listen to her words
amielle1984 2 months ago
the back and forth between color and black and white is overwhelmingly distracting. coudnt listen properly nor enjoy the piece really. shame.
alwaysthetomboy 2 months ago
Drop a gem on em sabrina nice
bigridd 1 year ago
You doing alright!!!! And who ever said that and child born in the sticks of Smithfield or Suffolk (I'm from Suffolk) could never be nothing!!! This is a very nice 3rd person/character poem... I'd like to see you scratch the part at the end about yourself and become your mother... Not just her words, but her tone, her style, her mannerisms - when a poet takes the stage and transform themself into someone else - thats impressive... After all - How hard is it being you???
poetnathan 3 years ago